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Reviews for Dream in the Gate

By : xxTanali
  • From asialisek on September 22, 2011
    I'm sooooooooooooooooooooooo glad you are continuing to write this story!!! :3

    So, there's a play on the ''9kitsune'' that hasn't been done before. Like a reverse, where Naruto is imprisoned? At least at times.. And this is all a dream somehow? Interesting.. and where it goes from here? A little confusing on it's own, but I have faith that it will come together with further chapters. ALSO, memory loss on Sasuke's behalf??? //Aaah.. the plot - she is thick - with many wonders yet to be revealed.// (said in a gypsy fortune teller voice)

    wow. Tanali-san, I hope you update soon.

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  • From moodysavage on August 27, 2011
    oh my gosh I absolutely love your writing style. Your descriptions and plot blend seamlessly and I love how this is all told from Sasuke's POV. It's like something has made Sasuke forget Naruto? I suspect someone has been messing with their reality or something and the only one who remembers is Naruto though Sasuke did remember his name at the end. But the arm through the chest!?@! Noooooo!!!!!!! I know Sasuke won't die but.... nooooooo!!! You ended there? Right there? *evil wonderful author... evil*

    u...r...awesome. May your plot bunnies give you no rest until you commit them to print.
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  • From Dragon7 on August 26, 2011
    Wow. This sounds very promising! I look forward to your next update!!
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  • From nivell on August 26, 2011
    Liking where this is going! Hope to see more soon.
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  • From Carousel on August 25, 2011
    This last chapter confused me a bit. :/ I can't wait for the next one though. Update soon~
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  • From smint45 on August 25, 2011
    Wow I really like this story so far!!! Although I really have no idea why Naruto is in that stone and at the same time that thing!!!! I really don't get what is going on but I really love this story non the less!!!! I hope to hear from you soon!!!
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  • From fayjay18 on August 16, 2011
    Great! Update soon please.
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  • From asialisek on July 05, 2011
    I love AU interpretations of series. And this beginning sounds really promising!

    There really isn't enough stuff out there that has these characters as adults/adult'ish, so triple kudos for that~
    A dominant Naruto is definitely appealing, and this whole mystery aspect is rather intriguing. I really look forward to the story's progression!~ :)

    Good luck dear! Please keep writing~~~



    Joanna K.
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  • From AlienixX on June 15, 2011
    Yes, Sasuke's definitely very OOC. I think a real ninja of his level would have caught much more info about his lover.. even against his own will. Does Naruto live in an absolutely isolated unknown place so that Sasuke cannot identify him by any means?.. At all?
    Very.. strange. Not ninja-like, I'd say.
    More to Sasuke's OOC-ness: he's so submissive, easily led, shy - like a child. Why to give Naruto all advantages over him? It's not fair and interesting. Again, Naruto = 'a prince of the forest'? I see you've already decided that the guys won't be equals or rivals..
    I prefer the original characters and relationship.

    Good luck with your story.


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  • From bridmatt on June 14, 2011
    Wow, this is a really interesting scenario you've written here. I'm not sure what to make of the fact that Sasuke has fallen for someone who won't let him even look at him. Part of me wants to tell him he's crazy for going along with everything, and part of me thinks he should listen to Naruto. (I remember the old fairytale about the man whose wife told him to never look at her when she was bathing and the terrible consequences when he disobeyed.) And then there's the second paragraph of the summary: "The war is over and all is well in the world. Everything is perfect. Right? So why can't anyone remember what happened during the war? When that perfect world comes crashing down, who will be left standing?" Hmmm... So is this alternate universe not actually an alternate universe after all?

    The scene between Naruto and Sasuke was really sexy, especially despite how careful both were to make sure Sasuke didn't look at Naruto, how they still managed to touch as much as possible. I guess it really shows how much Sasuke trusts Naruto that when he woke up sore and naked and in Naruto's bed that it didn't cross his mind that Naruto might have done something to him in his sleep. (Because seriously, why did he have to have even his underwear removed?)

    I had a question though, in your A/N at the end, you said "The story contains more than just NaruSasu, but they're the ones that I want to focus on." Do you mean there will be multiple side pairings? (Honestly, not really a fan of that--I'm usually apathetic of the side pairings and find they distract from the main pair/main plot.) Or did you mean there will be a larger overall plot in addition to the romance? (I *am* a fan of that.)

    Really looking forward to seeing how you develop this!
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  • From missbri88 on June 14, 2011
    The OOCness is very intriguing and I'm excited to see more.
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  • From moodysavage on June 13, 2011
    Darn...nothing else. Do you by any chance still have your other stories up and floating around somewhere?
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  • From moodysavage on June 13, 2011
    wow...just...wow... that was absolutely phenomenal. Well, you said you haven't written in awhile... you have soooo not lost your touch and after this I'm going to check if you left up any of your old stories! BECAUSE I NEED TO READ THEM!!!

    That was extremely sensual and I loved every word. Actually I feel like starting over and reading it all again. *fingers crossed* I hope you update soon because this story is something special.
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  • From conrada7 on June 12, 2011
    This story is amazing!!! Best I have read in a long while!!! I can't wait to see what happens next!!! (i am especially hoping for a steamy scene to make me go like this >///< hahaha)
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  • From Carousel on June 12, 2011
    I just love this story so far. It's rather yummy and sweet. Your style of writing pretty much made me feel the longing both Sasuke and NAruto have for each other. This was lovely, so please update soon.
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