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Reviews for Admitting The Truth

By : AvangalineHazel
  • From ANON - Jen on January 08, 2011
    Really glad Shikamaru and Sakura have gotten involved now. In real life, trying to get a friend out of an abusive relationship would be too much for just one person to handle. Not to mention, because of his feelings, Naruto may see Sasuke as having ulterior motives and be less willing to listen to what he has to say? Plus, I think it was good that Shikamaru yelled at Naruto; he needed that. Sakura will also provide a different response to the situation than either Sasuke or Shikamaru, so that's good too--the more perspectives Naruto gets on why his relationship is unhealthy, the better. Naruto is stubborn, so he needs a lot to be convinced of something.

    I don't mind the way Kiba was injured. Being scarred is something for him to be bitter over, but it doesn't necessarily play on Naruto's feelings of guilt or pity like if he'd lost a limb or something. In a case like that, it's be impossible to convince Naruto to leave Kiba, so this is good because it's still the same problem as the beginning of the fic--convincing Naruto his relationship is unhealthy--without adding a massive new problem into the mix (like giving Naruto a guilt complex would).

    So Sasuke wants to enter ANBU. :( Well, I can't blame him. This is Sasuke, a guy who walks away from things he doesn't like. How can he continue being Naruto's teammate when he's been rejected, and when he can't stand seeing Naruto being abused and can't do anything about it (especially now that he's been rejected)? Unfortunately, the ball is in Naruto's court now--never mind losing Sasuke as a potential lover, is he really willing to lose Sasuke as a teammate and friend over Kiba?

    (BTW, are we going to see any Sasuke + Shikamaru? I think it's pretty cool that they're close enough friends that Sasuke could go to him and tell him he got rejected and ask him to go to the hospital in his place!)
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  • From AngelTalion on January 07, 2011
    ok seriously when I read Shikamaru say "Sasuke sent me" I sat up and OUT LOUD SAID. "SHIT!" LOL Shikamaru is my favoriter Naruto buddy!! In canon and out. Sasuke needs a good smack up the back side of the head... AMBU!? WTF. I'm having a hard time buying Kiba's sudden release of Naruto. I just don't know if I can buy him letting Naruto go that easily. Especialy if he thinks Naruto fooled around with Sasuke while he was gone. I mean if he heard the part about Sasuke admitting his feeling then he would have heard that Naruto turned him down. I don't know I just have this feeling of foreboding... I keep expecting to open the next chapter to dark uglyness... you're building my suspence and its driving me crazy!! I'm loving it!
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  • From ANON - Jen on January 05, 2011
    Good for you, Sasuke. Not only did he manage to talk sense to Naruto in a rational, non-confrontational way, but he admitted his feelings. No matter how Naruto responds, it's something for him to be proud of. Of course all of us want Naruto to forget about Kiba, especially now that things have been going so well between Naruto and Sasuke, but I can't help but feel Naruto isn't the sort to cheat on even a bastard boyfriend (and he does, unfortunately, seem to like Kiba), so I'm guessing his response to Sasuke won't be 100% positive. And then there's Kiba's little accident! That will certainly throw a wrench in Sasuke's attempts to woo Naruto. It's nice that Kiba does, in fact, feel desire for Naruto (versus just seeing him as a convenient outlet for his aggression), but I have to agree with the reviewer who said that putting your teammates at risk because of your own lust is uncool. I wouldn't approve if it was Naruto or Sasuke, and I certainly don't approve of the story's villain doing it. If Kiba does end up badly injured over it (or worse), it'd be his own fault, and no less than what he deserves. Can't wait to see what happens next. :D
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  • From AngelTalion on January 03, 2011
    oh crapwhy do I sense a VERY bad home coming from Kiba? He'd been distracted with thoughts of Naruto when he was hurt and Naruto is sure to smell like Sasuke... worse he's probably going to find the blond not home but in Sasuke's house. *face palm* I love this story.
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  • From arabuzumaki on January 02, 2011
    LMAO @ Kiba XD Just had to get that out there >.>
    Yeah I love Kiba but in this fic he's a total asshat. And it's nice how Sasuke spilled the beans to naruto.
    And can you imagine having a scratched up chest like Naruto's, having it semi-infected, whilst wearing a mesh shirt which will stick to it, whilst training and sweating causing it to itch and burn D: The horror!!!

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  • From meowkuu2 on January 02, 2011
    I know it's an aweful thought..but I really hope Kiba doesn't make it back..or at least if they're found that at least Shino puts a stop to the nonsense..and Kiba is in a hospital bed for a very very long time...
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  • From ANON - Ivy on January 02, 2011
    Why is Kiba dating Shino too? I enjoyed reading how Sasuke is taking care of Naruto... hoprfully he'll see someone will care about him without being violent. Can't wait for the next chapter ;-)
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  • From ANON - animelover on January 01, 2011
    whoa, that was an intense ending .. so did kiba get his just desserts? he might love naru in his own way, but to put that feeling above the wellbeing of a comrade is just wrong. ;-)
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  • From ANON - Jen on December 27, 2010
    UGH. I'm so glad you had Naruto use the "bonds" excuse for why he won't break up with Kiba. Naruto's insistence on bonds is idiotic in the manga--sure, we all know he'll bring Sasuke back and everything will eventually be all right--but this right here is a great example of the fact that some bonds are meant to be broken (especially when you're being hurt by those bonds), no matter how much Naruto insists otherwise. This makes the situation more complicated in a good way since Sasuke isn't just fighting against Naruto's affection for a bad person, he's also fighting against Naruto's stubbornness in his beliefs. Personally, I hope the reason Naruto breaks up with Kiba isn't because he realizes that he likes Sasuke more, it's because he realizes he deserves better than what he's getting and that it's OK, in special circumstances, to go back on your word. (And then of course he'll realize what's been staring him in the face this whole time. ^_^)
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  • From LadyLaran on December 26, 2010
    Very nice chapter, great flow and movement. If you need a bunny bouncer, I have some messengers I'd be willing to give you my ID to chat.
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  • From AngelTalion on December 26, 2010
    I for one adored this! It was a great chapter I don't feel it dragged at all. I think it hit all the notes it needed to. I liked the descritions of their various feelings on matters.... on what was going on with one another.It shows just how in tune they truely are with each other. Naruto knowing each of Sasuke's facial expressions and the feelings corresponding with them. Sasuke reading everything in Naruto's body language.
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  • From smint45 on December 23, 2010
    Awe Poor Naruto!!!! Kiba is such an ass!!!! I want to beat him up really bad at the moment!!!! Please Sasuke has to rescue him!!!!Hope to see you soon!!! And I wish you a merry X-mas and a happy new year!!!!
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  • From Dorkchic on December 15, 2010
    Did not see that coming. I am glad that Sasuke was nice enough to protect Naruto's dignity by waiting until they were alone to confront him. It seemed fitting that he would be so protective of Naruto after everything Naruto had gone through to try and save Sasuke from himself. It is also nice to know that Sasuke is capable of not judging when the situation calls for it. Wonder what Kakashi will do? Once again I just hope that it results in bad things happening to Kiba without further shaming Naruto. Tsunade is going to have everyone's butt over this!
    As for someone with which you could brainstorm... I am willing to help if you need. Just let me know how I can help.
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  • From HeartStar on December 14, 2010
    Oh poor Naruto I hope sauske can help him... More please
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  • From tovah on December 14, 2010
    O.O I want to see Kakashi scare the crap out of Kiba by threating him. I love the idea of the copynin being over protective of his team.
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