Click Here!

  • 1

Reviews for breathe

By : Elli
  • From ANON - ShatteredDragon on May 31, 2015
    ok apparently this site isnt letting me stay logged in so i used my username anyway i just wanted to say that i absolutely love this story. ive read it many times and it gets to me everytime.
    Report Review

  • From krissybear on May 31, 2011
    This was so sad i actually started crying. I never cry! It was like a romeo and juliet story only ninja style
    Report Review

  • From filiasan on July 07, 2010
    It's beautiful. And, I'm crying.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Angel on December 09, 2008
    Dang that just gut me! I hate to be selfish and all, but I'm glad they went together because well I'm selfish and I don't think either one would handle being left behind without the other.

    Sigh ... was directed here from your fanfiction.net page - the Sasuke trying to get Naruto's location from Sakura story... Dang! I'm a sap and the imagery here just leant that extra element - the setting sun, fading orange, - setting Naruto, orange covered in white etc... fading ... sniff!


    Report Review

  • From ANON - Yuri on September 10, 2008
    Okay...Im going to try and put this in a less dramatic way... But I can't! OMG I CAN'T BELIEVE THIS! IT WAS A GREAT STORY...A WONDERFUL STORY BUT...IT WAS SO SAD...I NEARLY CRIED. IT ENDED PERFECTLY AND IT WAS SO PASSIONATE...I FELT SO BAD FOR NARUTO,BUT THEN SASUKE...I can't even finsh this becasue i'm about to cry.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Wicked on September 05, 2008
    Oh, god. That was amazing.
    I'm crying right now, in a sort of stunned awe... wow
    Report Review

  • From TiaA on August 31, 2008
    I know I posted a review on FF.Net, but I just read this story again and once again, I touched by this story. You have to be tired of hearing this, but this story is so beautiful. It was wonderfully written, the emotion that pours out each line catches the reader up in this terrible moment and we are breathing with them until the last breath has been drawn. I love this story, unbashedly and whole-heartedly. I rank this as among one of my favorite scenes only second the reunion of Gentle and Pie in Clive Barker's Imajica. Fanfiction or not, as reader and lover of will written tale, I happily give this little one-shot story my praise.

    Sorry for crazy groupie ranting, but I could not--I don't know, I just know that I each time I read this story, I am humbled by your amazing talent and left in awe of such a good story.

    Sean
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Hime-chan on July 24, 2008
    This was beautiful, very well written, and even though the subject is sad, I'm glad you've written such a good fic. Thank you.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - lo on July 21, 2008
    Nice work, I found that really sweet.
    Report Review

  • From snnj11220 on July 19, 2008
    I absolutely abhor death fics, I never understood why someone would kill off one of their favorite characters. For that reason I avoid death fics like the plague. With that said I found this to be beautiful and really well written. I loved the whole Sasuke and Naruto interaction, and found the Sakura conversation with the answer machine in the background to be brilliant. As said before this was really well done and something even people like me who aren't into death fics could enjoy.
    Report Review

  • From tash1021 on July 18, 2008
    yes its very personal and sweet
    i love it
    Report Review

  • From BadkatPat on July 16, 2008
    I'm not a big Naruto fan, but I read this because a friend recc'd it.

    It's absolutely beautiful. It took my breath away from the very depth of feeling and poignancy of it all. Thank you so much for sharing this lovely piece of work.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - MeLaiya on July 16, 2008
    that was absolutely heart breaking, very well written though. Keep up the good work and update soon.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Anon on July 16, 2008
    This was a very beautiful story and it touched me like you wouldn't believe. The writing style was simple but worked beautifully. I want to read it over and over again. The emotions were so strong, you could literally feel the connection and love between the two. Just... wonderful. I loved it.
    Report Review

  • 1
T.O.S. | Content Guidelines | DMCA Info | F.A.Q. | Facebook | Tumblr | Abuse | Support | Contact | Donate

Click Here!