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  • From Telynaayuri on January 18, 2012
    oh cliffhanger of doom how i loath thee
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  • From YamanashiOchinashiIminashi on January 18, 2012
    So it was Haru after all! I must say I'm proud of him! Even thoug I think that it may case one hell of a mess... He should tell Shika... I wonder if he will ar will this whole story finish without he knowledge of any grown-ups....

    THANKS FOR UPDATE!
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  • From ANON - Fluister on January 18, 2012
    Ahw, poor Haru. He really is too wise (and at the same time, not at all) for his age. Trying to sort everything out by himself. I love how Iruka is trying to make him see how Shika still blames himself, but I think Haru already has that (unreasonable) sense of responsibility that Shika has as well.

    Love the story so far, and I'm looking forward to the next chapter!
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  • From YamanashiOchinashiIminashi on January 15, 2012
    This story is geting really fascinaing.
    I can only guess that Sai's origin is that last option... Big unknown.

    Thank you for leting Klenn make appearance! I love this character. I wonder how he looks like....
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  • From GreenEyedCat on January 15, 2012
    I was talking about puberty wasn't I :-)
    It would be nice if Sai was a Tronnie who had forgoten what he was and now had to relearn it.
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  • From bloodshound on January 15, 2012
    wow, there was just so much stuff packed into that chappie it's hard to pick a starting point. so many over and under tones and haru noticing at least half of them was very interesting. Hoshi's right, Klenn is not a nice man.
    have all the kits partnered wish someone? Is it part of their altered behaviour? that's going to be scary cause those they look to will have to watch themselves very carefully.
    I like that hi admitted to what he'd done but really, he shouldn've known that Haru doesn't think like that.
    it is an interesting question, what would Sas have done if he wsan't born uchiah.
    I look forward to finding out what Sai actually is... eventually. :P

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  • From ANON - lonelylulaby on January 15, 2012
    Oh man, I dont know why but I was scared for a minute. I'm thinking Haru would rather be a supertronny then have his siblings grow up without him and watch them all change. I cry a little inside for Haru, he missed out on SO much. I liked the Tronny story alot, I didn't see how they were baddies, they helped the human race. But I guess we will find out in the later chapters. Oh Man!!!! too excited for next Saturday.

    ja ne till next time and keep up the good work
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  • From ANON - Dawn on January 14, 2012
    OHHHHHHHHHHH the possibilities of how sai came into existence ..... hummmmmmmm......... I kinda got a hint (maybe wrong) that almost each hybird child would protect a purebreed child?? AWESOME.... hopefully tho as FAMILY they will learn to get along better.. I might not understand everything you write but it is still wonderful to get the imagination going.... :) Can't wait for the next one!!! P.S... It is kinda cool seeing my name in the Thank you section!!! AWESOME!!! oh in case I haven't said it lately..... YOU ROCK!!!
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  • From roro237 on January 14, 2012
    WoW! Where do I began?! I had felt sorry for Klenn knowing he was dieing not so long ago but that little stunt showed me he's still a bastard and will go out kicking:) Hi-chan is Itachi in ascent. I think. Hopeful with Papa and To-chan guidance he will become more caring of his little brother. I know brother act that way and it's one more reason I love your story so much it's REAL:) I do get the title now. You're brilliant! This was another great trek with the Uchiha family ^_^
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  • From ANON - v on January 14, 2012
    uh-oh...did Shika invent artificial intelligence? Did Haru? Is Sai a Tronnie that hid for thousands of years??? I'm a little worried about how Haru is going to answer this questions...he also seems to be becoming very sensitive, a bit like Shikamaru, and why is no one still monitoring his interests?? Talking ALONE with Klenn-san??!! Have they forgotten what he was capable of?? Are they so used to Haru, that they've forgotten how typed genius can get themselves into trouble or that they can have emotional issues due to their intelligence!! He already thinks he can't talk to his family, plus I am concerned about the others growing up before him, he just seems to be more alone now. This is bad...also I might be a tad over-emotional myself..but I blame you and your wonderful characters...lol :)
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  • From ANON - NarutoVixin on January 14, 2012
    i like were you have gone with these tale's. its really good
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  • From cynaga on January 14, 2012
    (Ch6) Delightful!
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  • From ANON - Kyle on January 14, 2012
    why are you such an expert at playing my emotions. :C

    I mean. Uh.
    Uhm.
    ..

    This chapter was amazing.

    Once again I am going -bewednesdaybewednesday-
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  • From ANON - Dawn on January 12, 2012
    Awesome chappy as ALWAYS!!! No Not the Tronnies!!!!!!!!!!! ohhhhhhhhhhhh sitting on the edge until you write more!! Love it!!!! :)
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  • From ANON - richon on January 12, 2012
    what is exactly a tronnie ? I don't know what it's is . love this story, see you soon with more
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