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By : FireSnake
  • From ANON - dar on April 08, 2011
    Haha i can only imagine how pissed sasuke is right now!! OH naru it's alright it'll get better, thanks for the chappie!!! I agree i do love where this is going, cliche doesn't mean its not enjoyable!!
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  • From ANON - Tea on April 08, 2011
    It's fun for me to read this story because I live in San Francisco:) Do you live around here?
    Just a quick note though... how can you go to Round Table when you're in the same general area as North Beach? I guess it's best to use a recognizable chain for story purposes though... it's not like everyone's heard of Pizza Orgasmica (even though it's not really in North Beach... technicalities) or North Beach Pizza (the one over on Grant is so cute)
    Look at me assuming you live here...
    This story is lovely so far!

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  • From niceladysakura on April 08, 2011
    this story just caught my attention and i managed to read the whole three chapters today

    this is really an interesting story, please do update soon!

    Itachi's soo mean how could he look down Naruto just because of his background, i really dislike that kind of persons

    i do hope that Naruto is okay

    please update soon!
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  • From YamanashiOchinashiIminashi on April 08, 2011
    Great chapter! And Sasuke is not a bastard! Surprising! But in a good way I guess... I think Naruto should learn to use a subway or bus to be more independent... Shika is awesome! He always is. Just as Itachi (sex on legs)...
    Thanks for the update!
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  • From Carousel on April 08, 2011
    I just read all three chapters and I now understand the whirlwind idea. That's rather brilliant. It was fast-paced in a good way now, and it works perfectly for the way the story is unfolding. This seems to be Naru-chan's first love, so of course it will be intense and fast. I feel rather sorry for him though because of the ways Sasuke is jerking him around, both intentionally and unintentionally.

    I can't wait to see how this pans out. I hope Itachi doesn't get too much in the way. When is Shika going to explain to Naruto how he knows Sasuke? I think that would make for an interesting tidbit.
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  • From Prism0467 on April 08, 2011
    Sasuke can't pull his personal thing together for shit, can he?

    Naruto is screwed. And not in a smoking-a-cigarette-afterward way.
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  • From ANON - Jen on April 07, 2011
    I hope you didn't think I was criticizing you on the thing with the drive--I was just sharing what it made me think of, which was all the bad road trips I've ever been on living in this part of the country, LOL. As a teenager I wouldn't have had the courage to drive around for hours like that, so I'm really impressed with you for being such a free-spirit. :) I'll share a road trip story with you as well: During college some friends from So. Cal decided to blow off work and go to Vegas for a few days during Memorial Day. They left mid-week, but decided to come back on a Sunday when everyone was coming back. It was bumper to bumper on all the freeways when the driver saw a service truck pulling off the highway and onto a dirt road. She flagged the guy down and asked if he was going to LA and if they could follow him. The guy said sure, so they spent the next six hours off-roading in the desert in a Honda Civic praying the trucker knew where he was going. Despite all that, my friend says they still got back a good 2 or 3 hours sooner than they would have if they'd stayed on the highway. :P

    Anyway! As for the chapter, I felt bad for Naruto wanting to sleep with Sasuke because he felt like he should take what he could get, like this was his only chance to ever do something like this. :( It's probably OK since Sasuke's character type isn't one to casually get involved with people, but under other circumstances, sleeping with such a mysterious person on the first date (let alone losing your virginity to him!) could really have backfired on Naruto. :( I'm glad Naruto did question Sasuke about his argument with Shikamaru, and about his behavior, about why he wouldn't speak to him in English in the beginning, so clearly he's not an idiot or a pushover, he just needs to work a little harder at solving Sasuke's mysteries--like asking him how he knew where Shikamaru lived, or that Naruto was even living with him in the first place. (And of course, Sasuke's family name, his age, what he does for a living, LOL, all the little stuff...)

    Looking forward to seeing how things progress between them, and to reading the future fics you've got planned with these two. (I do like magical themes!) ;)
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  • From tawanawelch on April 06, 2011
    WOW!!! Amazing!!! That was all like a dream date fresh from my mind, how DID u know?XDD I can't help but think Sasuke is a drug pusher or some pimp getting Naruto ready for making money for him, LOL. I really wanna know what the history between Shika and Sasuke could be and why Shika's so angry about the things going on between Naruto and Sasuke. I can't wait to find out about Naruto's past is there more to be found out in the story or was that about it with the bad treatment of the orphanage staff? I can Not wait for the next chapter and thank you for saying that you'd post it soon.X3 I really like this story!
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  • From tawanawelch on April 05, 2011
    Yeah, I like cliche as well. This is definitely a good story in the making and I look forward to seeing the triangle maybe between Shikamaru, Naruto and Sasuke.
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  • From roro237 on April 05, 2011
    Mysterious and sexy wOw what a great combination! I'm looking forward to more ^_^
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  • From ANON - chynna18rawrr on April 04, 2011
    Their are no words to describe how much i love this chapter, it is beautifully written and its only the second chapter :) I look forward to more from you :D
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  • From ANON - Althydia on April 03, 2011
    Nice and long chapter - with hot sex at the end too! I hope that this is not only a game for Sasuke either, and he doesn't break Naruto's heart... Actually, it was quite nice to see Naruto sort of fight back against Sasuke and be angry with him. And Sasuke is still quite mysterious: we don't know much about him, his family (will Itachi make an appearance?), his work (he does seem to spend a lot of time in Naruto's café!), or why he is in the United States... I'm sure Naruto would like to know more about these things too. :)
    Will Shikamaru's hard feelings for Sasuke - or his jealousy - pose a problem? I hope Naruto doesn't end up having to choose between his friends and lover...
    Also, thank you for your answer to my question. It was actually what I imagined about Naruto's background. Shouldn't he start taking Japanese lessons with the way he lives and a Japanese lover and 2 Japanese housemates? It must be a bit frustrating for him to be disconnected from his original language like that, particularly when he surrounds himself with the culture and rejects the memories of his unhappy childhood...
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  • From ANON - dar on April 03, 2011
    I realllly hope sasuke doesn't break naruto's heart!!! Im also curious as to why nara doesnt like him!!! I hope to read the next chapter soon! Thanks for the new chappie!!
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  • From ANON - kanazerosukenaru on April 03, 2011
    I don't know if I left a review before, but I really like your story. I wonder why Shika did not talk to Naruto before he left? Is Sasuke married? Is he a gangster? Is he an evil bastard? (well yeah he kind of is an evil bastard), but I'm not sure what else is going on. Can't wait to find out more.
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  • From YamanashiOchinashiIminashi on April 03, 2011
    I like this story. It was impossibly cute in the first chapter but now it's more. I'm curious if Sasuke will turn out to be bastard or not.
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