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Reviews for Calling You

By : FireSnake
  • From missbri88 on April 03, 2011
    I love this story. :) Its awesome. Lol
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  • From AngelTalion on April 03, 2011
    I wonder what Sasuke did to piss Shika off so much! I feel a little bad for Naruto. Sasuke seems to be playing games. A game that Naruto doesn't know how to win. :( It was a great chapter though. I want more and it was very beautiful.
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  • From moodysavage on April 02, 2011
    I loooooove this!!!! I find the whole situation sexy in the extreme. Sasuke watching him, leaving him a gift, coming in and kissing him like that... and yeah like Shika said... marking him. I love possessive Sasuke. And I really like the little bits of thoughts we get from Shika. And his comments to Kiba are totally funny dry humor which is perfect for him. Look forward to lots more! :)
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  • From myrandomnesslife on April 01, 2011
    I love this story, its nice to get something different once in awhile and i was happy for the change in pace. Great job on the fic i look forward to more :)
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  • From Carousel on April 01, 2011
    I like this little story, and I loved the descriptive writing, but I wish you would have dragged it out a little longer. It feels kind of incomplete to me. :/

    But other than that it was adorable, sweet, and wonderful.
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  • From ANON - Jen on April 01, 2011
    Heh. A cute one for these two to make it up to them for Love and Hate? I'll take it. ^_^

    LOL. As a west coast native, your first paragraph almost gave me conniptions imagining the horror of Naruto's drive to SF. In NO traffic, LV to SF is a 9 hour drive. That's OK, that's a doable road trip. But if it's a holiday weekend or Naruto is driving during any part of rush hour, that time doubles, no joke. (Bay Area and Vegas traffic are always awful in general.) Now THAT'S a road trip I wouldn't want to wish on my worst enemy. Well, it sounds like Naruto didn't do it all at once, so hopefully he bypassed the worst of it.

    Anyway! I kept thinking throughout this first chapter that there was something almost magical about Sasuke? He seemed like a normal guy, except not. Always staring at Naruto and staying longer each time he visits doesn't seem like something a socially well-adjusted guy with a 9 to 5 would do, and then there's the fact that the necklace is an antique and Sasuke refuses to speak English... it just gives him an air of mystery and possibly other-worldliness. I don't know if that how you want us to see him, but that's what I got out of it.

    Can't wait to read the rest!
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  • From Mija on March 31, 2011
    ohh I really like this, I like a shy but strong naruto and a Sasuke who doesnt mind the blond know he is interested, its so unlike Sasuke to stay and just STARE at him but I like that commanding and aggresive, the description of the charactors and how Naruto doesnt know Japanese but I do waonder what sort of game Sasuke is playing and does Shika have a crush on our Naruto?? hehe too cute..cant wait for more thank you for the read, huggles and smiles Mija..:-)
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  • From ANON - chynna18rawrr on March 31, 2011
    it so refreshing to read a story that's different in a good way, i enjoyed this chapter very much and I love how you portray Sasuke great job on the fic , i cant wait for more
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  • From KatieKat on March 31, 2011
    Love love love love love love love love love it!!!! I'm hooked.
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  • From tjrender on March 30, 2011
    I'm loving this. As a native San Franciscan, I can just picture where this is all taking place !
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 30, 2011
    I like cliche too! As long as it's well done of course....and you are doing quite well so far.
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  • From randrinawilson on March 30, 2011
    I love this!!!!! I am really digging this mysterious Sasuke and his role. I hope he isnt trying to play mind games on our poor naruto here, he seems like he needs a hero.
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  • From LadyLaran on March 30, 2011
    Fantastic start for this story. I was really hooked from the get-go. Nice job on pacing and the like. I can't wait to read more.
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  • From ANON - Althydia on March 30, 2011
    Nice and cute start. Sasuke is already possessive and Naruto seems quite taken too. Will we know more about Naruto's past? Also, does Naruto have Japanese origins, even though he can't speak Japanese?

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  • From ANON - Stacy on March 30, 2011
    Love it! Love it! Love it!! That was awesome! By the way the correct way to write the show they were watching is Doctor Who. I love that show.
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