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By : AvangalineHazel
  • From ANON - wowgoshdarnit on June 24, 2012
    I'M VIOLENTLY LAUGHING.
    Nose bleeds?? HAHA
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  • From ANON - wowgoshdarnit on June 24, 2012
    I love it.
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  • From ANON - wowgoshdarnit on June 24, 2012
    Omg. Naruto is not that naive...
    He wants love but he's not pathetic. Or delusional.
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  • From ANON - kiki on October 19, 2011
    Ahhhh AWESOME STORY!!
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  • From ANON - Jen on September 16, 2011
    Didn't realize you'd updated this. Was a good update--the morning after sex was very sweet. I liked that Naruto is still worried about Sasuke and wanted to stop in the middle of the blowjob because he thought it was too much for him. This chapter felt to me a little like the calm before the storm/honeymoon period. Looking forward to the next chapter where I'm sure more twists and turns await.
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  • From missbri88 on August 24, 2011
    You did good for writing this in an hour. Many mistakes but the sex was hot and I'm ready for more!
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  • From MisatosPenPen on May 01, 2011
    You didn't disappoint. "“Oh come on Sasuke,” the blonde knew that Sasuke could see him rolling his eyes in the dark, “when would you, Mr Sasuke Uchiha, Lord of the Jerks ever let anyone close enough to touch you let alone remove that stick up your arse to fuck you?”" is one of the greatest lines EVER! Love this story and eagerly awaiting the next chapter!
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  • From AngelTalion on April 27, 2011
    I hate you.

    I hate you SO much...

    I love this story and I hate you for making me love it. GAHHHH

    Fine fine... I love you and your stupid wonderful story.


    Where's the rest?!
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  • From ANON - Jen on April 27, 2011
    Pft. No need to apologize for Naruto topping. It worked nicely for the scene and the story. It was good for both guys that Naruto got a chance to comfort Sasuke since so far, it's been almost entirely the other way around. Like this, Naruto proves he can return the favor. And by trusting Naruto enough to give up control and give over his body, Sasuke just proved, once again, how very, very different he is from Kiba. No reason this should be a one-time only event either. Naruto clearly likes being on bottom, but they both liked doing it this way too, so I have no problem if you make them switches; they can go where ever the mood takes them.
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  • From Gebrelle on April 26, 2011
    I liked it, don't be so hard on yourself~! For your first lemon it was... AMAZING!
    Dont make us wait so long for the next chapter ;)
    Teasing,
    ~G
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  • From ANON - angelj232000 on April 26, 2011
    I think Naruto should stay the top. I think he needs that change to truly move on. I loved Susuke's insecurities. Can't wait for the next chapter. Keep up the good work.
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  • From missbri88 on March 08, 2011
    Awesome chapter! I can't wait for more. Lol. Noble Sasu-chan... Too cute.
    And your stalker... How did they do that?! I wanna learn that! I wanna stalk you on facebook!
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  • From RogueMudblood on March 08, 2011

    Hey there,


    Thought you might like to know that your earlier chapters were affected by the RTE upgrade.


    Please check out the FAQ on how to fix it:

    http://www2.adultfanfiction.net/forum/index.php/topic/20135-how-to-fix-the-glitches-that-are-due-to-the-rte/


    Thanks!


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  • From Dorkchic on March 07, 2011
    I just wanted to say that I am loving this story so far and am sorry that I have not reviewed in a while. I do not know if you have a beta, but I wanted to point out a few errors. Feel free to ignore me or say horrible crap about me if I am overstepping my bounds and if I am...sorry.

    Withering means dry out and shrivel up. Flowers wither and die. The word you were looking for is writhe (or in chapter 15's case writhing). I see this in a lot of fanfics and can only think that people see the word in other stories, figure out what it means from the way it is used and use it themselves. Unfortunately the original use was incorrect.

    Gapping is a grammer rule that refers to deleted verbs in conjoined sentences. It is also a trade term used in stocks and bonds. The word you were looking for is gaping- or staring in a comical manner. This is also one that I see in a lot of fanfics.

    Accent is referring to regional inflections in speech. Such as having a british accent. The word you were looking for was ascent. It means to travel in an upwards fashion and is derived from the word ascend.

    I felt horrible about how messed up Naruto was and how he nearly destroyed everything with Sasuke. I loved that for once Kakashi managed to helpful and sincere. And I think you got it spot on. I also think that one of your other reviewers lacks sympathy and understanding for what caused Naruto to behave in such a way. Naruto just recently ended a very abusive relationship and on top of that it was his first real romantic relationship after a lifetime of emotional neglect. It is understandable that he would have an extremly difficult time handling the current situation and would probably mess it up horribly. I am glad that once he finally was able to sort out what he wanted and how he felt he went after it with all of the trademark Naruto gusto.

    Anyway... that is my two cents
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  • From ANON - Jen on March 07, 2011
    Naruto definitely did the right thing in wanting to temporarily put the brakes on his relationship with Sasuke until he could get closure on things with Kiba. You can't move forward until you put the past to rest, and now everything between Naruto & Sasuke will be about them only, and not Sasuke, Naruto, and Naruto's heartbreak over Kiba. I was frustrated with Sasuke for getting so angry over Naruto's decision, but then again, Naruto called him a "distraction," which is terribly, terribly unflattering. Sasuke thought he was building a relationship with Naruto, and Naruto's wording made it seem like he was only a convenient source of comfort. If only Naruto had told Sasuke that after cutting ties with Kiba, he'd like to resume their relationship, instead of telling him he didn't know how he'd feel about him afterward, maybe then Sasuke would have understood. It's sad, and a little frustrating, that after everything that's happened between them, Naruto would second guess their relationship enough that he was worried his feelings for Sasuke would go away. But then again, I guess Naruto's real worry was that things could go wrong in general, and that would put their friendship at risk, which is an understandable worry, and which Sasuke thankfully didn't get upset about.

    I'm glad Sasuke is trying to be noble about the wooing thing and that Naruto suggested they go on a proper date since Naruto's idea of relationships is pretty messed up at this point (thanks to his sex-only relationship with Kiba ...and years of chasing after Sasuke). Trying to be a little normal about things for once should be good for Naruto. Speaking of Kiba, he deserved a second punch (at the very least) for telling Naruto he'd make it up to him with ramen. Seriously?! Well I'm glad Naruto stood up for himself; that's the Naruto we all know and love, not the beaten down husk Kiba reduced him to.
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