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Reviews for One Night Stand

By : SasUke28
  • From ANON - Anon on July 15, 2009
    Ha! You're irresponsible and can't keep promises, just shows that there are authors it's a bad idea to trust. Didn't your parents teach you to never make promises you can't keep? When you say "I'm finishing this story no matter what" and then you don't finish it, it's on the bordering of lying.
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  • From ANON - kaito on April 29, 2008
    great story i say for you to keep going
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  • From anndragera007 on April 14, 2008
    i say a little bit of kyubbi - as jounin i figure sasuke would know about the fox and he's the type to like it a little rough at times, but after kyubbi is satisfied a little gentleness as an apology of sorts for pausibly being too rough?

    perhaps a 69 position in there somewhere as well?

    would love an updates as soon as possible cause this looks to be good!
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  • From ANON - hime_lily on April 13, 2008
    of course i want u to finish it! I want Sasuke to get tide up!!!! and Naruto should use some toys on him! I think Sasuke should tease Naruto, like he should plau with himself infront of naruto! position....i think any will be awesome! lol I really want to read it the next chap. so when ever u update, i'll read it, but please update as soon as u can ^_____^

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  • From mixedvietgurl on April 12, 2008
    please continue the story
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  • From Keonia on April 11, 2008
    yes, you should continue the story. i like it very much so far.

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  • From NinjaToadsAteMyBaby on April 11, 2008
    *blinks* Oookay, you're not a stay up late person are you. Of freaking course I want you to finish this! I'd stalk you with Orochimaru if you didn't.
    What should you put in the lemon? Er I say make it gentle for Sasuke with Naruto being tied up, a remote vibrator up Naruto, and maybe a little bit of masochism on Naruto's part. Position? I vote for chair sex.
    Update time, well if it's ready I'm all for Sunday but if you need a little time to work on it I say next Saturday.
    Looking forward to the update.
    Hugz and Cookies!
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  • From ninetailedfoxx852 on March 30, 2008
    please update soon!!
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  • From on March 30, 2008
    Oh wow that's a lot of choices.

    Hmm....let's see. Oral is good and I'd love to see a rim job. Sure tie Sasuke up...why not? Or Naruto for that matter but I think I agree with slave that the first time Naruto should be the one doing the plowing.
    It fits this fic a bit better.

    Toys...Toys are a good thing XD

    Hmm..rough sex, I don't mind a little but normally I'm not into the whole pain thing, but there have been some exceptions. I usually like thresholds though. Such as it's teetering on the threshold of being painful but it's not.

    I like it when the boys masterbate while getting banged (*drools*).

    As far a positions I'm way too preverted to really care but I do prefer for first times not to be doggy style...there's something about them not being able to look into each others eyes but if you throw in a mirror that minor detail is taken care of.

    Honey I would love a super fast update but as a fellow writer I also understand the importance of taking time with writing lemons so as far as that part goes..whenever you can get the next chapter done I'll be reading it.

    *humps and madly molests*

    cai

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  • From ANON - jiji on March 30, 2008
    well how about most of it. i'd like to think that when naru confronts sasuke about it and have this great sex that makes sasu not able to walk for weeks. you know. so first gentle. as though promising that there's going to be more of this. acknowledging that this exist, and then to the rough sex where he ties sasuke up. (no kyuubi/naru/sasu thoug) it'd be just naruto and sasuke. the kyuu(naru)/sasu can be a sequel if you could.
    and could u update it on tuesday?
    thanks for updating
    jiji
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  • From ANON - Word_Slave on March 30, 2008
    Hi- I think your story is awsome! My answer to whn we want an update would be as soon as possible, but as long as it takes you to write.
    As for positions etc..... I think for the first time, Naruto needs to top to show Sasuke how much he cares for him, but then they can switch, and I think Sasuke should tease the shit out of Naruto by however you deem necessary. I'm not much into pain, and I think the guy's relationship is too important for Kyuubi to take over. There you have it... That's my advice. Can't wait to see what you'll do!
    Slave
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  • From Jien on March 30, 2008
    Toys and whips definitely. Update soon
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  • From demona013 on March 30, 2008
    So far I likey, and yes I think you should finish it. I would like to see how this story goes. I love lemons, more lemons the better. I likem juicey(sp?).
    Lots of positions is nice.
    NO TOYS they dont need em.
    Fetishes...no
    Oral? some is nice.
    Fingering nah.
    Some rough sex is good, but not Kyuubi induced. All natural.

    But other than that I trust your artistic creativity(sp?)(and yes i cant spell sometimes o__O )
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  • From serenagold on March 30, 2008
    oh my gosh! I vote Kyuubi influenced sex!!! (Red eyes, claws, growling and fangs just makes me squeal!) hehehe


    I'm glad you're finishing it! ^^
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  • From ANON - Please on March 30, 2008
    Please Finish, really sweet and funny, plus your lemon was hot and don't have any real opinion on what you should do but keep up the good work.
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