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By : kiyasama

From conrada7 on January 13, 2012
Ahhhhhh! Sooooo good! I am sorry that I missed you're last update. My college just reopened and my professors are brutal. This was the first time I could sneak away to read your lovely story. I was so surprised to see you had posted 2 new chapters. I had no idea that I had been away enough time for that (even though your updates are always super fast!) Anyway, I am so excited to see this battle to the death and I am even more excited to see all the pieces of the mystery come together. I really can't wait to read your next chapter. I fall more and more in love with your story with each new chapter! I wish I could leave a longer reply, but I have class in 5 hours and I need to be awake in 4 so I really must head to bed! Thank you again for the update. You always brighten my day!!!
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From Mija on January 12, 2012
awwwww poor Naru, the darkness is taking its hold upon him, I just hope he manages to keep some of his humanity in tact, he dont need to let Sasuke bastid take it all away from him, some times is so hard to see how those two will ever form any kind of good bond or romance with such hatred and bad feelings but I know you will do it and if not well its still an awesome read and it rereshing to know that at least Sasuke feels some sort of guilt and remorse at the thought of what Naruto might of suffered at the hands of his unjust sentnce...and as for not being about to post a review it was odd it would let me write it out but not actually post it up so I dont know what the heck was going on, but everything thing seems find now, the security thingy at the bottom wasn't there last time so I figure thats why it wouldn't let me and I have no idea why it wasnt there but its back and alls good, anyhow I cant wait for more and as always the interaction between Asuma and Sasuke is so funny and nice to witness, I do however wonder what Orochimaru wants..dun dun dun....cant wait for more of your awesome writing looking foward to it as always, till then keep up the great work, huggles and smiles Mija..:-)
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From scarywoman on January 10, 2012
i have been following this story since you have posted it. i am sorry that i have not reviewed until now. i forgot my old username and password from several years ago and it has been some time since i have read a story that just says make sure the author completes the task. your characters are believable and have retained there all their quirks. the story does not go right to the sex( all though i don't mind that normally), all together a compelling read. you also put my favorite yaoi couple together. keep up the good work. but out of curiosity , who will be the seme/uke?
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From obsessiveXmuch on January 07, 2012
I think I died a little inside when I finished reading this chapter. It was so amazingly good that I am literally dying to read more; seeing that the chapter was over left me desperate for more and depressed that I had finished. I absolutely cannot wait to read the next chapter. I have never looked so forward to reading a story on here. Words can't describe how much I am worshiping you right now. If you aren't already, you should seriously consider becoming a professional author. This story is better than some of the books I read and I have no doubt that you would make it big if you were to write a book and have it published. I am not just saying this to boost your ego either, I honestly think you have the potential to become a very famous author. This chapter just blew me away (all of your chapters have been amazing) but the raw pain, fear, and anguish that you were able to portray in your characters was breathtaking and gut wrenching all at once. As always, thank you so much for the update and I will literally be glued to my computer screen in anticipation for your next chapter!!!
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From obsessiveXmuch on January 05, 2012
Pft, I don't know why you were worried anyone would skip over this chapter. If this is how you write your "filler that isn't really filler" chapters then you, my dear author, should be a Naruto-filler-arc writer because this chapter was a thousand times more interesting than that shit they try and pass off as Naruto when they try and take a break from the original story line!!! So basically as always, this chapter was absolutely amazing! You definitely deserve more attention than you are getting. The only reason you haven't exploded as an author here yet is probably because you are a "new" author to the site and a lot of people look for specific authors when they choose a story. But fear not, keep writing exactly the way you are and you will gradually get more and more views, ratings, and comments. I have no doubt that you will be one of the most popular authors on the site in the future. You honestly have an amazing voice in your stories that I envy you for. I honestly wish I could write like you. Anyway, the plot is thickening and I couldn't be more excited! I can't wait to see where you go with all of this new information. I was so excited to see you had updated when I logged on today so thank you for making my day that much more interesting. Also, thank you for the shout outs in your author notes =D they always make me super happy! Though these reviews are my thanks to you for writing such a wonderful and intriguing story! Obviously I am super excited for the next chapter and can't wait until it comes out. Thanks again for the update!
