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Reviews for The Agreement

By : Jelp
  • From ANON - Aingyl on April 10, 2011
    I have no idea if you check the comments on old stories, but I'll leave one regardless. I about fell off my bed when I read the last chapter.

    "I don't think so, but I think we ought to wait. Telling him he's going to have another little sibling who will also be his niece or nephew might be a bit much for him..." - oh god oh god oh god...
    'So in the end, everyone lived fairly happily ever after except for Tenpi because he still got wigged out with the fact that his mother married his half brother. But who said everyone always got their perfect ending?' - AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHAHAH!

    You are so twisted!!!! Your scary little mind is the GREATEST!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - reighost on September 27, 2010
    Bwa ha ha ha! Poor Tenpi! His mom... married his half brother... i am dying so much! This is freaking hilarious!
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  • From ANON - v on June 14, 2010
    i like the story creative lots of detail but the epilogne.... YOU DONT MARRY THE KID YOU GAVE BIRTH TO EVEN IF THE NIOT BIOLOGICLY RELATED ITS JUST WRONG, NOT TO MENTION THEIR WHAT 20 TO 25 YEARS APPART AGAIN WRONG.

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  • From ANON - March353535 on February 06, 2010
    Wow. Just wow. I have never thought that Sasuke could be so obssesed. Though I am curious what would happen if Kishimoto wrote something like this :)
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  • From hsosborne on November 05, 2008
    amazing story and a great, if unexpected ending.
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  • From DarkClaw on September 13, 2008
    OMG the ending is something I did not expect, but I still loved it and I feel sorry for poor Tenpi. Thank you for this story I enjoyed it.
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  • From bluegenjutsu on September 08, 2008
    Wow! What a weird ending! :D I am glad though that Sasuke and Naruto ended up happily together. Thank you so much for sharing this story! :)
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  • From ANON - mango on September 04, 2008
    omg D: i totally was not expecting this type of ending.


    I can't believe I'm saying this, but I wanted it to be SUPER ANGSTY..~! uwahhah
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  • From ANON - Kang on August 29, 2008
    wahaahahaha!! Okay, I'm a little horrified with the incestuous love. Yes, yes, they're not biologically related, but he's still her adopted son, isn't he? Oh well, as long as she's happy, right? But, uh, overall I enjoyed this story very much and I'm glad you finished it! Thanks for writing. ♥
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  • From Raineko on August 27, 2008
    Yes! It's complete! I went away for the summer and never had time to check up on this story. There wasn't one day when I didn't think about this story. I'm so glad I'm home, now I can catch up on all the stories I love. When I left I think you were on chapter 17. So I'm elated that it's done. And I love it! I really wasn't expecting that at the end. You know, the whole thing with Kitsu and Hinata. If I were Tenpi I'd be more than freaked out. I feel sorry for him. But he'll get over it just as I have! It's really funny now that I think about. LOL! Thanks so much for such a wondreful story. Oh, I almost forgot, Sasuke has some serious problems. He needs help. LOL!

    Ja!
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  • From Allys on August 18, 2008
    Dude XD LMAO!!! You totally had me cracking up... Eeeew!!! LOL Kitsu baby you came out of there, exit only! Don't go back in that way *rolls all over the floor snickering at the irony* XD. Oh your pervy pervy brain XD. I seriously enjoyed that. You had me a little confused, I refused to get too scared cause I knew you wouldn't let me down XD. But damn, I really didn't expect That! LOL *Glomps you* That was fantastic XD Poor Tenpi XD He's like the only sane one in the bunch XD. LOL, it's so the lack of Uchiha blood XD. *♥Loves all over you♥*
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  • From Allys on August 18, 2008
    And Aww!!! I loved this chapter. Hiashi was cracking me up at first, right up until he tried to kick Sasuke out. Honestly for a second there I thought they were all, part and parcel, going to be moving into the Uchiha Estate. LOL, I could very much see them both saying, "if you're leaving, I'm going with you." I'm kind of glad it didn't have to come down to that, cause then there would have been fighting for Tenpi and all kinds of other legal hassles. But OMG!!! What kind of evil cliffie is that?? I guess it's not really a cliffie but damn... What do you mean Divorce??? That SUCKS!!!! Even if it's just Hinata, unless she's fallen madly and hopelessly in love with someone else that's just going to suck. But it'll be wonderful to see the kids all grown up. Did they ever have anymore or did they stop at four?? I wouldn't have any other Hyuuga children because of the cursed seal, but some more Uchiha children couldn't possibly hurt, clan to restore and all XD. But I guess that's really up to Hinata.
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  • From Allys on August 18, 2008
    Wow... LOL, I loved Sasuke's reaction to it. The way he just couldn't believe at all. I can't believe you've only got 2 chapters left. I'm really impressed with Hinata. I think that she would be exactly so. Perfect and beautifully understanding. She's a goddess and we all know it. I always said if someone has to have Naruto instead of Sasuke, it better be Hinata. I totally agree with you there. Although I'm still hoping that they can work it out.

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  • From sweetciel on August 18, 2008
    It was my own slice of heaven. Great fic. Wonderful ending. Muuchu is my fav! He should have his own oneshot.
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  • From pumbaaaa on August 17, 2008
    AH! Great ending, as always. We always know you'll end up doing what is supposed to happen, but you really know how to scare the shit out of me anyways! Man, I am speechless right now. The only thing I can think of is I can't wait for more Sasuke/Naruto from you in the future.
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