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Reviews for Dimension Transfer Jutsu?

By : ChiyokoChan
  • From Hotanimeguysfan on May 31, 2011
    Chap. 2

    I like how this is going and its fun to see Naruto excited over every old familiar friend that he meets....but have to worrie how will he get back home?? Plus.....ohhhh the shock of Sasuke hugging Sakura...oh the horror....you knowwwww how much I just hate her......such torture.....Oh I can't wait to see if Sasuke is in this world too and if so if he's still his emo self?? Can't wait....can't wait
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  • From Hotanimeguysfan on May 31, 2011
    Madara.........nooooooo.....Gaara can't take him to Madara......he's pure EVIL!!! I soooo did not see that comming....I so though it would be Itachi....but at least with it being Madara you can kill him off right?? lol So we can all do a happy dance on his grave....lol...ok off to read the next chapter.
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  • From moodysavage on April 02, 2011
    hey! you! I KNOW you darnit... I didn't realize it was you! (smacking head on desk) *big sigh* now that I know...(and I know where you live)... where's my update? and if you want me to beta anything to get them out fast (hint hint) then just email them to me. Like... now would be good. Cause you know... when you come to visit me soon... you are SOOOO going to be typing...and typing...and typing. And hey... why haven't you read my stuff? Hmmmm?
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  • From tawanawelch on February 28, 2011
    I'm so glad Naruto met Hinata. I wonder like Naruto if her friends are the rest of the rookie 9. Now that Gaara has found Naruto maybe he will learn all about Naruto and help him out more, especially since Naruto has a cell phone, lol.
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  • From smint45 on February 27, 2011
    That was just so great!!! I totally loved it!!!! I'm so happy that he is meeting his precious paople in this new world!!!! I wonder who found him in the end!!! Maybe gaara? I really hope that you will update soon!!! I totally love this story!!!! See you again!!!!
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  • From moodysavage on February 27, 2011
    I really like this story line. I'm worried that Gaara is a bad guy though. That would be awful. I'm also glad that Naruto was able to keep his chakra.

    I have to admit I skimmed the beginning part to check out the rest of the story. You tend to switch your past and present tenses which made it hard to read at first but that distraction went away as I got into the story. So the story is definately good if it can cause me to not really notice grammar lol.

    I like it and the story line kept moving with interesting scenes & meetings with people from his own world.
    Thanks so much for sharing :)
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  • From tawanawelch on January 27, 2011
    Wow! Exciting beginning! I thought the person with the 'long, pale fingers' was going to be Itachi but that's nice its Madara. Hopefully if Itachi is in this he's a nice person. Can't wait to see where Shukaku finds Naruto.
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  • From smint45 on January 27, 2011
    This is an absoloutly fantastic start!!!! I totally love this story this far!!!! Although I don't like that Gaara is working for Madara it would be way better if it was Itachi or Sasuke!!! But well thanks a lot for posting this so far!!! I'm eagerly waiting for more!!! Please update soon!!!
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