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By : Zrina
  • From ANON - Jane_Lane on November 18, 2007
    Awsome. You should deff. continue. I NEED IT TO LIVE! hehe
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  • From Kerrisa on November 16, 2007
    Yay for hot smexy updates!! You always write such great lemons xD! The beginning of the chapter was freaking hillarious, don't ya love it when two people are having a conversation about two completely different things? xD You did a fabulous job! I'm looking forward to the last chapter =D *glomps*
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  • From ANON - yummietummy on November 16, 2007
    great story!
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  • From Adi on November 15, 2007
    so ok if you had actually left it at the point where Naruto decides to take initiative, you would have had me climbing at the walls within a few days XD Heck, if you had just posted that, it would have been enough for every fangirl to stalk the hell out of you :D Seriously, that mini cliff hanger you ever so kindly gave me during the week had me thinking about it constantly XD

    I choked, I died, I coughed and I snorted at the entire "wood" conversation, just so perfectly funny. It was just written in a way that I could see it happening, which only made it funnier, and ya know, Adi falling out of her seat XD

    The best thing about NaruSasu is that Sasuke is a pushy uke XD and I'm completely in love with how you wrote him in this fic, AND ESPECIALLY THIS CHAPTER. I thought that Sasuke would have his ass handed to him when he proposed his one time thing and "we all have needs" theory, and well, Naruto pounded it instead ^_^

    Ok so I wanted to quote my favourite parts of the smexing, but uh, I kinda copied and pasted the whole thing so I thought you might not appreciate that XD but I did love these lines!

    An Uchiha’s ass didn’t come cheap.
    “I can’t wait to own that,” he mumbled, staring at the way Sasuke’s slacks fit snuggly across his bottom.
    ‘I’ve created a monster,’ Naruto thought faintly.
    “Fuck, yes!” Naruto suddenly yelled, his cock spraying deep into Sasuke. “Shake that ass!”     (lol you write the best climaxes!)

    Excuse me Z I uh gotta go reread this chapter :D:D:D:D

    Adi XX

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  • From Madamdragon on November 15, 2007
    Kawaii! Update soon please! Their sooo cute together! Keep it up Onegai!
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  • From ANON - xpyne on November 15, 2007
    My queen!! ::prostrates self:: i luff you so much. LOLZ i read the summary, and i was like, plane crash?? and all i could think of was that book The Hatchet, hahahaha. well, the summary situation didnt sound like a winner and i actually would have skipped this gem had i not noticed it was by YOU my most favorite of all naruto writers. ::gasp:: so of course i clicked, read, drooled, rolled around on the floor in pleasure and read some moar!! naruto in a pilot's uniform is SEXY and i love his way of coping with uchiha bullshit by muttering under his breath. his rhyming/close to explanations had me laughing reeally hard! XD particularly the cheesy I wouldnt fake it! believe it! i laughed so hard tears gathered! oh jeez, and the have you ever gotten wood? conversation!!!!! one of the funniest, well-done misunderstanding conversations of all time! ::thumbs up:: i need to catch up on your B&B now. :d RL is keepin' me too busy. >:( but you are so wonderful! i wish i could write half as well or a fraction of as swiftly as you do!

    ohh yes,, and the sex scene was steamy hot! i love the "i've created a monster" comment! sasuke as a liberated, cock-craving butt-slut is so damn sexy on so many levels. i just love it when the uptight, grouchy types become uninhibited cock sluts. ;D damn, will naruto ever be able to satisfy sasuke? or has he simply created one more area of expertise for sasuke to demand all the time, and then complain cuz he's not getting sexed as often or as long or exactly whenever he wants? lol love the fic, love the interaction, love the AU. ♥ i happily await more!
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  • From ANON - Taylor on November 14, 2007
    OmigodIthinkIloveyou.

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  • From MichiTheThird on November 13, 2007
    'A vivid vision of a pre-adolescent Sasuke Uchiha groping other pre-adolescent boy scouts out in the woods suddenly bloomed across Naruto’s mind.'

    --LMFAO! OMG! That sentence ALONE is enough to entertain my perverted brain for HOURS.

