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Reviews for The Agreement

By : Jelp
  • From Kimra on August 17, 2008
    Cute ending. I enjoyed the story. Glad Everyone is sort of happy (don't really care about Sakura so effectively everyone is happy). Cheers for staying with it!
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  • From AKissCouldKill on August 17, 2008
    Oh my gawd, you scared me in the Epilogue! I thought that Hinata was getting married to Naruto!!!!!!
    :]
    Hinata and Kitsu??? Woah, I don't think that I have been more surprised in my life! But anyway, I'm so happy to know that Naruto and Sasuke get married to each other. . .and ONLY each other. Not two other women :D Yeah. . Out of 1-10 points, I'd give this story a. . . . . .


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    I absolutely LOVE IT! And I am sad to see it end, but it's OK since there is a happy [and humorous] ending :}

    -Elaina

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  • From serenagold on August 17, 2008
    Ahhhhhhh!!!!! Hinata and Kitsu???? O_O omg.. I'm with Tenpi... thats just weird and nasty!!! >_< bleh!

    I guess Hinata figured if she couldn't have Naruto, she'd have a piece of him, eh? omgomgomg omg! Yeah... this was definately an ending I did not expect. ^^ You left me at the last chapter thinking "divorce? what the hell kind of happy ending is that?" and followed it up with something I would have never guessed in a million years but was just as happy, albeit in a slightly twisted way. Also, I loved the fact that we were able to glimpse the Quad's grown up personalities before the story ended. I loved this fic so much, its officially going in my recommended section.

    Keep up the great work. (I'm looking forward to your future fics ^^)
    Feel free to email me: serenagold @ g m a i l . c o m
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  • From Luma on August 16, 2008
    Wow that was a weird ending. xD Great, but weird.
    Well done. n-n
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  • From ANON - littleolmee on August 16, 2008
    Ah Jelp, such a great story and a really funny ending. It was slightly twisted, in a completely good way mind you. I liked how you ended it, seems like Kitsu took after his father, Sasuke, in his going after what he wanted. I love how Tenpi reacted and how everyone was with him, I really enjoyed Sasuke and Tenpi's interaction. The previous chapter about the inlaws was cool. I loved how Hinata stood up to her father and Neji put in his two cents in favor of their arrangement so as the children lost nothing. Hmm, maybe a feeling from his loss of his father when he was young. I figured you'd had Neji in the last chapter, but nothing was loss with not having him in it. I will miss reading this story, I really loved it. But we still have Identity Crisis and your new one you'll be starting. Look forward to updates on your Sasuke/Naruto story and your future work. Thank you so much for sharing this story with everyone and all your hard work. Take care dear.

    littleolmee
    littleolmee2002@yahoo.com
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  • From Picspixie on August 16, 2008
    wow i luved this story, though honestly in my mind i'm going to pretent this story was only 26 chapters cause the 27th kinda disgusted me alittle bit ok alot, but the rest of the story was great, full of angst, perversion, romance, humour, etc. and well written to boot keep up the good work
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  • From KibaNaru on August 13, 2008
    "They all lived happily ever after ... until their divorce 20 years later."
    LMFAO
    I can't wait 4 that! XD
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  • From pumbaaaa on August 13, 2008
    Ah! You're going to to a time skip?!?! I never felt that you ever tied anything up with Sasuke and Naruto. I mean, they have sex all night long, and never talk about it. And....and...and...!!! You better satisfy me. ;)
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  • From ItaNarulover on August 13, 2008
    No! It can't end already! This is one of my favorite fics, how am I going to manage without reading it! *mopes*
    But I've had a great time reading it, and thanks for making my life a little better by writing this awesome fic. So thank you so much, and I can't wait to read the epilouge.
    Keep up with the good work and hopefully write more fics.
    Good luck!
    Take care. Hugs

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  • From serenagold on August 13, 2008
    Omgosh! "The divorce???" Gah! I do not see that happening at all. o_o (Although 20 years is a long time... hmm...)

    Keep up the awesome work. I'm both leery of and looking forward to the conclusion of this story. Until Saturday! Huzzah!
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  • From kinai26 on August 11, 2008
    Heh heh that was a cool chapter. Naruto and Hinata are cool and Sasuke is all flustered - so cute XD Can´t wait to read the end X3
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  • From pumbaaaa on August 11, 2008
    Gah, stupid Sasuke. Only two more chapters?!? I feel like there is so much more needed....well, anyways, geat chapter as always, loved Hinata.
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  • From serenagold on August 11, 2008
    Leave it to Sasuke to never leave well enough alone and always find someway to mess it up.

    (Btw, I'm still hoping Naruto chooses Hinata too.)
    Keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - Nanin on August 11, 2008
    I absolutely love your story!
    You write in a way that has me craving for more.
    I can't wait till the next chapter!
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  • From Dreamfool on August 08, 2008
    This story keeps getting better and better. There was such great tension and intrigue with Naruto not knowing he was the father that I'm almost sad that part is over (even if that means sex scenes). I expect great things from you. Oh, and I hope you had fun at the convention.
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