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By : kiyasama

From satterb on June 27, 2012
Hell Yeah!!!!! Oh I'm so happy. This was wonderfully written. I was squealing like a little girl. I'm sad that they won't be together for a while. But it was really cute that they were trying in a round-about way to get the other to confess their love so they would be able to say how they really felt. I want Haku to wake up soon and I'm also wondering who the fourth secret police force operative was. I thought Kimi only sent Sai and two others. I can't wait for more of this. It is one of my all time favorite stories. I'm so glad I gave it a chance.
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From Sizone on June 26, 2012
*Waves hello*
I love it! Two reviews in one here. I'm so unbelievably happy that Haku made it, crossing my fingers for a quick recovery for him. I shed a few silent tears while reading the fight "scene", I have to admit that I had been hoping Sai would eventually change sides, for Haku's sake(he seemed so happy with him, even though Sai was the enemy's spy).

The "scenes" between Sasuke and Naruto were filled with passion, and you really managed to get their urgency and desperation to spend as much time together as possible across in a beautiful way, without making it soppy. The love between the two of them hasn't been rushed in any way, and that makes it all so much better.

Keep up the amazing work,

-Sizone
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From roro237 on June 25, 2012
I misses you! I was reading you at ff my name there is roro237. I thought you had pulled your story from there. I got all panickier and I was looking for you! Then I found you in AU. I'm so happy to read you again!! I'm going to keep reading you here. I love your story so much. The way Naruto first thought Sasuke was a girl just spoke to me. I could believe Naruto would think that. You definitely gave us an incredible chapter! Sasuke waking Naroot up oh yea:) I enjoyed their memory making time:)
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From Sizone on June 20, 2012
This story is truly captivating, it's the best fanfic I've ever read. Every word, sentence, paragraph and chapter, is brilliantly written, and it's quite clear that you know what you want with the story. I simply love how your plot is unfolding, and the way you portray the characters, it's all just genius. I found this story about half a month ago, when we didn't have internet at home, and read the first 31 chapters on my phone because I couldn't wait for the internet to come back. Would've left a review half a month ago, but my stupid phone wouldn't allow me to. Keep up the great work!