    'I certainly wouldn’t be opposed to a one-time thing.'

    --*shakes head sadly* Sasuke, Sasuke...you are digging your own grave, do you know that?

    "If you’re actually wanting to have sex with me,” Naruto suddenly spoke in a low husky voice that caused a harmonious resonance within both Sasuke’s chest and groin, “then you’re going to have to be a man about it first.”

    --Oh ho ho...you TELL him Naruto. Hell, just say that sentence again for the benefit of fangirls everywhere...*drools*

    'An Uchiha’s ass didn’t come cheap.'

    --LMFAO! Cosmos...I don't know how I manage to break from a trance to laugh for so long over just a sentence. This is why I love your fics. This is EXACTLY why! XD

    “I can’t wait to own that,” he mumbled, staring at the way Sasuke’s slacks fit snuggly across his bottom. “Hm?” Sasuke asked, looking up from the first aid kit. “Where do you want this down at?” Naruto asked, holding up the thin, blue blanket.

    --And THAT is exactly why I love THIS fic so much! *tears of myrth* I love Naruto's mumbling such funny things to himself and I love how he covers for them even more!! X3

    ‘I’ve created a monster,’ Naruto thought faintly.

    --Keeheeheeheehee! That you did, Naruto! That you did!

    “Fuck, yes!” Naruto suddenly yelled, his cock spraying deep into Sasuke. “Shake that ass!”

    --*nearly dead from laughter* I have NEVER had to work so hard to keep myself from laughing out loud! *breathes* Ho-ly Cosmos. Absolutely hillarious. Naruto's overactive imagination is about as bad as mine!




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  • From aiesha on November 13, 2007
    AWESOME AWSOME AWSOME!!!! I love this fic... please keep going!!! (inside voice: yeah, that's what he said ^^) anywasyz, i can't get enough about this fic... until next time, ja ne!

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  • From Jiro on November 13, 2007
    Ahahaha! The "boy scouts helping out with the wood" conversation made my day ::: dies laughing::: The hot narusasu sex is awesome, by the way. You are a cyber goddess.
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  • From Hellagoddess on November 13, 2007
    Spectacular! The conversation about the wood...man i just laughed and laughed and laughed through the entire thing.

    Looking forward to the last chapter!
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  • From bluegenjutsu on November 13, 2007
    Hot!!! So I guess Sasuke no longer wants it to be a one time thing? I'm happy that they have gotten even closer. :)
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  • From charmpit on November 13, 2007
    More please.
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  • From Kimra on November 13, 2007
    I'm glad it's short. Because your write awesome long stories, but you also write awesome short stories... and this way we skip 90% of the angst. :P

    Eh. That's me appreciating the pace of the story... incase you can't tell.

    Love the story. Excellent work and here's a cookie. *gives cookie*
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  • From Allys on November 13, 2007
    LOL, well well well XD. What a lovely way to end a day XD. Thank you sweetheart for the update and the smut *showers in kisses*. Their conversation at the beginning was Hilarious XD. I almost died when Naruto wanted to not embarrass himself by talking about how Sasuke got "wood" earlier *face palm*. And then when Sasuke looked at the bloody sticks, oh God XD, *sigh* hehehe XD. That was just so wrong, in so many ways, I mean, come on... boyscouts?!!? LMAO!! And then when Naruto crept up on him, God, priceless. The smut was hawt as all hell and funny too XD. You really are a unique character XD. Shakira?? LOL, *shakes head* It's a damn good thing Sasuke didn't understand what he was saying *snicker* 'I've created a monster' XD. You have no idea sweetheart. And umm, ano sa, ano sa, does the fact that he was decidedly "not limp any longer", mean we get more smex next time??? LOL, Yes I R a Smut Fiend!! But um, you knew this XD. I had a really hilarious vision of rescuers walking in on cuddling nekkid people XD *snicker* but that would be bad and cause problems. *huggles u to bits* Thank you again honey, *smirk* who would've thunk that Sasuke would be such a rush-un XD. I love this, can I thank you again?? This was a such a shitty weekend *chuu*
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