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Reviews for Bastards and Fangs

By : Xiophelia
  • From ANON - harukauzumaki21 on March 04, 2014
    Great chapter :-)
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  • From ANON - mysticaldragon11 on September 03, 2013
    I would so much love to see more of this story! I am so intrigued by it. :)
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  • From DRAGONBETTY on June 29, 2013
    Please continue this story. I love vampire Naruto and Sasuke stories.
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  • From ANON - bridmatt on February 10, 2012
    (Logging in is irritating on this site. :P)

    I realized that I'd forgotten to leave a review for this chapter after seeing the Audi Superbowl commercial. ^_^;
    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lw9ZeXB2uKs

    Anyway, you really tricked me last chapter! Makes sense Naruto would have unknowingly tranced Neji. Naruto is a newborn and has all sorts of uncontrollable powers on top of his vampire self-defense mechanisms. I really, really liked the scene between Naruto and Kakashi. They legitimately felt like old friends who cared about each other, and I think that conversation was exactly what Naruto needed to find closure on Iruka and begin healing. It makes a difference talking to someone like Kakshi who understands exactly what Naruto is going through and shares his strong feelings for Iruka. (And it's interesting that Kakashi was also turned against his will. So Itachi's mistake with Naruto probably wasn't a totally rare occurrence. Which is to be expected since these vampires have human emotions and probably make plenty of mistakes/do bad things same as we do.)

    I agree with Sasuke that Naruto feels like he is maturing. He still has his occasional bratty moments with Sasuke (LOL, like demanding Sasuke yell at him), but definitely, the Naruto we see now has grown from the guy we met in the first couple of chapters. He's still learning, and has more things to learn, but I think he has gained a little perspective on his situation, and on life in general. And I thought it was very sweet that Sasuke would be surprised at hearing people thought Naruto was undesirable. I'm glad Sasuke appreciates him. ^_^ (But in real life, the crazy uncle thing probably would have made me a little nervous, too. If you're American, then I'm thinking of Josh and Steven Powell--though they are father and son--when I say that. So I guess I find Naruto's unpopularity unfair, but probably true to life.)

    For some reason, I found Naruto's confession to Madara to be really, really sweet. I think it was his hesitance in saying it, and because it was his first time admitting it out loud, and also because he admitted it to the guy who is pretty much the head of the family. (You don't go say something like that to relatives, especially important relatives, unless your feelings are sincere.) It's interesting that Naruto has a very distant connection to the family. In an unexpected way, he's finally found himself some relatives.

    Yay for the ball! Sounds like it will be a lot of fun with the masks and *authentic* period clothing. (I'm jealous.) I'll look forward to reading about it in future chapters. :) And hurrah for unconscious hand-holding! So cute. ^_____^
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  • From ANON - richon on January 12, 2012
    oh i was fool too, i believed iruka was here too. looking forward to know what will happen during the masquarade ... see you soon
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  • From bloodshound on January 12, 2012
    poor iruka. Damn, i wish there was a way to give him closure of Kikeshi. Naru's adapting though, and that's a good thing. It's a pity he can't be in contact with his living friends but hopefully they have enough support netwok to be going on with.
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  • From bridmatt on November 23, 2011
    Er, in looking at it, I don't think my first few sentences were clear. I was TRYING to say that Naruto's behavior in the chapter was pretty typical (in character) for him. Naruto wouldn't be Naruto if he didn't try and take on more than he could probably handle!
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  • From bridmatt on November 23, 2011
    Wow, super dramatic chapter! I like hearing about the different things Naruto is learning as a vampire. (The trancing thing is neat.) It was *such* an over-confident, stupid Naruto thing to do for him to go off on his own to hunt. But what was even MORE of a stupid, over-confident thing for him to do was to decide to deal with the hunters on his own. He should have ran and then gone and told Sasuke the truth. Leaving wouldn't have been as much of a problem as killing two humans! (Well, his vampire instincts sure weren't helping him make good decisions there.) I wonder if Naruto will get into trouble for it, or if the Vampire Elders won't mind so much since it was vampire hunters who chose to attack him first. (And Sasuke took care of the problem by wiping their memories.) I really like the way you described all the vampire scenes with Naruto running through the forest and then going into a rage against those hunters. Very nice visuals.

    My only criticism for the chapter is firstly, I was a little confused by Neji's reaction when he saw Naruto. I know Naruto is his friend and he missed him (he might have even loved him?), but he was so nonchalant during their conversation. I'd have expected him to have some kind of reaction to seeing two of his comrades dead and dismembered on the ground. (And would he have wanted to get romantic with Naruto while his other two colleagues were cowering nearby?) Secondly, and this is just personal preference here, but I kinda wish Naruto and Iruka hadn't been reunited. Only because Iruka as a symbol of what Naruto lost by being turned into a vampire was working really well for the story. If Naruto has Iruka, then him being a vampire isn't such a bad deal after all. Plus, Naruto being sad about Iruka added to his depth as a character and you were writing that part of the story really well.

    As always, I will be looking forward to the next chapter. :)
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  • From ANON - richon on November 21, 2011
    yes naru and iruka are finaly together, naru will not miss him and he can finaly move on !! this story is awesome, i love ti
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  • From runoutofaname on November 20, 2011
    Awsome chapter!
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  • From ANON - Alex on November 17, 2011
    this is beyond want, I NEED a chapter seven!!!!!
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  • From Carousel on October 23, 2011
    I officially adore this story. It's funny, sweet, and has super sexy time potential. Please update soon!~
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  • From Bluerose92 on October 21, 2011
    i cant wait until the next chapter.
    and i dont like Madara but its your story.
    um....you should do a chapter about Naruto/Gaara trying.
    lol.
    that would be awesome.
    i love this fic.
    so update soon.

    ~Golden Kitsune~
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  • From bloodshound on October 21, 2011
    gah, Madara is fekking creepy. I'm glad Naru and Mikoto have each other. naru is a very pda kinda guy and he needs someone to take it out on. Poor Iruka, please let him be okay. He doesn't deserve more bad happening.
    So, what makes a vampi a day walker... or is it a genetics thing?
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  • From bridmatt on October 21, 2011
    Oh cool, the staircase makes a reappearance! There's a story in there (in every meaning of the word) and I look forward to finding out more! (Just where does Sasuke himself fit on that bannister...?)

    So as a newborn, Naruto is super-strong, hmmm...? (Well, he did rip someone's head off...) I thought it was funny how Sasuke stiffened when Naruto brought up his strength. As a newborn, Naruto is probably too unstable for Sasuke to be able to trust Naruto wouldn't randomly go off the deep end. (I hope Naruto does manage to get a few good licks in against Itachi!)

    After hearing about how much Iruka really changed Naruto's life and how much Naruto's death will devastate him, poor, poor Naruto has to make that call. :( Just what would you say to a person knowing its the last time you could ever speak to him or her? :( I'd probably feel just as devastated as Naruto did. Thanks for not going overboard with Naruto's reaction to the phone call. I think you did a good job with Naruto's back story and his shifting emotions throughout the chapter that paragraphs of hysterics would have ruined the effect you'd already achieved.

    I was surprised like Naruto at how normal Mikoto is, but it was a good surprise. Besides Sasuke and Gaara, it seems like Naruto just might have made another new vampire friend. :)
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