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Reviews for Kyuubi the Bitch

By : Lechan
  • From ANON - a kitsunes ligt on September 27, 2008
    It certainly was worth the wait!!!
    And I loved thi chapter too!!! Also I can't wait for naruto to stop is denial, at least sasuke seems like he understood. Anyway even with him being stuborn I Loved it! Because even in denial he still got blushes enjoyed the kisses and all!
    Anyway I will be looking forward again for your next chapter!!!
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  • From LadyLaran on September 27, 2008
    *bounces up and down and squeals in delight* YOU UPDATED!!! OMG!!! Sorry, I was just thinking about your stories and then saw this during a sleepless night. Wonderful job!!!!
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  • From ANON - Damp on September 26, 2008
    Yay! You've updated! Yay! I love how Naruto made you write the story his way and not the way you wanted to write it. I like this chapter, it was very fun to read. ^^

    -Damp *Yay! Naruto and Sasuke are bff's again!*
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  • From serenagold on May 27, 2008
    I agree. Rewriting the chapter event for event would have been incredibly boring. I'm glad you kept jumping from past to present.


    Keep up the good work. ^^
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  • From ANON - Belle-san on May 26, 2008
    Wow. Your story is amazing.

    I love the whole inner child thing

    And Sasuke stays!

    Are you going to have a time skip or just continue with thier training?
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  • From ANON - Kang on May 26, 2008
    I loved it! It was kind of weird, but enjoyable nonetheless, and the emotions throughout were strong and really caught me up. I can't wait to see how this pans out! If I were you I wouldn't bother re-writing this and I'd just move forward. I see what you mean about it turning out a little awkward, what with the disjointed flashbacks and psychological scenes mixed in, but I think it really helped the story get from point A to point B (and Sasuke's a painfully awkward kid. Comes with the writing-in-his-mindset territory, I'd say.). The way you wrote Sasuke losing sight of the reason he sought power until the end and the influence the heaven seal had on him was very well done and creepily believable. I was a little green after all that skin-melting-away stuff, but the scene was supposed to be gruesome, right?! Haha. I look forward to an update. Shit, as an adult, those two are such an emotional, abandoned, and heart-wrenchingly powerful mess I sure as hell wouldn't know how to punish and/or help them with their situation! Here's hoping Tsunade is better at it than me?
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  • From ANON - MeLaiya on May 25, 2008
    loving this, cant wait for the next chapter.
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  • From naracest on May 25, 2008
    Wow. you are amazing! This story was soooooooo good! Lexjamandme recommended it to me and i'm so glad she did. Really super. What a great balance. So heart warming and heart wrenching with some insanely funny parts too. I really should have reviewed every chapter but I just had to keep going. They're all so long too! How long is an average chapter?!? Anywho, i can't wait to read more. That wasn't the end right? There's more, right???? God i hope so. This had a touch of an end feeling to it so i was worried but you did say see you i a week or so...okay i'm rambling. Newho, this story is amazing and you should be so proud of it!!!!!
    Cheers
    Meg
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  • From ANON - sickgirl on May 25, 2008
    wow, it keeps getting better and better, i love it its like watching a movie better than a movie

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  • From naracest on May 24, 2008
    that...was...comical gold. My god, that was unbelievable. What a great start. God i can't wait to read more. That was so fucking funny! You wrote it so well too. The characters were bang on, bang on. Very nice. I'm so impressed. I was planning on getting some writing done tonight but i don't think that's still an option. I have to keep reading.
    Cheers
    Meg
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  • From ANON - a kitsunes light on May 24, 2008
    I reaaaaally liked how sasuke stayed in the village and let out his inner child!!!! I can't wait for the next chapter to come with naru waking up and how life goes on with all the changes!!!
    But I will be truthful with all the flashbacks and premonitions(there were times were you were talking about the future, right?) things got kind of confusing, but in the end I think I understood.
    PLEASE WRITE SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOON!!!!!!
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  • From hisoka on May 24, 2008
    i liked it especially that he plans to battle the fox as a hobby.so i dont know does sasuke see himself as narutos mate or did he even register what the fox called him? well hope you can update soon
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  • From ANON - Mellie is KWii! on May 24, 2008
    I can't WAIT!!! XD But I'm sorta getting the timeline confused... Is it four years later or four years ago or something? o.O Please write the next chappie soon! ^^
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  • From Mija on May 24, 2008
    oh man I was soo happy to see a new chapter and when I read this I was suprised to see that it was in fact two, I must of missed one along the way, cant tell you how much I totally adore this fic and if I havent reviewed before I apologize and want to tell you what a wonderful fic this is, and the last chapter totally depicted Sasukes inner child being free, if the door being ripped open to never be closed again wasnt a sign then the graves of his family and him in the sun would of been a dead give away, I totally loved this chapter and I am glad that he did not go with Orochimaru, I know that in the Anime/Manga he does but I think if it had happened in this fic, it would of been to long and way wrong for the way you have the plot set up, totally loved it this way, and Kyuubi is such a royal BIOTH, ya the title says it but man she totally is one, ok enough babble, loved the chapters and the fic in general and so cant wait to read a new chapter soon, loving this fic sooo much, cant wait for more, poor Sasu, lost to a fox hehe, too cute, update soon, ty ty ty for the read, huggles and smiles Mija...:-)
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  • From alleycat88 on May 24, 2008
    Excellent! I need more!
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