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Reviews for The Day He Said Goodbye

By : Shaylilin
  • From tawanawelch on September 26, 2008
    OMG!!!!! When I read, "Fuck you then, Sasuke...." I was like Damn, then I read just what I had been thinking. You wrote, "Did anyone bother to threaten Sasuke about hurting me?" Poor Deidara, I hope that's the end of seeing him unless it's in a nice capacity. I just don't want him trying to blow up Sasuke or Gaara.LOL I like how you portrayed the parents. Especially Hiashi, you get tired of seeing him portrayed as an uptight asshole who has it in for Neji.:) I'm really settling in for watching Sasuke and Gaara cultivate their relationship. It's really going to be a wonderful one for Sasuke. Oh!! The other Author Houseki is the one who has Gaara and Sasuke matched up. I just LOVE this pairing. Do another story with them paired up. I know I'm jumping the gun cause this one's not done yet.XD
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  • From oliversangel on September 26, 2008
    Yes I would tell you, and I see no danger of that happening any time soon, or ever for that matter.Hurray!! New chapter!! Poor heartbroken Deidei. Gaara was adorable when he got the ice cream headache. I can imagine the look on his face, and the glare he must have given Sasuke. Kankuro is an ass for telling Gaara that he would be a third wheel. As much as I like him, I hope he catches the "clapp" from Ino. LOL. I love The Princess Bride, for a million different reasons. An ex-boyfriend actually made me watch it. He first told me, "As you wish." I asked him what the hell that meant, and he said to watch and find out. Very sweet, but the fucker ended up breaking my heart, and I haven't been able to watch it again until recently. I like Chouji, and I'm glad he got Temari. I hope she rocks his world. When I was reading the, "uses for her tongue" part, my mind went right to the gutter. Naruto is such a perv too. LOL. XXOO
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  • From oliversangel on September 25, 2008
    Whooooooooo! Gaara is feeling jealous, and is getting butterflies. How cute. ^.^ Poor Deidei. I'll just say one more thing, and not say anything else about this...you're lucky to have a husband so understanding, and not obsessed with it. That's all. LOL. Your response made me laugh, and my man asked me what the hell was so funny. LOL. Yeah...I'm lucky if I get to read a chapter from any story without being interrupted, so it is hard for me to review. But it's still no excuse. A good writer should be told their stories are good. ^.^
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  • From tawanawelch on September 25, 2008
    Ooooh, so much to talk about. I'm so excited!!! I love everything about this chapter. First, the Chuunin Exams. That was neat that you changed them a bit and how there was a draw between Naruto and Neji. Second, the budding romance of a pairing I've only seen maybe one or two stories on, Gaa/Sasu or will it be Sasu/Gaa?XD I think they would be great together because Sasuke could teach Gaara along the way and also help him get to know himself all over again. Gaara would love him passionately being Sasuke's the only one (other than Naruto-which is friendship) whom he'll have ever loved. Do you know what I mean?? Lastly, Sasuke finding the right words or way to break it off with Deidara. Man! I can't wait for the next update.XD
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  • From LadySesshoumaru on September 25, 2008
    o wow gaara and sasuke that's will be one hell of a pair. thanxz and update soon
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  • From oliversangel on September 23, 2008
    *bows head ashamed* I'm so sorry that I haven't been reviewing. I'm such a bad bad bad bad girl. How are things? Good I hope. I was delighted to see that you are writing a sequel for 'Any Time The Fly'. Hooray!!! I am going to read that when I finish up here. Firstly, Dei, and Sasuke...."Then fucking cum bitch!" Holy hotness batman!!! *shivers* I also wanted to say that I like your smut scenes. Not just because they are smut, but b/c they are realistic. I don't know how many..erm...*blushes* backdoor action I have read, where they write, "a brief flash of discomfort" or that the "cock slid right in", NOTHING just "slides" in there, and its a little more than "discomfort" There is burning, and stretching, and pain the first few thrusts, and I appreciate that you just don't write that it's all rainbows and kittens. Well, now that I have probably told you more about me than you wanted to know, I will go and read the other story.

    Ooh, and if you are ever bored, would you mind reading a story of mine, and give me your honest opinion on it? It's a celebrity fic. *cringes* yeah I know, you can laugh, it's ok. But I've worked really hard to make it good, and I reallt value your opinion. ^.^ XXOO
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  • From tawanawelch on September 21, 2008
    OMG!!!!! This was an Awwwwww chapter. I could so picture Kakashi whining to Iruka to stay in bed longer.8D Of course the end was the clincher. Kakashi is so loving himself expressing to Iruka how caring, tender and loving his husband is and kissing each spot tenderly himself. Lastly, a kiss to his husband's lips saying Iruka's all his. Damn, I need a man like that.:) Thank you so much for your compliment on my encouraging words. It's nice to know you authors really listen to what we reviewers say. You have a great story here and thank you for writing it.:)
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  • From tawanawelch on September 18, 2008
    Shika and Neji are so funny with the housewife crack. lol Sasuke does have alot of things he needs to express to Deidara or they won't a close bond. I hope Deidara is up to this challenge and loves Sasuke enough.
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  • From tawanawelch on September 14, 2008
    I loved the funny antics of the wedding couple. Shika was totally funny and I could picture him belting out the YMCA too.XD I also frickin' loved their wedding 'day' night. Simply DELISH!!!!!!
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  • From tawanawelch on September 13, 2008
    Ok Damn, Sasuke's passed out in the corner. That sounded funny when I read it. Then the 'Drunk-speak' of Neji and Shika, especially Shika was HILARIOUS!!!!!! Yeah, they'll be too drunk to have a 'proper' wedding night!! This was a funny chapter.XD
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  • From Infek on September 13, 2008
    *Chuckles* Drunk at their own wedding, what a disappointment it will be for them.

    Funny chapter, I liked it.
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  • From Infek on September 09, 2008
    This story just made me smile. (And I'm cursing myself here for missing it all this time...)

    It's really romantic and I"ll be looking forward to the rest of the story.


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  • From drivven on September 07, 2008
    GenIta is not a pairing I ever would have imagined, but you do it beautifully and make it believable. Good work, keep it up!
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  • From tawanawelch on September 07, 2008
    Awwwwwww!!!! That was the best surprise EVER!!!! Now they've got some planning to do, AND Itachi's also got to tell Fugaku. That will be so agonizing to read. Poor Itachi.:(
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  • From tawanawelch on September 06, 2008
    Man!! That one was a romantic chapter as well. It seems as though Sasuke is almost pitying himself with not wanting Deidara to leave him in the end but prove he can move on from Shika. I hope this is what he really wants and doesn't wind up hurting Deidara instead. Naruto and Shino is a great pairing together just like the other fic You Sexy Thing. I really like all the pairings in this story. Great job!!
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