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Reviews for Tear in the Sky

By : SSShitstorm
  • From ANON - chrishm on August 19, 2011
    are the three of them going to be happy in the end? is the question i can't seem to answer
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  • From ANON - birthofthecool on August 11, 2011
    Great story. Hinata si so cute (naturally), but I also enjoy Sakura (and that's not so natural).
    So, even though you are shipping Neji/Hinata (DIS-GUS-TING!!)), kudos to you for this story.
    I hope this will be continued.
    Stories like this one are the sole reason I visit this site.
    I've no problem with smut, but I want a good story to go with it.
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  • From ferduran on April 11, 2011
    hope that ends as a naruto/sakura/hinata, so all of them be happy because sakura and hinata are already in a taboo relationshift so be with naruto won't be strange
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  • From ferduran on April 04, 2011
    Looks very interesting, will sakura realize what she is doing to naruto and if hinata still have fellings for naruto would not be better that the 3 of them be togethers after all they already are broken a taboo by be together hinata and sakura
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  • From Rageknight on March 31, 2011
    This story has got my attenion to the point where I have to know how this will play out at this point
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  • From ANON - chm01 on February 27, 2011
    I guess this emans that naruto lost his chance with any of them does it?
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  • From TangoKilo421 on February 27, 2011
    Very well done. With this chapter, Sakura and especially Hinata, are really coming to life as characters. The lemon was spot-on, IMHO. An excellent balance between what's happening *to* Hinata and what's happening *inside* her (no pun intended). I strongly urge you to continue this story to it's conclusion. It sounds like it's going to be a winner.
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  • From TangoKilo421 on February 25, 2011
    I thought that's where this might lead to. It will be interesting to see how you get Mister "I'm an Avenger" into the mood for love.
    Good stuff. I love it when a plan comes together...and a cherry blossom falls apart.
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  • From SirGeneralSir on February 18, 2011
    not a bad story, its getting interesting, i hope you keep going on it.

    minor things bother me thou, the spacing of words is a little too much, its like 3 - 4 lines of wasted space, dont know if you did that or if its the site.

    the chapters do feel a bit too short, both could have been in one, but like i said, im liking it so far and hope to see the rest
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  • From tawanawelch on February 14, 2011
    Oh no!! I hope there is nothing seriously wrong with Hinata. So none of the Hyuga like Sakura?
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  • From ANON - chm01 on February 12, 2011
    I wonder if they will only want naruto to make them teh favor and then leave
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  • From tawanawelch on February 12, 2011
    I've never been into yuri but somehow when parenting's involved, it could be a pairing that I really can't stand and I'm interested.lol
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