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By : mannahpierce
  • From ANON - SunaoTsuji on September 21, 2012
    chapter 1-11. Wow! Considering that the content of the story was written with a PG rating, it is beautifully written. Love how the story flowed and kept the reader reading. Wonderful and superb.
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  • From ANON - eilidhdawn on April 20, 2012
    how cool
    keep up the great writing
    looking forward to more
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  • From ANON - Aingyl on March 30, 2012
    I think I reviewed once before on the main story, but I have to again. Your stories are amazing. The more I read, the more in love with your characters I am. I may end up having to read the entire series through all over again, that's how much I love it.

    The universe they're in is so rich and fleshed out, it's insane. It really is. Your version of Shikamaru is the most heartbreaking and compelling, for me, and Shika has never been one of my favorite characters before. Even the plight of the hybrids doesn't get me like the concept of a genuis so far removed from the common people that stability is a miracle and healthy relationships are practically a fairy tale.

    I've read a LOT of fanfic and I can honestly say that out of everything I've ever read, yours is the first that has ever followed me into my friggin' dreams. I'm beyond excited for the next installment and hope that the story has started coming a little easier, so I can get it sooner xD I can wait if I have to, though.


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  • From ANON - The_Horseman_Of_Death on March 10, 2012
    Thankyou mannah for making this idea a reality, I look forward to reading more from you in the future, you took a rough idea of mine and made a diamond nobody could have done this better than you. Your friend Death
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  • From ANON - richon on February 06, 2012
    ohoho no it's alredy finish !! but leadre will come soon. I am really looking forward your new story, i really love your work. I am so sad to know all your work was weap out but i hope they will be poste soon again but i regulary red them !! love your work thank you !!
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  • From bloodshound on February 02, 2012
    oh, awesome! Sai is going to be a major player i can see this now. And Klenn's gift, fantastic, just fantastic. I really loved this little foray into the kids world. It was completely fascinating. ty for bringing it to us.
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  • From ANON - Arwen on February 02, 2012
    Thank you for writing this amazing story! It keeps me coming back for more and I am really looking forward to see what will happen to Haru next.

    You are a very talented author! Normally, I am not that interested in SciFi stories, but the world you created is intriguing.

    Good luck for writing 'Leader'!
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  • From ANON - angelj232000 on February 01, 2012
    This was such a good side story. Can't wait for Leaders, I will be eagerly awaiting it. I will miss this universe while you are getting ready to release Leaders. Keep up the awesome work!!!! HUGS!!!
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  • From ANON - Dawn on February 01, 2012
    whew.. that was a close call for Sai!! LOL So Imma taking it he a nice guy!! Very nice... a bit fast but good!! Thank you!!! See ya next chappy!!!
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  • From roro237 on February 01, 2012
    Thank you for the great adventures! I'll read you in April:) Of course I'm hoping sooner ^_^
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  • From YamanashiOchinashiIminashi on February 01, 2012
    OMG your chapter did this wall-to-wall thing. Mine did it too. You need to copy them to txt and then back to AFF.... It's a pain, I know...

    That chapter and ending was great! It was so cool that you managed to keep it at the stage where it is not resolving the case. Sai will survive and Klenn is ... amazing. I hope that "The Leader" doesn't start with him dead... I would miss him so much. And who will be the Leader? Does the title refer to Sasuke or one of the children? ... I can't believe I will have to wait untill April to find out....

    I don't know what to say at the end...
    I guess the most important is that I love your writing . It's great and addictive. I can't wait for more. When you informed me about this story being 'in the making' I had no idea that it will suck me in too. I thought it would be something that I will have to read on the side. But it was surprisingly engrosing.
    I really loved it.
    As always THANK YOU VERY VERY MUCH for sharing the story and for always continuing, without fail, for updating so regularry and so often!
    You are my favorite ff writer! and I hope you'll never stop creating those new worlds, chaaracters and stories.
    Keep going! We can't wait for the Leader!!!
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  • From ANON - angelj232000 on January 31, 2012
    I am really enjoying where this story is going. I hope they tell Shika & Sasuke about Sai. It very hard to lie to those you care about. Keep up the awesome work. HUGS!!!
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  • From YamanashiOchinashiIminashi on January 30, 2012
    Oh damn it! A clifhanger? Seriously? I didn't expect that... Now I'm curious! Ka-chan has some plan with Ran... I hope it's something smart... I hope they will finally take the weight of this whole situation from poor Haru's shoulders...

    Next chapter is the last one, right? Too bad. I will misss it. On the ither hand this situation is stressing so it's good it will be over. I strongly believe that it only looks dangerous and scary in Haru's young mind. I think that he exgerates and makes it look like a monster in your closet that turnes out to be some abandoned piece of clothes... I hope it's just that. It's very interesting from his point of view but I hope it will turn outto be ... nothing scary.

    Well, now I just have to wait till Wednesday...

    THANK YOU for the update and for every moment Naruto and Kazuki appear.
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  • From bloodshound on January 29, 2012
    this chappie had me in tears... Haru just isn't made to carry a load like that by himself and now he doesn't have to. i wonder if he should tell klenn. I have a feeling sai is going to play a major part in things in the future.
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  • From ANON - Lonelylulaby on January 29, 2012
    Haru needs to tell an adult and not hold all tis important info. Im glad that he has a friend like Ran because he's his conscience. This little story is almost over :( guess that means the big mamma is on the way. Oh man Sai is a character and I can't wait till he is introduced to the rest of the family. Wonder if Shika will be able to make him a body to walk around in or if he can hack planets. Too cool

    Ja ne till next time and keep up the good work
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