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By : kiyasama

From satterb on October 06, 2012
SQUEEEEEEEEEEE (breathes) EEEEEEEEEEEEEEE! Thank you, Thank you for updating. I loved this chapter. Your writing always touches my heart, either with fear, excitement, sadness and happiness. I don't mind waiting, as long as you don't drop the story. I hope you get over your writing block. Thank you for all the hard work. I look forward to more. I won't give up on you. Don't give up on us.
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From ANON - Satterb on October 04, 2012
Oh my god!!!! I'm so happy to see you've returned. I have been missing this story so much. It's sweet how Naruto can touch everyone's heart in this story. And the taped message from Sasuke almost made me cry. I can't wait to see another update but I'm sorry to hear that you've been having some trouble with the story. No matter. I'll stick with this as long as it takes! Thanks for all your hard work. Satterb
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From ANON - sadie237 on October 02, 2012
I missed you:) You haven't lost a step to me! That was as incredible and intense as if you having missed a week posting.(really) I loved the last part so much. I got misty eyed. That heart wenching love they have for each other. I did the fangirl squeal ^_^
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From satterb on August 17, 2012
Oh WOW!!!! What a treat. Such a speedy update since the last one. I loved this chapter. The way you described the new sexy Naruto makes me love him even more. I hate it when writers portray him as a dork. I'm not really happy about him contemplating "cheating" on Sasuke, but I try not to question you...after all, you're the one plucking this chicken...not me! As always I look forward to more.
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From ANON - sadie237 on August 16, 2012
Babygirl I read you last night at the other place (ffn) and dropped you a few lines. I thought about the chapter all day today at work. I love where you're going with this or should I say I love where the story is taking it self:) I can believe it's getting tougher for both our boys to remain sex-less. I think more so for Naruto because it's get-en throed at him! I believe he will make it because he already had a mishap with a blow job and he was sorry. Now Sasuke I think he will make it because he's so passive. He wont want to share himself and definitely not Naruto. That might be a weak argument for Sasuke:) But I believe in the boys promise to each other. Maybe they will meet up in Tokyo huh? Hey Babygirl I'm here for the long haul. Once again let me say I loved it ^_^
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From satterb on August 13, 2012
So good!!!! I love it. This story keeps me on the edge of my seat. I love how human Sasuke has become. The bad guys are becoming too powerful. I really look forward to them all meeting their come-uppance, but then that would put an end to the story. I'm so impressed with the universe you've created. I squeal like a little girl when I see you've updated. Thanks for straightening out the format also. I would have tried to tackle reading the update, but damn it would have taken days. LOL. Look forward to more.
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From ANON - sadie237 on August 11, 2012
Oh Babygirl that last bit brought tears to my eyes:) That was beautiful and so Naruto. I have missed you,you know:) Now the take down begins. I'm bucketing up for what's to come ^_^
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From satterb on August 11, 2012
OMG!!!!!! I can't read this. Is there any way you can re-format??? Oh please. I've been waiting for so long. I'm very happy you updated. It's just going to be extremely difficult to read the way this is posted. Thanks.
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From satterb on July 19, 2012
Naruto is going to be kick ass!!! Sasuke will be able to keep him grounded if he gets too far into his role as an assassin. I look forward to more of this story. Also, I love Kakashi. Thanks for updating.
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From ANON - Mija on July 17, 2012
Wait, wait! when Naruto says take them all down does he mean Jiraiya too?! Is Jiraiya using him as well? Oh things are starting to get all intense all over again, and omg I cant believe Naruto had to go through that sort of training, to be subjected to torture I mean it makes sense but I just didnt think they would put him through that, and hmmmm Kakashi seems a bit cold, but he is yakuza but i am still waiting for him to bond with Naruto lol I dont know why not like he really bonds with him in the anime or manga, there are a few moments but there isnt much bonding perse...anyhow I love how this has progressed and started on a new arc, I feel sad that they are all seperated and it feels sort of lonely in a way but I like the different views and how they are growing and maturing without each other although we only saw Naruto in this chapter I am sure we will be seeing Sasuke take on his new role in Akatsuki beside his brother as well as Haku and I think their bond will grow too, and although Haku is already a good body guard, I can see Haku finally stepping out of the last bit of child like behaviour and becoming a bad ass killer/assasin/bodyguard sort of person the kind that with a flick of a wrist his blade will have your hand pinned to the wall without him so much as moving from Sasukes side..lol yeah you know SUPER HAKU lol...anyhow I cant wait to see more, sorry that real life is kicking your butt, I hope that you are taking time to take care of yourself, as much as I adore this fic it wouldnt do any good for you to burn yourself out, so stay safe, be well and take care, till next time keep up the great work, and thanks for the wonderful read as always, huggles and smiles Mija..:-)
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From scarywoman on July 16, 2012
i had so much fun reading this chapter and the last one. sorry about not comenting on it but whenever i would reread it, i would get anime nose bleeds(or felt like i was going to). this chapter had me laughing first with kisame comment on itachi being more attractiive and then naruto pictureing sasuke playing a shamisan(?).but is jiriaya truely just useing naruto. or is it all in naruto head. and what will happen to sasuke. he made a vow naruto and i bet it would amnesia to get him to break . that or temporary insanity. naruto on the otherhand, well the moron keeps on choosing girls who look like sasuke in one way or another. and will the syndicate have naruto target sasuke or itachi. oh the drama. bring it on. please update soon.

