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By : kiyasama

From Sabriel20 on February 11, 2012
I liked this chapter. It's interesting how you made it heavy in some parts and funny in others. I loved Naruto's last prayer about not accidently commiting suicide. I cant wait for the next chapter.
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From scarywoman on February 09, 2012
i was scared for aminute there. i thought orochimaru was going to rape sasuke. thankyou for not doing that to me. on another note, i knew it was itachi from the very beggining. sasuke and itachi reunion should be similar to minato and naruto(sasuke punches itachi in the stomach. and adressing the comment about gudan being the climax, those boys have way to many issue then to have one or two fights then become lovers. they have got to learn how to respect each other. you have good instincts for this story. keep up the good work and update soon
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From Sabriel20 on February 07, 2012
i can't wait for the next chapter. Gudan's finally started. Get ready for the fight of your life Naruto;)
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From scarywoman on February 03, 2012
well worth the wait. i had been checking scence wensday. only a chappie or two away from the gudan fight. hopefuly orochimaru is killed by sasuke. i still think itachi is the head of akatski. but one request. please dont just make their feelings switch from hate to love. lthey have baggage to deal with and that would cut their story short. let them slowly the others good qualities. naruto sasuke love forever
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From Mija on January 29, 2012
OMG OMG OMG they are going to fight! Oh I cant wait! Naruto cant fight with that wooden sword thingy, it is a wooden sword right? lol and I know Sasuke is going to do some damage but lord I hope Naruto gets some hits in, and hopefully Sasuke wont be a spoil sport and mega bully and have Naruto thrown into the dungeon afterwards...now seriously I must say the part with Kaname seriously pissed me off, I mean I was like, WTF?? is that woman out of her ever loving mind? What reason in her little pea brain does SHE have to be pissed that Ino or ANY woman was in Sasuke's room other than her when she had shown Sasuke by signals that she was more than willing to warm his bed? I mean who what the heck makes her think he even comtemplated her??? and then to do that to Ino because she was jeolous? She had no claim stupid woman! Orochimaru has more reason to be jeolous of Ino than Kaname, hes been trying to get in Sasuke pants since Sasuke was eight...the freak, but at least HE has the better claim, albeit sick, Kaname just has her dim witted fantasies that no one but her believe.....ok ok I vented, as you can see people like Kaname piss me off, like Karin and Sakura and Ino in the Anime they act like Sasuke belongs to them and they just piss me off so bad, no ONCE has Sasuke EVER shown a hint of affection or even attention that they even exist in his realm and yet they claim him as theirs...they drive me nuts...le sigh, as usual this is a wonderfully written and amazing chapter and I am looing foward to reading more, I thank you for the awesome read and cant wait till the next chapter, till then keep up the great work, huggles and smiles Mija..:-)
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From SmellsLikeJapan on January 27, 2012
Oh wow, a fanfic with actual substance. I really like the chapter lengths and the character development that is taking place. Keep up the good work, can't wait for updates.
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From scarywoman on January 26, 2012
i knew ino was set up. and i hope sasuke cuts off orochimaru smaller head. i bet that the person asuma will set up with sasuke is itachi. just a hunch. i cant wait to see how sasuke and naruto relationship will evolve. update soon please. i look for updates all tbhe time.
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From Mija on January 25, 2012
Oh a new chapter! and omg Ino is dead...I soo did not expect that, it blind sided me, awwww and was Sasuke in lurve?? Literal or figurtivly speaking??? It does stand to reason that he would feel some affection towards the woman he lost his virginity to and really, he was totally adorable in his naivete(?) awwww and the memories/dreams were heart wrenching, I love the part where he promises his mom that when he grows up he wont ever be late for dinner, that was so precious! But seriosly I get Haku and even Shikamaru a bit in defending Sasuke but I see them stating Sasuke's side, NOT getting angry and expecting Naruto to NOT be angry and forgive Sasuke, because HELLOOOOOOO, Sasuke sentenced him to death! and hes been nothing but an ass to Naruto and hes going to behead Naruto, so ya, I dont think its to much for Haku and Shika to comprehend that asking Naruto to feel for Sasuke plight is a bit to much to ask for...ok I vented, cause seriously sometimes people just ask way to much from our dear Naruto, but alas that is who he is and thats is why we love him....so he will befriend Sasuke cause we know he will and they will fall in love and battle the evilness that is Orochimaru and whomever it is that wants to hurt Sasuke, lets not forget Danzo yes must kill Danzo to, if for nothing else than for just being creepy, always thought he was creepy...thanks for the wonderful read, cant wait for the next one, I hope the problems with your computer can resolved not for our sake but for you, I know how much it sucks to have computer problems in general, till next time, huggles and smiles Mija..:-)
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From Sabriel20 on January 23, 2012
aww, you killed off Ino. I really liked her character. Oh well. I really like this chapter. It's interesting how you portrayed Sasuke's inner tormoil. I also thought it was very clever to have Haku try to get Naruto to see how flawed and human Sasuke is. I can't wait to see what you come up with next.
