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Reviews for Bastards and Fangs

By : Xiophelia
  • From runoutofaname on January 28, 2011
    OMG!! How I love this one! Awsome!!!!!
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  • From moodysavage on January 27, 2011
    I finally let my sis on the computer long enough to read this...she loves it tooooooo!

    Poor Naruto is so going to be put through the mill with Sasuke lol. I wonder why Naruto reacted differently to being blood deprived?
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  • From TemeUchiha on January 27, 2011
    love it!! very good with their personalities!
    keep the story going!
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  • From AngelTalion on January 27, 2011
    Oh no! Poor Naruto more poetry writting. LOL I love it... I sort of hate Minato but that's ok cause I love that Sasuke came to investigate how Naruto was... even if it was in the guise of kicking him out.
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  • From EzriCandy on January 25, 2011
    Oh...this was great! I haven't seen a naru vamp fic like this one which is always a plus. I really look forward to seeing where you take this.

    Advice wise, there are a few spots where there seems to be words missing, but I know your beta will catch that. The only other thing I can advise you to do is work on your page breaks. when you have long lines of repeating characters, like this ----------

    If its too long, it stretches the page and makes a lot of readers have to scroll left to right to read your chapters. Shortening those will help that lil issue.

    Again great job!
    Ezzie
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  • From moodysavage on January 24, 2011
    *sigh* I love how Naruto will do anything to protect Sasuke. And a jealous Sasuke... :)
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  • From meowkuu2 on January 24, 2011
    OMG!!!!!!!!!!!
    *rolls around*

    NOOOOOO you can't stop there!! I need more!!
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  • From runoutofaname on January 24, 2011
    OMG!!! I so love it! Please hurry with the next one =)
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  • From EzriCandy on January 23, 2011
    OMG I just opened this story to check the disclaimer, but with the title of your first chapter, I HAVE TO READ THIS WHEN I FINISH THE NARUTO SECTION! *HATES sparkling vampires*
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  • From moodysavage on January 22, 2011
    Also saw you needed a beta. Not sure how that works (I've offered a few times to people but don't know how that works really-never hear from anyone so I must be doing it wrong lol). But I beta pretty much everything I read for myself because grammar & spacing sometimes drives me nuts. So if you ever want a copy of the changed grammar and wording stuff just let me know. Uh, somehow... huh do we just post our emails? Ok, I sound stupid, bye till the next chapter!
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  • From moodysavage on January 22, 2011
    I have skimmed by this story several times because I usually don't care for how dark author's try to write their vampire stories but I tried this because I love the other stories I've read from you... and I am so NOT disappointed! MAN it would have been awful to miss out on this. You're writing style is really dead on. Your plot is well thought out, great forshadowing, serious parts & humor really well mixed. It's just a pleasure to read this.
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  • From goodchaos on January 22, 2011
    Just started on this fic & it is wonderful and refreshing!
    Please keep up the good work!

    Also I hope Minato has a Really Good reason for not seeing Naruto or Kushina!
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  • From AngelTalion on January 21, 2011
    ok thirdtimes a charm right? I've tried to review this new chapter 2 times before! BLAH

    ok so I LOVE IT! I love that there are all these set rules and things Naruto HAS to do as part of the courtship ritual. Its like there is a book somewhere that Sasuke is hiding from Naruto just to suprise him each time. Bwahahahaha... I also love that Sai flirting with Naruto irritated Sasuke. YAY!
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  • From missbri88 on January 20, 2011
    I'm so happy I got everyone out the house and started cooking my chili before I sat down to read this.
    Wow. I had a serious spaz attack. Lol. Can't wait to see more!
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  • From setoswifey on January 19, 2011
    Man I love Naruto in this fic. I was cracking up when he decked Itachi LOL! I cant wait to read more.
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