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Reviews for Going Down

By : Zrina
  • From Gwyllion on January 19, 2008
    Oh my....what an awesome and funny fic! I especially LOVE the "getting wood" part. LOL! That was so hilarious! Ahh...Naruto...you're so naive....XD I enjoyed this so very much. Thanks so much for sharing!
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  • From animeaddict666 on January 15, 2008
    I think I already reviewed on Y!, but this deserves another round of praise! I loved the way Naruto got lost in the rainforest. So typical. And the chemistry was perfect. I adored the ending, and kerplunk is a perfect descriptive sound effect. The cave was just a fabulous way to end this. I really loved this story. What a fun and enchanting read.

    Also, I can't wait to read the second Sound of Dreams! Though I don't mean to bother you. I'm just rereading all your stuff in sheer joy. Happy reader!
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 08, 2008
    ^_^ That's hilarious!!! I think it was a perfect ending. I loved this story and I hope to hear more
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  • From ANON - Taylor on January 07, 2008
    Y'know...you'd think that after reading this the 10th time, I"d be bored of this fic....but that is so far away from the truth it's unbelievable.

    Wicked job. KEep up the awesome work.
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  • From ANON - lo on December 21, 2007
    That was great! The whole story was well written, well paced and never lagged. Nicely done!
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  • From ursweetheartless on December 20, 2007
    OMG epilogue=awesomely cute ^.^

    very very very very veryverycute
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  • From saint2sinners on December 20, 2007
    sasuke you dog! hehehehhe. very very stunning chapter and fun story. will definitly book mark you as an author to keep an eye on.

    later

    saint
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  • From ANON - yummietummy on December 20, 2007
    like always good story!
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  • From Kerrisa on December 19, 2007
    LMAO! Sasuke that sly devil!! That was a fantabulousy awesome ending!! I'm sad its over. but it was great while it lasted!! I love your fics, they make me happy =D Yay for BB updates! Imma definately be looking forward to reading it! With this fic over and the new year around the corner does that mean your gonna start working on the sequel to The Sound of Dreams? That would be so lovely =) Keep up the awesome work!!! *Tosses red ann pink hearts in the air*
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  • From ElfenDream on December 19, 2007
    hihi.. I loved it,so cute.. wow! you have a certain way of writing things that I just love. mhm! keep up the good work, can`t wait to read more from you. :))
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  • From bluegenjutsu on December 19, 2007
    LOL! Sasuke was sneaky!! Guess he wanted to recreate the time he and Naruto spent in the cave before. :D Love the happy ending, thanks for this story!!! :)
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  • From Adi on December 19, 2007
    la la la la la So I guess this isn’t a good time to point this out, but uh, you have 6 chapters there Z… SIX. *grins happily*

    My absolute favourite part about this chapter was when Naruto saw Sasuke sitting there. You described it so perfectly. Seriously. When I first read that, it felt like a little clip of film. Absoutely loved the description of Sasuke just sitting there all sexy but not. lol I’m so in love with Sasuke in this fic. He’s assholeness is perfect to a T. He’s just so sexy and bastardly and it only makes me love him more. I swear to god Z if you turn me into a Sasuke fangirl, we’re gonna have problems XD.

    I just adored the way Naruto jumped into action after Sasuke spoke. So damn intense the way you broke it with the kiss. I love the way you write kisses, they’re not the generic type. They’re all clash and lips and teeth and everything that happens in kisses.

    LOL! Sasuke topping from the bottom again *snickers* *pats him* sure baby, you’re in charge. With Naruto’s dick up your ass, you’re in charge.

    Z baby, that smut scene O_O holy shit. My panties are still trying to hug you XD I love that even though it was hot, it was so sweet as well, with Sasuke missing Naruto, aww, that’s your punishment Sasuke! You fill the smut with such passion. My favourite part of the smut was the way Sasuke directed Naruto’s fingers LOL!

    “Shh,” he said quietly, “we’re not stopping. But I need you to put lube on my cock so I can fuck you.”

    mmm that like for me was incredibly hot, (I will find another adjective for hot! Believe it!)

    And you put the hat on him! YAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAY ok scratch the pilot!Naruto scene, I’m gonna try drawing that one instead. :D The epilogue was as usual pure Z genius.

    Thank you so much love for writing this for me. Love you!!!!!

    Adi XX

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  • From ANON - Anon on December 19, 2007
    God, this is priceless, one of my favourite fictions ever! This story is great and I'm almost sad that it's finished... and it finished wonderfully, I must add! you're a genius dear, I loved it!^_^

    hak
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  • From riddlestar on December 19, 2007
    YAY!!! you updated :D i really liked this chapter ( no, not just because of the smex).. the end was hilarious and perfect. you really have a gift. looking fwd to your future fics. :D
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  • From PrplGrl on December 19, 2007
    ...Nice. Love it!
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