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Reviews for I Wish You Happiness

By : bigtrw
  • From angelofhurt148 on June 04, 2009
    awesome story i really enjoyed reading it!
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  • From RichardH on June 01, 2009
    oh come on, Sakura could have done worse to Sasuke... hell, even hinata and naruto rammed a giant stick up his ass after kicking the crap out of him in my story (I also really hate sasuke with a firey burning hatred
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  • From OrexisGrimm on May 22, 2009
    epic win dude, amazing so far, I'll be keeping posted on this one, I've decided I really like it.
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  • From OrexisGrimm on May 21, 2009
    I'm still very much enjoying this story i don't usually like the sakura naruto pairings, but this one is alright by me, good work, and I hope to see more chapters in the suture.
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  • From Coldstone on May 21, 2009
    Wonderful. Can't wait to see the reaction of some people of Konoha. Especially Kakashi, Sasuke and Tsunade. (Any bets Tsunade will have to drink atleast one full bottle of sake to get over the shock? Well, make it two if she find out about Kyoko in Sakura ^^ ). Since Sakura is now basically like Naruto I 'm eager to see what she can do in a fight now. Imaging both Naruto and Sakura in a Fox Cloak which will not harm them hehe. I fell almost sorry for their oponents.

    Keep up your good work. Can't wait for the next chapter.

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  • From Coldstone on May 13, 2009
    I nearly forgot.
    I assume the last element there is will be a surprise for us? You explained Darkness, Light and Void as the additional Elements Kyoko controls. Since Kyubi has one more tail, so what is the last element?
    I'm eager to find that one out.

    Thank you again for your great work.
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  • From Coldstone on May 12, 2009
    Very Good idea. I like this. Sakura with her own fox spirit. Hehe. The reaction of their friends should be interesting.

    Keep up your good work. It is apreciated.
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  • From serenagold on May 11, 2009
    I really enjoyed this. ^^

    Keep up the great work!
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  • From Coldstone on April 20, 2009
    This gets definitly better. Intersting characters I must say ^^.

    I', eager to read more.
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  • From Ekiman8 on April 05, 2009
    Wonderful! Just wonderful! I love both of the chapters and I really hope for more. Please continue on your excellent work. Your awesome! :3
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  • From Coldstone on April 05, 2009
    Ok. You you did it. I'm very curious now about where this story is going. You have my full attention.

    Very good work so far and great idea to handle Naruto's "furry little problem".
    I'm eager to read more about this.

    Excellent work.
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  • From Church on April 03, 2009
    holy shitttttt motha fuckin updatteeeee!!! Good work I say and I couldn't help but giggle when I saw "Spirit World" and "Demon World" reminds me of Yu Yu Hakusho but regardless has sparked a great interest for me to further read this story which is very exquisite few grammar problems and such but who cares. Good work overall! :)
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  • From RichardH on April 02, 2009
    that was one really unique plot twist... I like your inturpritation of the Kyuubi's power and making it incorperate with Naruto's abilities. Not only that, but it gives a little more depth to the story. Also, ignore what AgentG has to say, if he can't handle a plot twist he can go elsewhere, this is called Adult FANfiction, not your fiction AgentG.
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  • From on April 02, 2009
    Well crap you ruined this story for me, I was really enjoying this as there are hardly any decent Naruto/Sakura stories but my hopes are destroyed with the ending of Chapter 2. I HATE the kind of crap that was in this, with the fox being something like a 'summon' animal or it wasn't evil which totally ignores all canon parts to the story. Why the hell did you have to go and do something like that? The story was fine the way it was and there was no need to ruin it by doing something that's been done in every baddly written story in Naruto I've seen.

    That plot device is just so overused and I thought you were a better writter than that. I mean everything up to that point was going great and I was about to leave a good review on how much I enjoyed the story but now I can't even look at this anymore.
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  • From promise2003 on April 02, 2009
    I read the first chapter. I want to say that I really liked the first half of the story. It was wonderful. Once I hit the sex part it felt a little cheesy/romance novel. Then I skimmed until the anal sex and thought that it could use a little work. I really hope you keep writing, because you have a knack with setting up a story, I think the lemon just needs a few changes to keep Naruto and Sakura more in character and a little less porn-like (and not good porn, but bad bimbo/slutty porn). ^__^
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