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From Mija on January 05, 2012
Oh WOW, how can you even say this is filler, filler is fluff, silly and just not relevant to the story at all, but this is vital, its information we need to know and omg it was a LOT of information and I am sooooo biting my nails in anticipation and anxiousness now waiting for the sh*t to hit the fan, Naruto decendent of big yakuza crime family??? who would even follow him now though? Would anyone remeber the Senju? Well Asuma did and he isn't part of the syndicate, or iiiisss heee??? lol, and omg I wanted to weep for poor Haku but I love his story and how he came about being Sasuke's manservant, Zabuza'a lover and in general there, and now I know about Shika, lol that is also good to know, I cant wait for more this was an awesome chapter, I loved it thanks for the great read and I am sooo looking foward to more, till then keep up the amazing work, hugggles and smiles Mija..:-)

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From Mija on January 03, 2012
omg I love this, but what the heck is wrong with you Sasuke, if your family gift is to see the truth with those gifted eyes then why the heck would you deny it when it tells you someone is good?? Stupid Sasuke *pouts* Hes just sexually frustrated as you can tell with the massage he got from Haku hehehe and doesnt realize hes all hot and bothered for Naruto and hes just trying to subconsciencly get rid of him to save his pride, stuped man....and oh what does Orochimaru have up his sleeve now? Can Sasuke change his mind after he judges them? Or is Naruto doomed for Guden? Love the interaction between Sasuke and Asuma too kinda first time I havent seen his mentor friend be Kakashi so it was refreshing, and I love Hakus character too, but poor thing is destined never to have Sasu for himself lol, anyhow keep up the awesome work, cant wait for the next chapter and thanks bunchs for the wonderful read, till next time, huggles and smiles Mija..:-)
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From obsessiveXmuch on January 03, 2012
Honestly,this is probably my favorite story that I am reading right now and it is definitely making my top 5 for my all time favorites!!! Another great chapter! I absolutely love the raw emotion you put into your characters and the fluidity of the story is unparalleled. As always, I can't wait for the next chapter! Thank you for the update =D
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From obsessiveXmuch on December 31, 2011
Another amazing chapter!!! Also, I just read Just One Night With You in about a day and a half. It too was simply amazing! I am so excited to see what you do with this story! Thanks so much for the update!!! XD
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From Mija on December 31, 2011
Cool, I finally find out who he killed, glad to know it was pretty much self defense, but damn I didnt expect Sakura to die like that and hey I dont mind Hetero at all I just prefer SasuNaru together lol, but I am still a healthy red blooded straight female who does like her regular porn lol, but seriously Naruto is too much of a nice guy, seriously why did he have to take on the old doctors debts?? they werent his and all the crap the old mans sister put him threw should of been enough to pay of the debt of him saving his life....and I am glad that stupid Kojimi(?) got shot, how could he do that to Naruto?? Oh ya, hes yakuza lol, soooo first captian is Sasuke huh?? I wonder what Sasuke has planned for Naruto and why is Shika being so nice to Naru??? because hes a good guy or is there alterior motives??? ok ok I know I shall find out soon enough, loving this fic, thanks for the awesome read, cant wait for more, till then, huggles and smiles Mija...:-)
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From MyGrandioseEgo on December 28, 2011
Very interesting plot and an equally interesting approach. Mixing times, customs, beliefs, religions, obsessions, dogmas... I like your writing and the balance between first person stories of the main characters. I'm waiting for more, to see what have you in mind.
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From Mija on December 28, 2011
Oh this is starting off to be a wonderful story and I can already see the openings for things to happen, but sometimes I have to wonder at Sasuke's stupidity at wanting to behead Naruto so badly in the begining and when he finally gets what he wants its not what he wants anymore because he is in love with him lol, but of course I soo see him doing this for the start, again loving how this is starting, details are nice but not overly drawn out that they take from the story and that tickles me silly thank you.......and I was just wondering are you the same Kiyasama from FFNet who wrote Just One Night With You? Because alhtough I read it when you first wrote it like ages agao lol, I started reading it again a few days ago and just finished the last chapter last night and here I find myself finding another one of your awesome fics to start anew with, thank you for the wonerful read, for the older fic and of course the lovely new one I am angsish to read more about very soon, huggles and smiles Mija..:-)
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From obsessiveXmuch on December 27, 2011
This story is simply captivating. I have yet to read anything quite like it here on AFF. The plot is both eloquently written and extremely creative. The way you capture the essence of your characters is also amazing. I was so excited to see that you posted the second chapter and I am really truly looking forward to your next update! Great job, I can't wait to see what happens next!!! XD
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