ps what is D-E-D. is that ded without the a? and where is the everyones favorit green eyed red head? bring gaara in please. and give haku someone who wont break his heart or try to kill him
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From roro237 on July 16, 2012
First I missed you:) Second Babygirl that was an awesome chapter!!! WoW! I loved the fact Naruto has decided that a box of tissue and lotion was the way to go:) It tickled me that you said you want to see what happens to. I don't write but I always hear author say the story takes on a life of it own. I'm guessing this one is like that for you?! I can tell you for sure I love your story and I will be around to the finish too ^_^
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From Kerrisa on June 30, 2012
The ending of that chapter was so freaking endearing, and romantic, and sweet, and i am so sad they have to part D: !! But I know its a must to reach their goals. Their coupling was so incredibly hot, and finally!! Happy times all around, Sasuke should wake Naruto with molestations every time he goes to sleep! Naps included!! Lol, the romantic aspect of this chapter aside, this extra long chapter was amazing! From their all of sudden right now departure dates to what they found in Sai's apartment, Kabuto, is going to know somethings up when 4 of his officers fail to contact him, and then its only a matter of time before Orochimaru finds out and blows a gasket. I'll be looking forward for the next chapter!! XOXOXs Kei-Chan~!
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From satterb on June 29, 2012
Sooo Sweet and beautiful. I loved this update. Thank you so much for all your hard work. I look forward to more.
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From Mija on June 28, 2012
OH...MY...GOD! they had sex! and that was freakin HOT as all get out! I mean seriously I did not expect you to have them have sex all the way yet I had hoped, but I thought they were just going to fool around ALOT and you were gonna a tease us but then they were going to get all I think we should wait sort of thingy but nooo they freakin went all the way and I am like shocked and sqealing like a little fangirl and bouncing in my seat all excited....but damn the endding was like the saddest and sweetest thing ever, it makes you want to melt and go awwww and then cry because they had to leave each other, but I am glad that Sasuke is going to be with his brother and that they are all going back to Japan but Im totally glad Shika is going to be with Naruto, he needs someone with him, a friend, someone he can trust, seems like hes never actually had that, even when he had that so call brother like figure he shot, the guy was never really a real friend, so Im glad Shika is gonna have his back, its just sad that they are seperating, but OMG now I am stressing about wether Naruto will have to kill Itachi, Shisui, or Sasuke or Haku or Karin to make himself look more legitimate for Danzou..and hadnt thought of all that till they mentioned that he might have to kill Akatsuki(?)....and YES..it was perfect! I am usually a Sasu top sort of person unless they story is written well that they show me Naru is a good top and of course Naru the big bad assasin is soo a worthy top, but you still didnt make it all about seme or uke, they talked about it and Naru offered but said why it was uncomfortable for him and Sasuke was pissed and awwww this was perfect and DAMN Sasuke is a nasty little thang, a little nookie and some hot Naru body and hes all slutty and wanting more..lol I LOVE that, I would never have pegged Sasuke to like it and want it after his revulsion when living with Oro, but ohh God this was priceless and you didnt make it unbelievable you made it sooo believeable and I LOVED it...and YES! I like that you had that Orochimaru drugged Suigetsu, I mean I dont like that the bastard raped poor Sui but I was uncomfortalbe with the thought of Sui letting himself be seduced just to get close to Oro, but this is way better and much more believable and I love the fact that Sui is planning his own pay back lol, soo like Sui to do it...God there is soo many things stiil left unsaid, what will Sasukes new role with Akatsuki be? The confrontation with Naruto and Danzou? Naruto's first assignments? What Ikegami's reaction will be at seeing Naruto for the first time? I mean how can he not see the resemblance to his adoptive brother Minato? And is the old man Ikegami(?) dad still alive or is he dead? I wasn't sure if he stepped down and let his son take over or if he died...would be interesting to see how he reacts to seeing Naruto since he loved Minato right? Ahhh ok im rambling soo cant wait for more, till later, you be well be safe and be happy, thanks for the fantastic read, huggles and smiles Mija..:-)
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