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Reviews for The Gentle Demon

By : VladSaturn
  • From ANON - norri on December 11, 2013
    good story cant wait for the next chapter
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 31, 2013
    more
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  • From SirGeneralSir on February 20, 2011
    please continue this story.
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  • From SirGeneralSir on January 21, 2011
    Hello, i just wanted to say that i like your story.

    ive been watching the eps of the show online so i have just one question.

    that demon fox girl, is she actually from the show or was she an OC, i didnt see any thing explaining if she was or wasnt.

    also,will you be working on a 2nd chapter and continue this story or are you leaving it?
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  • From ferduran on January 01, 2011
    Hi, hope that soon you can update your ficc and that the next girl be hinata and later kurenai, bye
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  • From ferduran on November 23, 2010
    great ficc, I already want to see the next chap, By the way will Kya chance the older girls of naruto harem so they can share his life span and when gonna be hinata turn? and what about anko and hanabi? and by the way is there a opcion in this page so I can know when you update this ficc? bye until the next time
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  • From Avatar12 on November 08, 2010
    Brilliantly concieved, expertly written, and incredibly hot--this adult fanfic has everything necessary to be a monster hit! Hope you update soon!
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  • From shanthprime on October 31, 2010
    good story cant wait to see the next part so please don't let it drift away
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  • From tetrambs on October 18, 2010
    Well, great story, please continue.

    The only thing that really stuck out was that you said Shizune's ovaries don't "produce" any eggs. The human female is born with all the eggs she will ever be able to use ever. Now there is the act of ovulation where due to hormonal changes the ovary will expel an egg. If that's what you meant you may need to clarify. Don't know why but that kinda stuck out to me.
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  • From skeeve on October 07, 2010
    Excellent first chapter! You obviously spent alot of time thinking about what your writing instead of just banging somthing out and it shows. Your attention to details make this very believable and fun to read. Hope to see more of this story as I'm excited to see where you take it.
    Good luck and good writing
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  • From shanthprime on October 04, 2010
    great story cant wait to see the next chapter
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  • From thmanwithnoname on October 02, 2010
    Great start. I love it when Shizune is involved with Naruto.
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  • From Liger001 on September 27, 2010
    awesome fic, hope you update soon.
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  • From lordamnesia on September 25, 2010
    Good story so far, I'd like to see continued!
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  • From JSoucy48 on September 23, 2010
    I like the story. It's more than just pure smut. Don't get me wrong, pure smut is awesome, but reading a story that actually has a plot is nice. My only complaint is that the sex scene could be better described. It's good, it's just feels like there's something missing.

    I look forward to reading more of this story in the future. Keep it coming.
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