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Reviews for Sex for Dummies

By : Elli
  • From animeaddict666 on June 09, 2008
    This was genius. I'd crit it, but every single thing was fabulous. And I'd tell you my favorite part, but I'd be reposting your whole story! XD AMAZING!
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  • From ANON - Rose on June 09, 2008
    All I have to say is Thank You! My first time was wayyy more embarassing than what you've put up, but atleast it was a lot closer than most people make their sex scenes. I was laughing the whole way through this thing, relating to it more than I really want to be able to ; ;
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  • From MissMayumi on June 08, 2008
    =D

    I like number 10..~.^
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  • From Kimra on June 08, 2008
    I will say I like the 'prefect sex' most the time... just something to read to pass the time, but stories that actually allow for personality and falability in these encounters are more real and therefore more enjoyable.

    I found your story interesting, and it actually brought to mind another story I've read recently on this site about Sasuke and Naruto having inexperianced sex. Not sure what it was called, but I think you'd appreciate it because it isn't nice, it isn't perfect but it is 'them'. If that makes any sense.

    Enjoyed reading the fic! (as always) and can't wait to read more by you (the both of you that is).

    Cheers!
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  • From Raelyn on June 08, 2008
    Le gasp! Sex is messy? Say it isn't so!! Thanks for this, I was practically crying from laughing so much.

    Poor Naruto. Reading a book, certainly a plus, but relying on it to the exclusion of what his partner is telling him, yeah...boy needed to be smacked. Or kicked to the face. Shrugs. Whatever is handy.

    Perfect sex scenes don't bother me so much cause it's fanfiction, most people don't like being reminded exactly what the anus is used for, or the various bodily fluids involved. Though the paint-by-numbers scenes get a little annoying and makes me worry that some people honestly might think that sex (especially anal sex) is really as clean and/or easy as sometimes portrayed. What usually freaks me out is the scream from pain, then on next stroke scream for pleasure and pain now gone, I just roll my eyes.

    Anyways, nice fic...definitely entertaining.
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 08, 2008
    Thank You! For finally shedding some light on the fact that sex isn't the perfect experience that everyone thinks it is. It is just a cliche stereotype that is sometimes true.
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