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From scarywoman on January 22, 2012
something is afoot my dear watson. i think ino was setup. and i wonder how naruto relationship with sasuke will change. and i also have to sympathize with naruto. naruto has every right to hate sasuke. sasuke ruleings on naruto were out of spite. just because he said that he did not know that his underlings were rapeing naruto doesnt make him innocent. if haku shikimaru say dont judge sasuke, they should also say the samething to sasuke. at least asuma is. after saying that, sasuke can see when he is doing something stupid,like in the previous chappie. he is not completly amoral( that spot is for orochimaru). i am just saying he should take responsability for his action instead of saying some excuse.
after diatribe i realy am enjoying rhe story. even the parts i dont like, because it makes the story more realistic. shikimaru and haku had a realistic point judgeing someone thst naruto doesnt know. it will be a fun to read. evedn when i go all wtf(lol). and i understand frustration of haveing your laptop go on the blink. it happend to me before during and after the new year. more frustrating when it happens again aweek after i just got fixed.
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From conrada7 on January 18, 2012
Another great chapter!!! I absolutely LOVED Sasuke's part and how you momentarily made me hate him until you explained what happened in his head! I can just see the fatal/sexual attraction between the Naruto and Sasuke! It is physically tangible!!! I love it! I am so excited to see where you are going with this story, and I can't wait to see Naruto and Sasuke finally clash!!! It is going to be so so so epic! Every chapter just gets me more and more excited and more and more anxious. Great job!!! =D As always, I cannot wait for the next chapter!!!
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From scarywoman on January 17, 2012
naruto will be in huge trouble when sasuke gets back. cant wait to read about their fight. i have suspicions on who will pitcher and who will be catcher. oh and thankyou for not haveing sasuke kill enoh(ino). is shikimaru dating temari(spl?). cant wait for the blood and carnage to come( i just finished watching claymore).
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From Mija on January 16, 2012
awwwwwwwwwwww Sasuke kun is a mannn now...lol....but omg ewww, just ewww Oro doing that to poor Sasu I wanted to be sick, I mean I felt your pain my poor poor Sasu..and ya I tend to have a lot of quesitons but that is me, and ya I am a gal lol, and omg I KNEW it I knew Oro did SOMETHING for Sasuke not to be able to tell how evil he was wit those eyes of his, those dam eye drops and that fact that Sasuke knows is good but that he still takes it is bad but ya I know Sasu you cant help it sweety...and ummm with Ino...okay least it wasnt with Sakura sorry I dont hate Sakura but I just dont seee her with Sasuke EVER at all in any universe and oooh I loved the interaction between Haku and Naruto all the new info Naruto is getting but he is assuming more than he should but I understand his fears and reasonings and I cant wait to see what happens, God I wish Sasuke would of socked Oro cut I know he couldn't at least not yet but I cant wait till he does...sigh, anyhow awesome as usual so looking foward to the next chapter, and I still dont buy Oro's excuse about the fight and it being alright, it still reeks and I wonder how other will take it...hmmmm it will give Asuma another thing to shove into Sasuke face and say seeeee? is this what your family would of wanted? would Itachi be proud of this? which is mean but I get what he is doing, cant wait for more till then keep up the amazing work huggles and smiles Mija..:-)
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From Sabriel20 on January 14, 2012
I really liked this chapter. I like how you portrayed Ino. I can't wait to see her part in all of this, and who she was talking to. The ending had me wondering if Danzo and orochimaru both want Sasuke dead? Anyway, your stories really interesting. I normally don't comment on stories because it takes too long to type on a kindle, but I just had to let you know how much I appreciate your story. It's very well written.
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From Mija on January 13, 2012
OMG there is sooo much to comment on but my head is spinning lol, but seriously I was wondering while I was reading that if Sasuke would suffer a culture shock since it seemed he rarely leaves his home, and he did lol, hmmmm and the Ino (Enoh) lol on that one is intrigueing lol so intrested in finging out who she workds with and what their plans are, they seems to be against Oro but not nessiarily Sasuke just yet, and omg a fight to the death?? those greedy ebil bastids, seriously twisted freaks, how can they possibly pass that off as any sort of religious rite? Freaks and poor Sasuke he and Naruto are gonna have to fight at the end!!! But I am curiuos if Sasuke sees all this dark black evil aura's eminating off of the others why cant the see it coming off of Orochimaru? Cause we know he HAS to be evil right? Is it just that Sasuke has just been desensitized to him since hes been with him since he was little?? Oh and loved the dream my heart ached for Sasuke but he desearved it,it is all his fault he should feel guilty but dont worry Sasu I still LOVE YOU, and I dont know the image of Sasuke with high water pants sort of made me laugh I pictured a nerdy looking Sasuke with a tight fitting suit and it made me giggle hystericly I know it didnt look that way but the high water pants just bought the image up to my head, ahhh goood times, anyhow so much to look forward to and to anticipate I was so fearfel for Sasuke during the time in the party, I was like dont drink that drink its drunggged! Dont look to Oro or Kimmy cause you know they would bend you over and help rape you not help you! So ya I was scared for poor SAsuke's virture so I am glad its still in tact, and Sasuke's suit was bugged huh? but who bugged it? Orocimaru or Ino and her group?? Hmmmmm, cant wait for more awesomeness, till then keep up the great work, thanks for the wonderful read, huggles and smiles Mija..:-)
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