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Reviews for Going Down

By : Zrina
  • From zetsuai2005 on December 19, 2007
    I have thoroughly enjoyed this story. I found it hot and sexy but there was still character development in the way you had the couple finally come to an understanding of what it meant. Very well paced and good dialogue. I felt both men stayed as well within character as possible for an AU fic. Good writing, great read!
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  • From ANON - MeLaiya on December 19, 2007
    LMAO, u are incredible. I love your writing. Keep up the good work and update soon
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  • From Trollmia on December 19, 2007
    Man that was just the fix I needed to wake up this morning :) And what an ending!! Sasuke, you naughty boy... just "dropping" your phone like that in the water.. hmmm Great story Zrina! I loved it all the way.
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  • From kataru on December 19, 2007
    aaaaaahh.. that was wonderful and funny. story. @_@
    and still yummy ending. >_> cunning sasUKE fufufufu
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  • From gaara89 on December 19, 2007
    Very cute! I enjoyed this alot, I will definitely save this to my bookmarks and read it again sometime.
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  • From purplelev on December 19, 2007
    This story was so cute. You're my favorite Naruto/Sasuke writer and I get excited ever time I see any kind of update from you and I'm never disappointed. Great work, I can't wait for whatever you post next.
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  • From Allys on December 19, 2007
    *sighs* XD *showers you in kisses and huggles*. LOL, I'm really happy XD. Happy in a kind of, shhh... Let's not talk about it, let's just sit here and soak it in, kind of way XD. That was really, really good. Good, good, like fresh bread good XD. LOL, I feel all warm and satisfied.

    That was a wonderful ending and I can't stop smiling XD. Thank you love, for the update. It was sweet, and funny, and sexy, and soo perfect.

    Fav points - "I'd still be in charge" XD. Naruto putting the captain's hat on Sasuke, and earlier when it slid down over his eyes *snicker*. I couldn't help thinking, he took off his jacket and tie, but kept the hat XD. I think you're giving me a little hat fetish XD. - When Sasuke went off about only wanting Naruto - that man, that body, that cock. *huggles* - the fact that Naruto refused to be a glorified ken doll/vibrator. *snicker* belly dancing lessons XD. And of course, last but maybe my most favourite of them all - kerplunk ♥ *Loves all over you* ;) :).
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  • From MichiTheThird on December 18, 2007
    OMG! YES! I LOVE YOU!

    “I would offer you a drink,” Sasuke murmured in a smoky tone, “but somehow I think we’re already past that.”

    --*innerhappysquealofdoom*! Eee!

    “Don’t forget who’s in charge here,” Sasuke whispered against his lips huskily.

    --*innerhappysquealx10*!! EEE!

    “Did you just pinch my ass?!”

    --*falls off the chair laughing like crazy* ...*tears of myrth* Naruto, you're the best!

    ...and the light blue Sponge Bob boxers."

    --*snicker*

    "The last time I went down with you, we crashed in an airplane and were stranded in a cave for several days"

    --*ROFLMAO* That's right! XD

    Naruto lifted a hand up and cupped his cheek. And when he met those deep blue eyes with so much emotion in them, he felt awkward, breathless and perhaps a little stunned.

    --*sniffle* ...*waterfall tears* My heart...x.o ...oh, my heart...

    Frowning slightly, Sasuke did so only to watch Naruto take off his hat and slip it onto his own head.

    --Someone draw this PLEASE! *stops and thinks for a minute* Wait a sec, I could draw it myself! *evil cackling*

    “Have you ever thought of taking belly dancing lessons?”

    --*dies laughing yet again* Can't...laugh...any harder...must not...wake up...family members...*laughs some more*

    Reluctantly, Sasuke had followed, figuring it was a populated island and that little could go wrong.

    --UH-OH!!

    Over the small roar of the waterfall, Naruto didn’t hear the little kerplunk of the phone hitting the water and being carried away in the rapidly moving stream.

    --LMFAO! OMG...no he didn't!!!

    Oh, what a wonderful fic that was from beginning to end!! I loved it SOOOO MUCH! It's one of my absolute, ABSOLUTE, top favorites now. I BEG YOU for a sequel or a side story or two! PRETTY PRETTY PLEASE!!


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  • From ANON - kms on December 18, 2007
    Great chapter! I loved this story! You are one of my favorite writers. I loved how Sasuke just dropped his phone into the water so they could stay in the cave like thier first time. I also love how Sasuke is the 'submissive', yet he's not- he's still on control. There's not many like that, at least that I've seen. If you know any other good SasuNaru or NaruSasu stories, and you have time, could you please tell me a few you like? Thanks if you do. I can't wait for you to get the sequel to SoD out!
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  • From sakuyalove on December 18, 2007
    Absolutly love the ending. Good job Sasuke!
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  • From Kimra on December 18, 2007
    *hugs*

    I love your writting ergo I love you! :D

    I really enjoyed this story and I'm glad you finished it. The epilogue was fun and fluffy, which was a nice way to end the story.

    Anyway. No criticisms and I'm bad at compliments. But, yeah, love the story and the writing and will continue to read your stuff. :D

    Kimra
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  • From VRon8899 on December 18, 2007
    Wonderful--Amazing!! And totally hot to boot!! Awesome job!! XD
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  • From roro237 on December 18, 2007
    Z it was wonderful!! I feel all warm and cozy inside:)I loved Sasuke being in charge (wink wink):) Happy Hoildays:)
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  • From MichiTheThird on December 16, 2007
    “Preferably up close,” Sai muttered. “What was that?” Naruto asked, looking over at the dark-haired man. Sai flashed him a wide, slightly creepy smile. “Definitely one of those.”

    --Ah, Sai...you've been around Naruto for too long.

    Wonderful update! My innerhappysqueal made an appearance throughout the entire phone conversation. ^^ Can't wait to read the conclusion...not to mention pray and hope for side stories for this one! Praying and hoping a lot!!
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  • From Adi on December 14, 2007
    LOL!

    ok that scene in the beginning, with Naruto talking about how he had fucked Sasuke 8 times already had me in hysterics, seriously, I couldn't stop laughing at that XD it was almost as bad as the cat in the panties thing

    You write the best Kakashis. Seriously. and The cameo with Sakura XD!! Manhandling Naruto :D

    I'm still amazed by how much I love Sasuke in this fic. It's seriously so cool for me. I love how much of an asshole he is. Don't look at me like that, he's such a git and I love him for it! O_O Oh god, you see what you did? YOU MADE ME LOVE SASUKE! *points finger of accusation*

    That phone conversation was so sweet

    “I hear it’s not safe in the skies any longer,” a familiar deep voice, teased lightly. Was my favourite line for this one. I just adore it :D

    I completely love the way you work in Naruto saying something and then changing it, it's just pure Zrina genius!

    My other favourite part:


    “Shut the fuck up, Sai. I’ve got more dick than you’ll ever have.”

    “Only stuck in you,” his co-pilot retorted before stepping inside.

    Sai! XD

    Ok, I'm done fangirling now, WHERES MY PORN?! XD!!!

    Love you!

    Adi XX
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