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Reviews for Heart-Shaped Box

By : JazzyBell
  • From ANON - Amrun on December 12, 2012
    Just wanted to say the last anon review was by me, Amrun, both in here and ffn. Didn't mean for it to be anon.
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 12, 2012
    This story is sick on so many levels. Yet, I enjoyed reading it for the fucked up Lolita-sequence thing it is.

    You have made Kakashi SO creepy. It really does remind me of Lolita, how he thought of her at the auction like she was trying to be alluring or something. I really loved that chapter because it really skeeved me out and made me uncomfortable.

    Parts of the sex chapter and after sex chapter I didn't like as much because his reaction was too extreme. I put the sexual things to the jutsu -- which was a fabulous idea -- but the thing afterwards where he wanted to be the only man didn't make sense to me at all. It just seems like he would never have that reaction or that thought.

    I liked how the sex ended, how he realized what he was doing and ran away. His thoughts about the Madam were good as well,"; his reason for denying her was good and not kitschy.

    A lot of KakaSaku hides in the older ages, so I like this story purely for its balls, though the chances of some pedo actually fapping to it seems too high for my tastes.

    I look forward to the rest.
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  • From sundance1989 on December 11, 2012
    great chapter update soon
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  • From MisatosPenPen on December 10, 2012
    Kakashi better get his pale ass back in there! What's he been doing for 23 days! He better be saving other youngs from this woman or something!
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  • From scriptease on December 07, 2012
    Hey, that was an okay chapter, pretty short though, and not a lot went on. You ended the chapter just as things were beginning to get interesting. :P
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  • From ANON - Kyosama on December 07, 2012
    That was short!!
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  • From MisatosPenPen on December 07, 2012
    Pakkun, way to make him feel worse. If I were Kakashi I would have slammed that door so hard half the wall would be gone. Great, I can't wait for more!
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  • From ANON - O_o on December 06, 2012
    23 days!!! Update please! I need to know what's going to happen! Please!!!
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  • From sundance1989 on October 06, 2012
    great chapter wonder what will happen since he left? update soon please
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  • From ANON - Kyosama on October 01, 2012
    Hey! when the next chapt comes out?
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  • From ANON - Lynx on September 23, 2012
    Oh Kakashi us being so mean, but Sakura kinda deserved it. I hope you update soon. And lengthen your chapters a bit?
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  • From MisatosPenPen on September 23, 2012
    Oh, I loved that! Poor, poor Kakashi. You captured the estacsy and emotional pain wonderfully! I've been waiting for this and now I'm hunger than Kakashi for a second round. Update soon, please!
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  • From ANON - Trinity on September 23, 2012
    I really like the story, but i dont like the idea to wait too much for other chapter!. Please hurry and thanks for being good author!
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  • From ANON - lulu000 on September 20, 2012
    Please continue!
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  • From ANON - Awesome on September 14, 2012
    What an intriguing story! Interesting plot. I had butterfly's raging war in my stomach those last to chapters. I feel a little bad for young Sakura, but she agreed. And poor Kakashi but damn I would love to be Sakura. I am smitting with your writing and story line! I hope you update soon with lemony goodness!
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