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Reviews for This is Not a Game [Complete]

By : JaydenNara
  • From tawanawelch on July 18, 2011
    Yaaay!! More intrigue with Kabuto showing up by surprise. Poor Naruto being so scared about Sasuke made Kyuubi more alert as to Itachi's well being so that was kind of a good thing and thank goodness Kiba and Shika were there as well to keep everything under control.(sorry run-on sentence) Sasuke is turning out to be a 'little vixen'LOL!! Sasuke's right about Naruto wearing the vibrator next time to see how it feels,LOL. Maybe Sasuke will top.*wags eyebrows*
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  • From arianauchiha23451 on July 08, 2011
    the story is getting awesome.... i am completely hooked.... i cannot wait to see what actually happens next.... please hurry and update
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  • From ANON - silverfox on June 23, 2011
    YAY for fast update!! As always, your characterizations are spot-on. :) Well, I didn't get the Kabuto-ass-kicking I asked for, but at least he didn't get what he wanted. XP stupid kabuto... Man, bad stuffs gonna happen soon, yea? I hope Naruto and Sasuke can weather this storm. :D Can't wait for another ridiculously-fast update!
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  • From moodysavage on June 21, 2011
    *sigh* I just love their together time. Both couples but especially Naruto and Sasuke of course. Will Naruto tell Sasuke that Kabuto was the one that tortured him? I don't see him wanting to tell all that but Sasuke might suspect he left some things out. Especially since he saw fear and not just anger from Naruto. Anger would have been most likely but learning to fear someone is often on a more personal level. This rising action is killing me you know.


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  • From Carousel on June 20, 2011
    Chapter 27 was excellent. It's about time the danger set in again. I was worried Naru and Kyuu were losing their heads. Please update soon!
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  • From AngelTalion on June 20, 2011
    FUCK!

    That was very sexy!!! VEry full of hot smutty goodness :) Loved it! Love this whole story in general. I can't wait for the next chapter.
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  • From missbri88 on June 20, 2011
    *Sirens blare and EMTs run in with a stretcher to rush reader into the hospital from blood loss*
    So now we're coming up to some action. I'm excited!
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  • From smint45 on June 20, 2011
    That was totally hot!!!! But still I can't wait for the World going to shit as you put it!!!! I Hope to see you soon!!!
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  • From ANON - silverfox on June 16, 2011
    Yea Kabuto, get lost!! (snarls menacingly) I hate Kabuto. Every time I think of him or see him, I snarl. Grrrr... Anyway, loved the rest of the chap! Heehee. I prefer SasuNaru, but I definitely appreciate some good NaruSasu 'punishment'. ^.^ Can't wait to see how THAT ends. ;D

    About bus-related stories, I don't know if this counts, but the first time I got on a city bus by myself, there was this woman across the aisle from me who couldn't keep her mouth shut. I mean, if she didn't like something or someone, she told you. And there was this guy who was hacking up a lung right behind me. So this woman keeps saying, 'how gross' and 'he's gonna get me sick' and 'I wonder if he'll throw up'. I just kept leaning further forward just in case he really did throw up. Man, it was gross and I was so happy when my stop came up!

    As always, can't wait for Kabuto to get his ass handed to hi- oh, I mean- can't wait for the next chapter! Same thing, right? RIGHT?! :D
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  • From smint45 on June 14, 2011
    Wow finally we get some action again!!!! I really Hope the uchias will find out soon!!! And narus torture was just great!!!! Thanks a lot and see you again soon!!!
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  • From ANON - alex on June 14, 2011
    just finished chapter 26. One thing I liked "the Implant" pure genius! I only disliked that the chapter ended lol. can't wait for 27... don't make me wait too long!
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  • From ANON - Gaara_Junkie(: on June 14, 2011
    1. this chapter = amazing. i love your fics
    2. i think the obvious reason for the chp title is the vibrator in sasuke's ass
    3. the second reason may be naruto having to admit, or maybe confirm would be better, him taking sasuke's virginity? thats my gess.
    keep up the good work!!!
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  • From moodysavage on June 14, 2011
    Bite the bullet...hmmm... well you said several reasons. It can mean you finally did something you have avoiding doing which would be Naruto finally sleeping with Sasuke even though he tried to wait. And Sasuke's new... uh... toy might also be bullet shaped?!? Gosh should I actually say that? lol If Naruto had told Sasuke his real age and job then that would be biting the bullet but that wasn't in this chapter. Nothing else comes to mind.

    What I love? Everything lol!There is soooo nothing to hate in this... except for Kabuto. I keep waiting a bit stressed for the prologue events to catch up to the story. The stress of knowing Naruto is going to be hurt and Sasuke will be watching expecting him to die is just going to be the death of me.
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  • From ANON - serenitylite14 on June 13, 2011
    I'm guessing you called the chapter Bite the Bullet because the sex toy that Naruto used on Sasuke is called a Silver Bullet. Also another theory of mine is how Naruto had to face Itachi after him and Sasuke have sex for the first time, but that could be completely wrong. Anyways my favorite part was after they had sex and Naruto had to face Itachi and Kyuubi. I think it was funny how Kyuubi kept getting hit or elbowed. My least favorite part was how Naruto called Sasuke a slut. I guess it bothered me some because Naruto is normally so loving when he talks to Sasuke, so it was kind of surprising when he called Sasuke a slut even though I know Naruto didn't say it out of malice. In the long run though I really like your Fanfic! I love how you made Naruto and Sasuke wait to have sex even though it drove me crazy because I could feel the sexual tension growing! I love your story and I'm sorry I haven't commented until now, so keep up the good work! P.S. Sorry for the long review!
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  • From Carousel on June 13, 2011
    One reason the most recent chapter is because it is a bullet vibrator in Sasu-chan.
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