-Sizone
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From Mija on June 20, 2012
Ya Ya I KNOW, I just left a huge review just a minute ago..but I have LOTS of chapters to comment on...this one wont be as big..what I want to know is is Naruto really going to kill people? I mean yes Sergi was teaching him to assinate people and although I dont think he actually killed anyone during training, you never know you didnt tell us EVERYTHNG lol, do you think he can do it? cause if he can then what is the use of coming out of hiding to work with Danzou? And will he and Sasuke be seperated when he does go back to Japan? because omg and cant see them NOT together, its like the only way they are going to survive and I dont know why I feel like this, but I think the only way they are going to defeat their enemies it together, they have to be together, they were bought together for a reason, but if Sasuke is with Naruto then Danzou knows him, hey is Sasuke a wanted criminal? I mean if he were to come out with Naruto Danzo cant do nothing to him can he? but then that just puts a huge target on his head and he would be killed not that Naruto would let him...Im soo confused..Im eager to find out whats going to happen next but worried about it as well, and is Jiraiya reall going to be the next big boss? the new hefe? lol, he gonna come out of retirement to take over the reins for Naru? he'd make a good boss, perverted but fair me thinks..and what the heck has happened to Suigetsu! is Orochimaru using him did he rape him? How about Juugo will he betray them for Kimimaru? man and what the heck are Itachi and Shisui doing? where are them? Things are soo heating up and I am soo exited..ok ok, I gotta calm myself...whew! ok, thanks for all those excellent chapters and the amazing writing, looking forward to more, till then be safe be happy and be well, huggles and smiles Mija..:-)
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From Mija on June 20, 2012
AHHHH KIYA!!! I am alive! lol, no seriously you have no idea how long I have been trying to get a comment or email or something to you, but man when you still have no internet it is crappy..anyhow just cause I was unable to review does not mean I was not reading I was reading everything and OMG..first I am truly sorry to hear about your loss, I know its coming late but I was unable to say anything when it happened, I know when I was into my writing heavily and and was doing this big Inuyash fic back sometime ago and my father passed away I just sort of shut down and was unable to get back into the writing spirit, but that has been awhile back and all is good, I hope that when you think of your loved one now that your heart is filled with peace and joy at all the love that you have for them and all the wonderful mememories you shared, I know my fathers in peace now so when I think of him now I smile and although I miss him the pain isnt there, I hope God grants you this peace as well....wow it feels funny to talk about the fic after that, but I want to say so much and seriously I dont even know where to start, first I was like OMG they kissed! then OMG they did a little 'bow chicky bow wow' In Naru's room and man that was hot! and they didnt even go all the way darn it but it was still freaking sexy as all get out..and then it was like WHAT! why are you kissing Haku? Why is Haku giving you a freaking blow job? Of course then I was like Naruto you are a little man slut now, you find you like man flesh and now you cant get enough of it and have turned into a man hoe, BAD NARU BAD! Oh ya when they first kissed at the bridge and then got arrested I was like NOOOO Kiya you cant just give us a tease then have them NOT get down to the nitty gritty you tease you! but then you gave us some smexyness so ya thank YOU for that...and then man poor Haku has a broken heart and then Sasuke breaks up with Naruto sort of then then he gets with Karin and that whole thing is just screwed up seven ways to Sunday and I just want to smack all of them in the head! seriously they act like their in grade school sheesh! and poor Karin but seriously after that little pity confesion what did you expect, you only say that stuff if you expect to have them feel sorry for you and reconsider maybe going out with you...girls never tell guys their insecurities unless they are willing to let them use them to hurt us...and dammit I knew from the begining the Sai was a spy but I was kinda hoping I was wrong, but now damn and then I was hoping he would really fall in love with Haku but OMG he is DEAD thank the stars and poor Haku! and awwww Sasu is soo worried about him that is soo cute and unexpected although yes it shouldnt be because hes known Haku almost all his life but still it was a bit unexpected so awwww and now whats going to happen you think they are going to try to keep their relationship quiet so they wont hurt Haku? If they really love him they would be truthful so Haku wont get hurt when he does find out....and man although Sai didnt reveal his info on them to Kimimaru do you think he knows anyway? Oh man this as usual is my absolutely favorite fic and I am dying to read more I cant WAIT! Hopefully this feeble intenet connections hold out and I will be able to comment somemore if not know I am still reading and will find a way to comment when when I can, talk to you later much huggls and love Mija...:-)
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From roro237 on June 16, 2012
Hey I just PM you at ff I couldn't fine your story over there and I could fine it here at first:) I was missing you and wanted to re read some chapter. I'm so glad you're here:) I don't want to lose sight of you and your story:) So I'm good now ^_^
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From Kerrisa on June 10, 2012
That was brilliant. I was so hoping that they could convert Sai, but i guess not =( I toooootally didn't see that fight outcome tho! Kudos to you for coming up with something so inventive! I love Sasuke and Naruto best when they are together, -sigh- they make me happy =) I'm looking forward to the next chapter!!!
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From scarywoman on June 10, 2012
haku is alive. thankyou kiyasama. he is a fighter. sad about sai though. i am now majorly wishing for haku happiness. oh and one more thing, if i dont review for a while it just means i cant find your story. thats all.
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From satterb on June 07, 2012
OH! Thank you, Thank you, Thank you!!!!! Thank you for not killing Haku. Again, it was another awesome chapter and I look forward to the next. I was afraid we might have had to wait a little longer for that update, but you never cease to amaze with how regularly you update. For that I really thank you. I don't have much more to comment on. This story is so well written that sometimes, I just need to let you know I enjoyed the latest chapter and will be waiting patiently to see what happens next.
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From satterb on June 05, 2012
Holy Crap!!!! Yes I'm upset that you've left us all on one hell of a cliff, but I forgive you because you put our boys back together. Please don't let anything terrible happen to Haku. I hope he's able to take care of himself, but I understand that this story has to get worse before it can get better. I'm sure this nips any hanky panky in the bud when the guys get home to discover Haku isn't there. Oh well. at least there's a bigger chance of them getting to the real stuff before Naruto leaves. Thanks again for updating. I love, love, love this story!
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From Kerrisa on June 04, 2012
I am in a happy tingly place n.n Naru and Sasu, you boys make me so happy. This chapter was adorable, from Haku's date, to the swing set, and they freakin crazy cool telepathy that led to that kiss! Loved it loved loved it! There's no way only 3 people are still reading this fic! I'm reading it!! I just missed reviewing the last chapter for some reason... i might have read it on my phone... I hope they can convert Sai, that would be amazing and a lovely smack to Orochimaru's face. >D
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From scarywoman on June 03, 2012
nonononono haku cant be hurt or dead. if he is dead i may come after you with a shotgun. and my coment about karin was just a obbservation. she likes sasuke and sergei, two emotionaly stunted men.
i totaly forgot how feminine haku looked until i watched last thursdays naruto shippuden. girly girly girly. well i hope this is not the end of haku, becuse i love him to much. please just let him be hooking up with sai.
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From corgigrape on June 01, 2012
I'm bad at leaving reviews, but I had to do one for your story since it is one of the best fanfics I have ever read. I don't even like Sasuke! Your greatest strength, and what keeps me coming back, is your character development and your handling of the relationships between characters; it certainly rivals many of the fiction pieces I have read. I usually come to AFF for the kinky stuff, but when I found your fic I kept reading and reading. I've especially enjoyed the development of the relationship between Sasuke and Naruto, although their constant ups and downs are getting a little old. When the love triangle with Haku was introduced, I almost groaned in despair, but you have managed to avoid many of the cliches. What I look forward to the most is how Naruto will handle the kills he has to make, and what kind of person that will lead him to become. Do we get to see more familiar characters (Kakashi, Yamato, Ibiki, Shizune, etc.)? I'm starting to forget some of the plot points now (like what was the host club Sai worked at when he saw Jiraiya, Naruto and Sasuke?); you've got more than a novel here! Thank you so much!
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From satterb on May 27, 2012
I was worried that Haku wouldn't have come clean to Sasuke...or anyone for that matter. That would have really made things bad. You've done a great job making Sai likeable but very despicable. LOL Thanks for the wonderfully speedy update to this story. I was so thrilled. I was thinking Karin would be able to figure out what was going on between Naruto and Sasuke. I'm thinking she still might. Is she a fan-girl??? Haha. Maybe Haku can win Sai over? I'm just really excited. I look forward to the next installment. Thank you for all your hard work.
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