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Reviews for I Wish You Happiness

By : bigtrw
  • From ANON - midnightscar17 on January 11, 2015
    I have to say it was a good story. Though you should fix all the line spacing and what not it makes it look like crap. Also you use the "mate" term way to much. Sorry but you overkill it.
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  • From elaynabrooks on December 31, 2010
    This story = EPIC WIN

    I will admit, though I be a Shino/Sakura fan forever, Naru/Saku is my favorite likely pairing. Plus they just complement each other so well...I bet it was easy to write something so touching about the two. Loving the raunchy sex. Heh.
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  • From Coldstone on August 27, 2009
    Nice. Very Nice. But I thought you would build in a showing of Sakuras new Power, before the end. Maybe in a last attempt by Sasuke and some surviving Root nin to take Naruto out?

    Well it is just an idea.

    I like this story very very much.
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  • From RichardH on August 24, 2009
    I now have a problem... the Hiraishin (better known as the flying thunder god technique) is made the way it is for a reason. most everything in Naruto is based on a very loose equivelent exchange system, you can use abilities to fly an teleport, but at a cost... the Hiraishin is set though the use of seals, making it somewhat like the replacement technique only without the moving of a different object, however, it would still require some sort of object or a very harsh penalty for using it.

    other then that, the story is getting better and better
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  • From serenagold on August 24, 2009
    Awesome chapter!!! Fantastic exposition.

    Keep up the great work!
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  • From serenagold on August 17, 2009
    Awesome battle and ending!!!!!!!!!!! I seriously can not wait for the next chapter. ^^
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  • From RichardH on August 16, 2009
    well... that's one way of announcing to the world that you're the son of a legendary being
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  • From on August 07, 2009
    More!!!!! Please!!! I love it!
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  • From RichardH on August 02, 2009
    the last chapter was superb, please keep this story going as much as you can
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  • From Yamizenchou on August 02, 2009
    It's not gonna be pretty. It wil be glorious. Nothing like true carnage to bring out my inner-self; just ask Alucard-sama
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  • From Coldstone on July 20, 2009
    Very Good. But a little fast the fight with Kakashi. Poor Kakashi, that must have hurt his ego, losing this fast.
    Well, he will get over it. But Sasuke must suffer ^^. He earned it.

    Very good writing I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
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  • From wind797 on July 19, 2009
    i am sure sasuke will add in some term that if naruto loses he has to stop seeing sakura or something but we know that he isn't going to lose to that teme
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  • From OrexisGrimm on June 26, 2009
    Good so far....yes I'm still around jsut pressed for time lately. Working a miserably tiring job...but keep me posted if you think of it, when you update send me an email letting me know. Grimworld@cyber-wizard.com
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  • From Bluedragon5544 on June 24, 2009
    I have enjoyed this story and I can't wait for the next chapter to see what is going to happen next. I hope that Naruto will beat the crap out of Sauke.
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  • From Kdragonfire on June 22, 2009
    You know I would not be surprised if Naruto was conceived and born on the Hokage Desk.
    I can just see Tsuande hinting to Sakura that's were Naruto was conceived. Probably wishes that she spank him harder. Since he was such a pain in the butt. Tsuande probably could use that aganist the council in keeping Sakura and Naruto to stay temporary at least.
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