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Reviews for New World Order

By : AvangalineHazel
  • From ANON - wowgoshdarnit on June 24, 2012
    CONTINUE THIS PLEASE. OMG I LOVE IT!!!!!!!
    If you need a beta or ANY type of help, I can be of assistance.
    I've fallen in love with stories before, but this is fucking fantastic and I feel IDK different about it. Aha, I hope that makes sense.
    I'm not registered on here, but I am on FF.net, so you can find me there.
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  • From smint45 on April 14, 2012
    I just read this again and I must say again how amazing this story is!!!!! I adore it!!! And I hope you will update very soon!!! See you agian!!!
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  • From ANON - thereader on March 27, 2012
    please update! this is great and i can't wait til chapter two!!
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  • From moodysavage on March 11, 2012
    omgosh! that was amazing!!! at first there was all that description of the energy disasters and I was afraid that this world would take a lot of explaining and might end up being too technical to enjoy... but that...was... awesome!!! I loved that peek into Sasuke's personality that we got from the guards and I love that the Uchiha's are a powerful family. And hunters with weapons... that makes for a hot Sasuke lol. And I like that he's aware of Naruto being broken and that he wasn't a slave until now... that will make him less subservient which is what Sasuke needs. I am so going to love this story :)
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  • From Carousel on March 11, 2012
    I absolutely loved this. It was so amazing and I really want more. Please add more~
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  • From GudenMulle on March 10, 2012
    I'm extremely curious about this story. Really looking forward to the next chapter! I wonder how you've written Itachi and the rest of the Uchihas. And the way you described Sasuke's mask I immediately had an image in my head of Kakashi wearing one.. Will he be a hunter as well?
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  • From scarywoman on March 09, 2012
    the story itself is well paced. sasuke is in character, but naruto did feel a little out until the end, when he decided to go with sasuke. the only real problem was your use of first person vs second and third. there were places when they were not used corectly. most specificly when naruto and sasuke were escaping through the croud. other then that it was a good read. i liked how you used what happend in tokyo, but why are you using australia as the place for this story? is it because you are from there?
    well i cant wait to see how this story will go. i will be looking for updates so please do it soon
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  • From ANON - Aki on March 09, 2012
    ^^ looking forward for the next chappie
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  • From smint45 on March 09, 2012
    Oh wow this stpry is just amazing!!!! I totally love it!!! This futuristic world you created seems so real, just like I imagine the world too be when a nuclear catastroph happens!!!! You really have me hooked here^^ This story has advanced with just the first chappy to my favorite!!! I really hope that you will continue and post the next chappie soon!!!! I can't wait to see where this intriguing story will lead and what will happen one Naruto enters the house and meets the rest of the family!!! And I really can't wait to discover what Sasuke is hunting^^ I really love the way you discribed the historic happenings and the detailed view you give us of Narutos and Sasukes personalities^^ It is really an amazing start for a story!!! See you again soon!!!
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  • From Stacy on March 09, 2012
    WoW! That's a really interesting story line. I like it.....a lot!! Can't wait to read more and meet Itachi! Will Kisame make an appearance?
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  • From ANON - Tawana Welch on March 09, 2012
    Oh yeah, this is going to be an amazing story that'll probably make me cry. I can't wait for the next chapter.:)
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  • From savannah19742001 on March 09, 2012
    I am very interested in this story and I can't wait to read about Naruto's first day as Sasuke's slave.
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