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Reviews for The Day He Said Goodbye

By : Shaylilin
  • From ANON - Quirk on August 18, 2008
    This is a great read with surprising content and thoughtful characters. I've really enjoyed reading it and wish I'd read on it from the start(I read it in one sitting and my legs are NOT as happy as the rest of me). I'm HOOKED! Thank you for sharing! Oh, I totally forgot about constructive criticing, so don't really expect it- I was too distracted. And, a question- do I detect the possibile hint of Shino/Choji? If so, it's an unusual pairing and I'm further hooked out of curiousity, even if it's written in as a minor background pairing.

    Nice work! (And if you want constructive criticism, it won't kill me to re-read!)
    ~Q
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  • From drivven on August 17, 2008
    Finished! Now I'm waiting for more. Oh and kudos! You actually made me feel bad for Sasuke. That is a trick. LOL Thanks for the fun read hon.
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  • From drivven on August 17, 2008
    Okay sweety; I'm only two chapters in and all I have to say is 'Neji go kick the sorry dickhead's ass! You know you can!' Ugh, I really really hate Sasuke. Of course, you haven't noticed that before. Good story. Very interesting premise. Was kinda 'ewww-ed' by the shikasasu factor, but I'll live. *shudders* Gotta go read the rest. *hugs*
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 16, 2008
    Poor shika!! =( loved it and cant wait for more! =D
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  • From ANON - rest.more on August 15, 2008
    hooray! good stuff. I like that you have them older around this time, it makes it more believable
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  • From ANON - rest.more on August 14, 2008
    very good stuff! I like where you're going with this story
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  • From tawanawelch on August 13, 2008
    I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!! I love the plot, the way you did the HE's, the surprise at the end of who the is. I love Shika/Neji also so so much!!!!!!!!!!! KEEP ON WRITING!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 13, 2008
    Loved it =D cant wait for the next one ;)
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  • From heartlock on August 12, 2008
    wow sasuke really has it rough. it kinda hurts watching his life spiral down and drop all together. wondering... this is keeping me awaiting lol. keep up the splendid stuff you do. -.o
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  • From heartlock on August 09, 2008
    ouch, there's a lot of pain in this story and i had to choke back my own tears. -sniffle- but that's what happens in many relationships, and i think you created a great feeling to it already with some hope hidding around each corner to the outline of your revized characters. looking forward to see how shika grows from this experience. thank the shinigami his parents are understanding. -.o
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  • From Yuukichan on August 09, 2008
    This is off to a great, albeit a sad start. There just aren't enough with Shikamaru and Neji. I think they are an awewome pairing, no matter what order you put them in. I hope you continue this one to it's end, and I hope that you put your other ideas into print as well. All the best, I'll keep looking for updates.
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  • From ANON - Lanie12777 on August 09, 2008
    Great start, your story looks really interesting(a little sad at first, but break-ups usually are), and I love Neji/Shikamaru fics. Can't wait to read more, looking forward to the next chapter!^_^


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