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Reviews for Trapped

By : AvangalineHazel
  • From ANON - YaoiConsumer on April 24, 2012
    what are you doing not updating this!! haha! worst cliff-hanger ever!!!! It was just getting to the good stuff, please update soon!
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  • From FromAfar on November 05, 2011
    I like the story: the characters didn't jump each other the moment they realized they were stuck (thank you!), they actually got to know a bit about each other. Sasuke's quite human (thank you again).
    I wonder what else can happen to the lift (not "in":)) ? After all, we know they aren't going to die or get out, and they cannot fall forever.. but the maintenance men can be in no hurry to get their job done(?) after Christmas. Will you spin out their time inside enough to let them tire of each other, get hopeless and jumpy.. as it happens in real life? Or will Naruto's claustrophobic symptoms lead to something unexpected - not sexual (it's predictable, this cuddling-comfort-kissing) but maybe.. shocking or violent?
    I secretly hope that Naruto's not that simple harmless type of guy he seems to be.. otherwise it's just one more HEnd Christmas story with "reunion of the lonely, orphaned and deprived".
    Blackmail is a disgusting thing. Claustrophobia's attack is a disturbing thing. Sex between two guys trapped in the lift is a.. way too banal thing.
    So, what's going to happen next?
    Aha, maybe there's a camera taping everything that's going inside???? Some typical surveillance camera, nothing special..
    Well, till next chapter. Thank you and good luck with all your stories!
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  • From tawanawelch on November 03, 2011
    OMG!!! Just when they changing the dynamic of their newfound relationship, they plummet a few floors. I am so afraid they'll wind up with some injuries along the way before being rescued. Thank you so much for the nice long chapter.
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  • From ANON - mina on November 02, 2011
    you end it HERE??!!! :O you meeeaaan!! meanie bug!!
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  • From moodysavage on October 30, 2011
    I didn't mind it being a long chapter at all. Really. Feel free to write chapters as long as you want. :)
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  • From MisatosPenPen on October 30, 2011
    NEVER worry about length. Unless you're pushing 50 pages. I will read it! I love this story and have anxiously been waiting for an update. Thank you! God, I hope the sex is graphic!
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  • From tawanawelch on October 30, 2011
    Ooh! I like it!! It'll be fun to see what they come up with to entertain themselves for the next few hours.LOL!!

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  • From ANON - Jannis on September 27, 2011
    Intriguing. Looks promising so far. Want more ;3
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  • From DBTex on September 27, 2011
    I like it so far. More please.
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  • From suzannecmc on September 24, 2011
    I like this:)
    it has quite the potential!
    whatever the limit of chapters you give yourself, I think it will be fun,
    thanks!


    never wanted to see her 'chest fallen' by his hands - hahaha, I think you mean crestfallen:)
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  • From ANON - Jen on September 24, 2011
    I like the idea of this fic. It's something different that the two of them have met by getting trapped in an elevator. Normally, they'd be enemies/dislike one another and then be forced to work together for some reason. Doing it this way is not only a different approach, but it gives them a good opportunity to get to know one another instead of spending half the fic arguing (and annoying me, LOL!)

    A couple years ago, I read a story about a man who was trapped in an elevator in New York for 41 hours. It was really interesting (and scary!) to think about. They have video footage of him while he was in the elevator (so you can see how stir crazy he went!) I'll link you the article + video if it's of any interest to you in thinking about what these characters might go through in this type of situation. The article (originally appeared in the New Yorker) is 8 pages and pretty detailed--it has info on elevator construction and elevator phobia, while also telling the trapped man's harrowing story. (It's especially interesting what happened to him afterward.)

    http://www.newyorker.com/reporting/2008/04/21/080421fa_fact_paumgarten
    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=p_bMhNI_TY8
    http://dsc.discovery.com/videos/worst-case-scenario-trapped-in-an-elevator.html
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