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Reviews for Fire

By : djserani
  • From klv--klv on December 29, 2012
    Oh Serani please please please write more of this story soon! It's fantastic!
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  • From ANON - dragondame57 on March 15, 2012
    I absolutely love this fic!! It's so delicious.. I can't wait until the next part! If it's not too much trouble, could you let me know when you update?? ^^;;
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  • From moodysavage on February 05, 2012
    what to do? I say dance and flirt whoo hoo! :)
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  • From Kingcobra on February 04, 2012
    I can't wait for the next chapter! Naruto/Kiba is a fun pairing, especially with the way you portray them here. Please updat soon!
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  • From Prism0467 on February 02, 2012
    LOL they were beating off to each other in adjoining rooms! How's that for irony?!
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  • From cynaga on February 02, 2012
    Great story!!!
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  • From ANON - silverblaise on February 02, 2012
    lol I loved how they were both clueless about the other wanting them and as more than a fling. Please update again soon! ^__^
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  • From ANON - snarriet on January 03, 2012
    Really lovely. You rarely see this pairing done with such great sense of the two characters. Even though it's AU/AR, I don't mind at all, even though I usually tend to favour fics that are at least loosely canon. It would have been wonderful if the setting had been Japan instead of the US, but I guess it's better to use a place or system you know, instead of struggling with something you aren't quite familiar with. I hope Sasuke will turn up to cause some trouble (even if only as a friend), though I'm sure you have something quite fitting planned out to cause Kiba and Naruto some difficulties even if it's not in the form of Sasuke. It's rather obvious that Kiba and Naruto are quite troublesome by themselves, so not much is needed, after all. I really enjoyed getting both POVs because they were so well done, so I hope you'll continue writing in this way. Sometimes switching POVs can be slightly irritating, but you make Naruto and Kiba both such likeable characters that I couldn't help but like it. Besides, I didn't feel like it was revealing too much or hindering the storytelling in any way, just the opposite. I hope you'll have time to write the next chapter soon because I'm just itching to know more. :-)
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  • From ANON - Zan on December 24, 2011
    Interesting story ;) I can't wait to see next chapter ;)
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  • From Stacy on December 06, 2011
    I've never been a fan of this pair. But from what I just read....I so can't wait for more!!! Nicely done!!
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  • From moodysavage on December 06, 2011
    I like how this is starting out. I've always liked Kiba's character... he's like a rougher version of Naruto.I really liked that part where Kiba said that Naruto would probably get sick of him first. Like that's happened to him many times... I'm rooting for KIBA! :)
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  • From ANON - silverblaise on December 05, 2011
    Ooooo-ooooooh I like Naruto/Kiba - or Kiba/Naruto ;-) - and this is looking good so far! Can't wait to read more! One thing as well, when I read the title Fire and that Naruto had to get out of his apartment I thought it was because he'd been in a fire and that's why he had to move in with Kiba. Reading it I was thinking "when does the fire happen?" lol. I am not always the brightest crayon in the box. ^^;
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