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Reviews for The Gentle Demon

By : VladSaturn
  • From korrd on September 23, 2010
    I like it, more please.
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  • From wrathchylde on September 23, 2010
    Wonderfully smutty and enjoyable. A couple errors brought forth by your spell checker run amok but well written besides.
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  • From on September 22, 2010
    I have to disagree with you on one point: in the Naruto Canon, there IS a civilian and ninja council. The writer of the Naruto manga never brought it into the storyboard however.
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  • From bob665 on September 22, 2010
    I'm kind of impressed by your goals. I've seen quite a few stories that use those ideas you listed, but can't remember ever reading any of them to the end. As for your story is well-written and flows nicely. The characters each seem to have a unique voice and are not simply going through the motion like puppets, but actually seem to have motivations. I found the mature scene a little hard to follow although I can't exactly pinpoint why. Still, it seems promising.
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