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By : mannahpierce
  • From roro237 on January 11, 2012
    A level 5 genius is to much! The way his mind was working was down right scary! Actually the real genius is YOU!! How in the name of heaven do you do it?! I read every word and it all makes sense. To-chan was wonderful. He knew went to ask and when to back off. I love him so:) Ran went on a family outing! I'm so glad for Iruke-sensei. Thank you for sharing another incredible adventure ^_^
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  • From bloodshound on January 11, 2012
    *ears perk up. what's a Tronnie? I wonder if Sai will get a physical form eventually... that'd be cool.
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  • From GreenEyedCat on January 11, 2012
    uiyuiyuiyui who are the tronnies?

    totally random: I believe that Ka-chan will be very funny once he will hit puberty :-)
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  • From cynaga on January 11, 2012
    (Ch 5) I really enjoy the interactions between Haru and Naruto. I love Sai's line about changing his own program but it was always there. I feel the same!
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  • From YamanashiOchinashiIminashi on January 11, 2012
    OK, Tronnies? Should I remember that? I'm sorry but I don't... unfortunately.....
    Now I'm curious....

    Is Kazuki keeping away from Haru because he hinks he might be a berserker??????
    I wish there was more Kazuki in he story. He's cute.
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  • From ANON - v on January 11, 2012
    Tronnies? What are Tronnies? I don't remember Tronnies?? Now this has really gotten interesting...if Sai is a data-crystal array...and no one knows about him but Haru and Ran...then...I have no idea whats going to happen next!! lol..but it is a little sad that Kazuki doesnt' spend as much time with Haru, being so used to thinking of the children as the "litter" and then the "big litter", now that they're growing up it stands to reason their interests would be different, *sniffle*...I hope they don't grow to much apart. Another great chapter!! Looking forward to the next one! :)
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  • From ANON - angelj232000 on January 09, 2012
    I am enjoying the direction that the story is taking. I don't find Haru anywhere near as annoying or bratty as before. I like that he is interacting with a lot of the other characters. I can''t wait to see what happens next. Keep up the awesome work.
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  • From ANON - Dawn on January 07, 2012
    Ohhhhhh the suspense is ON!!! So is it a good Sai or is there more Trouble to come??? Imma on the edge of my SEAT!!! I am so glad you started writing again!! LOVED IT!! Can't wait for MORE!!!!!!!!!! :) YOUR AWESOME!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - lonelylulaby on January 07, 2012
    Holy Crap, I don't know if Sai is real or imaginary. Could Sumiko have created his programming and then someone hacked it from the outside? I just don't know and it's getting exiting!!! The terrible twosome was great. I didn't even think the triplets would have any mischievous characters. I'm glad Haru saw through their tricks. Also when Haru had daydreamed about what Haku would do to them if he ever found out, I just had to laugh.

    ja ne till next Saturday and keep up the good work
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  • From ANON - richon on January 07, 2012
    oohh sai can be real person and not a virtual friend, it can be interessing to learn how all this will finish, craving for more... see you soon
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  • From roro237 on January 07, 2012
    This is an interesting situation! I can't decide is Sai real or not? The title makes me think he's real in some way:) I look forward to fining out the answers ^_^
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  • From ANON - Kyle on January 07, 2012
    I mostly want to know why Haru is the only one who sees him other than Sumiko.
    And has Shika not examined the code at all?
    And does nobody suspect that Sai is not Haru's creation?

    -must knowww-
    XD;

    On a different note, my picture of Haku/Kisame/Itachi/Mai/Shou is almost finished.

    The giant one with Naruto/Sasuke/KIDS/Ran/Sumiko/Shika/Neji/Kakashi is far from done, however.
    uAu;

    somanypeople.
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  • From ANON - v on January 07, 2012
    Oh now this is certainly pulse pounding! Could he be real?? Is he an intruder bent on harming Uchiha? Or is he a program that has grown in intelligence? Or is Su-chan a genius that is developing another personality to hide who she is, after all Shika had his parents growing up and then the crew? and WHY is Haru the only one to notice? So much stress already... also, I do think Haru needs to tell an adult but...which one..and could this be another test?? How would the kits react if they did see an intruder?? So much stress already...great chapter, can't wait until the next one! :)
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  • From YamanashiOchinashiIminashi on January 07, 2012
    BUT is it only a matter of believing that Sai is real or maybe he IS real! And mabye he will try to take over the world!
    I'm very curious about personality. Will he be like the original Sai - seemingly emotionless, but arrogant and sometimes mean or will he have his own AU personality??????
    Maybe I'll see in the next update!
    THANK YOU FOR YOUR WRITING!
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  • From ANON - liby318 on January 07, 2012
    I am really enjoying this side story. I think the different view point of Haru's is working out well.
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