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  • From GreenEyedCat on January 29, 2012
    Why didn't he confess to Naruto?! :-(
    But I like the way the three boys are acting :-)
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  • From ANON - Dawn on January 28, 2012
    Poor Haru!!! Such stress!!! :( Lets hope it all works out eh? Lovely chappy!! brought a tear to my eye!! :) Great Job to all!
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  • From roro237 on January 28, 2012
    I'm glad that Ha-chan can't lie to Ran. I'm so impressed with Ka-chan he's a very smart boy with friskier:) He always seen so hyper. No not hyper speedy is the word I was looking for:) To-chan wonderful as always. Thank you I enjoyed this 'Secret' very much ^_^
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  • From cynaga on January 28, 2012
    [ch 10] *big smile*
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  • From ladybird425 on January 28, 2012
    Amazing chapters! Poor, poor Haru - feeling so stressed out over this and even having a falling out with Ran. Ah, I adore him
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  • From ANON - Kyle on January 28, 2012
    Uff, been sick so I've not been reading/reviewing but NOW I RETURN
    I love how you write Haru.
    You have a really good grasp of how kids think and you're very good at combining that with intelligence whilst still keeping him kidlike.

    Also I claim I only got teary 'cause I'm siiick.
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  • From bloodshound on January 26, 2012
    good grief, what a mess. does it count as creating artificial intelligence if you do it by accident... and their were two of you involved who had no interaction with or discussion about the other persons ideas? Probably to central yes. Central sounds like a rotten place to live. Sai is a most fascinating being though.
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  • From Prism0467 on January 25, 2012
    You have a gift. That's all I can say. :)
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  • From ANON - Dawn on January 25, 2012
    Loved it!!! I really hope Sai is a good thing... but I almost feel something is gonna happen...? LOL Waiting for the next chappy! :) Thank you!

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  • From roro237 on January 25, 2012
    A type genius or not Ha-chan is still a kid and I can just imagine how that scare him. I love it when Haku-san shows up! Law and Order always follows:) That was so sweet of the boys to give Kiba-san their runner. Then want to take a family picture with him. I loved that:) Thank you for my adventure today I loved it ^_^
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  • From GreenEyedCat on January 25, 2012
    A childs logic at its best. The longer Shika knows the longer he has to find a solution to help them. I hope Ran forces the right decision.

    It was sweet that Ha-chan understoud how much Kiba loves them and how he can make the life better for other people.
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  • From ANON - cynaga on January 25, 2012
    [ch 9] Nice to see the kits appreciating Kiba. Looks like the SAI situation is potentially dangerous...
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  • From YamanashiOchinashiIminashi on January 25, 2012
    Oh, poor Haru. He probably exagerates but still...he's playing with fire. He should tell Shika. It's all Sasuke's fault because he really does limit Haru's development. They should minitor it not limit. Then he wouldn't have to do weird stuff in hiding. I wonder what will they say when they find out about Sai. Surely Sumiko won't happy at all... I'm really curious about how it will all end...
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  • From GreenEyedCat on January 22, 2012
    When Nakama is mentioned I always think One Piece and noone wants to know the insanity that follows that ;-)
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  • From ANON - Dawn on January 21, 2012
    Loved the last 2 chaps!!! :) Even tho I didn't really understand all it was still easily imaginative...:) Thank you!!
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