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Reviews for The Day He Said Goodbye

By : Shaylilin
  • From tawanawelch on September 06, 2008
    That was an adorable and romantic chapter. I loved the part of Deidara wearing the heels and the lipstick in his boxers. I can definitely picture that.lol. Poor Sasuke has lingering feelings for Shika. Hopefully Deidara will keep him pretty busy loving him.
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  • From oliversangel on September 03, 2008
    Hurray!!!! I would rather the longer chapters, and less often updates. Working and taking care of kids is rough. ^.^ I'm glad you're adjusting well. Anywho......Sexy rexy? LOL. You are hilarious, and a kindred spirit. ^.^ I loved the new chapter, it was well worth the wait. And Dare bullshit? That's awesome. That's how I'm gonna play it from now on!!
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  • From LadySesshoumaru on September 01, 2008
    omg that game of bullshit was so funny and the lemony goodness was hot. i love neji as uke. its way hot please update soon. look 4ward 2 reading u.
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  • From drivven on September 01, 2008
    Okay, now you made me feel sorry for Dei... Sasuke needs to get his head out of his arse! Well done hon. The lemon was sweet and just a little awkward for them, which is perfect for a first time. I loved it. You made it very realistic. I look forward to more. OH, and can I kick Sasuke? He seems to need it. hahaha -hugs-
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  • From oliversangel on August 24, 2008
    Jade,
    You are one funny chick. I don't know what I laughed harder at. Sasuke wanting to "kiss Shika retarded", or Sakura passing out with a nose bleed, Iruka wanting to be a bridesmaid, and needing space to be "pretty", or Shika hanging Deidei over the edge of the balcony. I apologize for not reviewing before now on this story, but I have been reading it faithfully. I check at least 3 times a day for updates. ^_^ And hooray for the job!! I'm trying to find one of those myself. ^_^
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  • From bigbluebaba on August 24, 2008
    OOOOO Whats gunnnna happen! I wanna know *pouts*

    Can't wait for the next update :D
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  • From tawanawelch on August 24, 2008
    O-M-F-G!!!!!!! I liked this chapter alot. First it was funny with Shika and Deidara and his "panicked bitch mode". I laughed so hard picturing that. Then we were pleasantly surprised with a Kaka/Iru LEMON. On the balcony for pete sake! AWESOME!!!!!!!!! And to end it with Sasuke being challenged to a game with interesting stakes especially after sorta lusting after Shika all night. What will this game be like with Deidara there? OH BOY!!!!! CAN'T WAIT!!!!!!!!!
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  • From LadySesshoumaru on August 23, 2008
    yes what does he have in mind *grins evilly* Excellent chapter please update soon.
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  • From bigbluebaba on August 22, 2008
    ooooo Im loving this!
    Can't wait to find out about the other couples and more shikaxneji! KYAAA!!!

    Udate soooon! YOSH! :D
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  • From tawanawelch on August 20, 2008
    I like the Shino and Naruto pairing. Who's Seme who's Uke. Maybe it won't matter to the story. I can't imagine who would like Sasuke that's friends with Itachi and Naruto. Maybe Kisame? You said, "I like off".
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  • From tawanawelch on August 18, 2008
    That was an 'Awwwww' chapter. It seems like all tense loose ties were closed up and healed. Can't wait for our new couple to start their new relationship.
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  • From tawanawelch on August 18, 2008
    That's neat you have them all in their respective teams. I also LOVE that bit of Kaka/Iru you threw in there. It's nice how you make Iruka the reason Kakashi is late like we saw in the episode.
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  • From tawanawelch on August 18, 2008
    Good! Closure for Shika and a friend as well, in Naruto.
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  • From tawanawelch on August 18, 2008
    Damn! Poor Sasuke, it's kinda like Cinderella. I hope he gets better soon. He doesn't have a friend in the world. Other than Shika.
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  • From tawanawelch on August 18, 2008
    I like how you make the characters care for one another. Shika is so caring toward Sasuke and Neji is caring toward Shika and understanding toward the situation.
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