Click Here!

Reviews for The Day He Said Goodbye

By : Shaylilin
  • From ANON - April Ford on July 17, 2012
    I like your story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    Report Review

  • From tawanawelch on November 20, 2008
    OMG!!!!!! I'm so so so glad I didn't miss anything!!!!!! That was totally AMAZING!!!!!! Everything happened for them so perfectly, for everybody. I loved the way Shika was so surprised with the little party of everyone. Then, Naruto being Hokage and Shino asking him to marry him. AAAAHHHHHH!!!!!! All's right with the world.LOL. Man, I can't wait for the next story to this one you spoke of, I can just picture it with kids and all from everyone.XD(hinthint) I'm happy now, your stories make me so happy.XD
    Report Review

  • From Infek on October 31, 2008
    This story was so sweet and romantic and optimistic. I really liked it.
    Report Review

  • From oliversangel on October 31, 2008
    *squees and bounces up and down happily* that was such a lovely end to a lovely story. I know you said before, it doesn't bother you if i don't review consitantly, but it bothers me!! I love that Naruto finally became Hokage, and the new council, wonderful, they would make an excellant council. I know I'm rambling, but, oh well.....^.^ XXOO
    Report Review

  • From tawanawelch on October 16, 2008
    Awww, this chapter was so touching. Yeah, I love Shika too, I'm glad you didn't kill him off.:) Poor Shika, having to deal with not being an active (so to speak) shinobi any longer. Neji knew he needed to be needed at that moment. I can't wait for their talk so Shika won't feel sorry for himself, although I guess he realizes that now with his long hard good cry.:( I'm really excited by Sasuke's new mission protecting his boyfriend. Congrats to Gaara!! Now they can really get to know one another and definitely get more one on one time. So I guess Sasuke will be a Sand nin soon and like Naruto said possibly be married to the new Kazekage. Can't wait for next time.XD
    Report Review

  • From tawanawelch on October 09, 2008
    Oh yeah! I only have one kid and I can still relate. That was so funny what you said.LOL.
    Report Review

  • From tawanawelch on October 09, 2008
    OMG! Girl!!! Shika can't be a ninja anymore? That's too sad!! For a moment I thought like Neji, that Shika was gone. Oh well, he lives, good.:) I wish it was realistic that Gaara could move in with Sasuke but won't he be Kazekage soon? or rather in the future?? I loved when Kankurou said he and Temari would protect Gaara from their father. Then Gaara said "you do like me" or something. That melted my heart. Another moment like that was when Sasuke said he loves Gaara and Gaara said, "I'm not sad you said that Sasuke. Why am I crying? Then he buried his head in Sasuke's chest. *Sigh* That made me want to hug both of them.:) Great chapter!!!! It was also traumatic for Neji.:(
    Report Review

  • From oliversangel on October 09, 2008
    Awwww, poor Shika. And Gaar and Sasuke love each other, that's so sweet. I'm with you on being alone with your kids. I go nuts when it's just a weekend. I can't imagine ten days. Shit.
    Report Review

  • From LadySesshoumaru on October 09, 2008
    OMFG!!! I THOUGHT THAT YOU WERE GOING TO KILL SHIKA.......PLEASE DON'T SCARE ME LIKE THAT........AS FOR GAARA'S DAD......."DEATH TO THE KAZAKAGE"..........SASUKE AND GAARA DESERVE ONE ANOTHER THEY ARE SO PRECIOUS TOGETHER.
    Report Review

  • From tawanawelch on October 03, 2008
    Thank you so much for the comment on my reviews I really love reading your stories. I can't wait to read the Gaa/Sasu story you made for me. Oh I'm so touched about that!!! I love that Sasuke said Gaara looks so beautiful. He's getting more comfortable about his feelings for Gaara. Gaara seems comfortable as well hugging Sasuke. They are so adorable.:)
    Report Review

  • From tawanawelch on October 01, 2008
    Oh I loved everything about this chapter. First, how Gaara has a handle on Shukaku and how his sand fell away because he was in a calm environment. He trusts Sasuke. Second, the kitchen scoop from everyone about the way Sasuke is for Gaara's benefit. Lastly, I especially liked the talk the two shared it was so intimate and nurturing at the same time. You've done an incredible job at Gaara's innocence of the world. I love it.XD
    Report Review

  • From oliversangel on September 30, 2008
    Everything CAN be fixed by ramen. LOL. This chapter made me love Gaara even more, if possible. My favorite Naruto moment(s) was when Gaara came back to Suna and everyone was so happy to see him, and he was completely shocked. And then, when Naruto was leaving, and Gaara stuck out his hand to shake with Naruto, and he was too shocked to move, so Gaara used his sand to help Naruto's hand meet his. See, I'm tearing up just thinking about it. That was a great chapter. I'm glad that he finally realized that he is more loved than he thought he was. XXOO

    Report Review

  • From LadySesshoumaru on September 28, 2008
    that was such a sweet chapter.......please update soon.
    Report Review

  • From tawanawelch on September 28, 2008
    OMG!! When I was a teen, my friends and I went to see that movie twice it was so funny we were so in love with Cary Elwes.*pants*LOL. Now your talking about Pretty in Pink another favorite of mine, WOW!! I love Gaara and Sasuke time and I'm glad you let Sasuke teach Gaara about talking to Shukaku. Thank you for what you said about Deidara that's good to know. The prank I almost forgot about was so,so funny!! Also a drunk touchy-feely Hiashi and the PRESENT to die for. I cracked up!!!!! I love your sense of humor.:) Lastly, the surprise SMUT at the end with Neji topping and Shika having a slight problem with Neji's attitude was GREAT!!!!! Can't wait for next chapter.
    Report Review

  • From nm1716 on September 28, 2008
    I love it, I love it!!!!!! I can't wait to see what happens in your next update.
    Report Review

T.O.S. | Content Guidelines | DMCA Info | F.A.Q. | Facebook | Tumblr | Abuse | Support | Contact | Donate

Click Here!