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By : Lechan

From ANON - Boo! on November 21, 2009
OH. MY. GOD.
I seriously can't wait till the next chapter!
You made my day, by the way
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From serenagold on November 21, 2009
Ahhhhh!! Its alive and it is fantastic!

I love this story. It is defintely one of the best on the site.
Keep up the great work. Every chapter you come out with takes me on an emotional rollercoaster ride. I fear Naruto's reaction in the next chapter. Thankfully, I'll have time to loose that fear since the next update probably won't be for another 3 years. (See what I did there? Over exaggeration with a reference to the time jump! ^^ Plus,if my horrible prediction comes true, godforbid, then you can simply say the story updates in real time. HA!)

Keep up the great work!
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From LadyLaran on November 20, 2009
*squees* You're back you're back! YAY!

*growls at Sasuke* YOU DUMBASS!!! How could you let them twist you into that!?

Kakashi and Iruka better keep an eye on Naruto because I don't trust the damned council at all.

Welcome back!
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From ANON - Passing Reader on March 25, 2009
I have to go to work tommorrow, (it will be today in five minutes) and im staying up in to the wee houres of the morning to finish this.

Your stories teaching me bad habits lol.

I apologize now for any spelling errors, I blame lack of sleep, but I just had to review as soon as I was finished! This story is an amazing read that I would reccomend to any and all SasukeXNaruto lovers. You keep the story within the Naruto Universe while still making it conform to your plot line.

I love the way these two deal with their emotional problems, rather than having them blurt out emotional blubber, you keep them in the "Im a BOY" mind set. Which is really hard to do, particulirly if your a girl. Seeing as it's mostly girls writing malexmale fan fiction, one tends to grow used to it. I am pleasently surprized that yours does not do so, and that makes this fic all the more interesting to read.

I liked the last chapter as well, for where's a story without a little drama, and think that you handeld the characters well. I woulden't change a thing! :)

I can't wait for the next chapter, here's hopeing it will come out soon!
Again sorry for all grammer errors, (im too tired to fix them) or if I sound like a deranged idiot. Next review I promise will be more coherant!
~Passing Reader
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From mE2 on January 21, 2009
we`re missing you!! Update soon
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From ANON - AngeloflightPd on January 18, 2009
I just want you to know that I still read your stories from Yu-Gi-Oh to Naruto; and I still think you do a great job at your stories and that each chapter are long to read I just love it. The only thing I have a problem is that you take for ever to up date. You have not even up date The Key Of Ra in Yi-Gi-Oh I really want to see what happens on that story. Please up date your stories soon. your fan AngeloflightPd
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From Calcifer on October 28, 2008
This story is great. I'm really enjoying it, and I hope you update soon. I'd love to see how things work out.

Keep up the good work!

~Angel
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From ANON - Gabby on October 12, 2008
I really like this!
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From TiaA on October 11, 2008
The last paragraph of chapter six is why I love this story and will come back to it. You are created new story for the Sasuke character that provides a very good paralle to the canon: What would have happened if Sasuke stayed. Many other fanfic authors have tried to do this and in my opinion, they fail horribly because they try to understand the reasons why Sasuke would choose to leave his village and all those who knew and/or cared about him.

The idea is usually snatched from the ether, hardly explained never mind his reason for staying and then it's on to some bland story that leaves the reader wondering if the ever watched Naruto or read the manga. But enough about other writers and other stories. Kyuubi the Bitch is superior to all of them and it should viewed as the standard in the "Sasuke Not Leaving" genre.

Back to why this chapter is reason that I love this story.
Sasuke is so badly broken that it would take someone with a life as equally shattered to understand him. Kakashi has tried to do this because he has been where Sasuke is going and it took Obito Uchiha first stand up to Kakashi by forcing him to confront the reason for his father's death and then Obito's death to free Kakashi. As Sasuke's teacher, Kakashi did not want his own student to repeat his past. But Sasuke had been left too long without proper guidance that could see this.

Sakura could never understand Sasuke mental issues because she has been blinded by her own wants and desires. She wants Sasuke, but she wants a fantasy Sasuke who is quiet, thoughful, and loving. She does not see the scared, messed up little boy running for his life, living each day in terror without end. She can't allow herself to see this because to her that Sasuke does not exist. But it is not just her, almost everyone in the village views Sasuke through a fantasy. He is the dark brooding avenger of the Uchiha Clan. The perfect idea of what Itachi was before he ordered to destroy his clan. They see a romantic figure and they stalk his life, wathcing like a soap opera, tunning each day waiting to see what is going to happen next. It's like the Thruman Show but Sasuke knows where the cameras are.

Naruto knows Sasuke's pain. He sees the madness that tinges around his eyes but he does not turn from it. Naruto believes in Sasuke. Naruto also knows Sasuke is stupid, meaning that he puts himself is dumb situations and it dumb luck that he doesn't get his tail killed. I'm reading the manga and if you are too then you know what I am talking about. He's following Madra Uchiha! A man who can't show Sasuke his face unless he wants to be killed by the fail safe Itachi implanted his brother to protect Sasuke from the crazy bastard. I mean come on, how dumb do you have to be if your dying brother place a trigger on one of his strongest jutsu to set that creeper on fire for coming near your retarded ass. Sasuke is stupid. Sasuke is stupid, Naruto isn't all that bright when it comes to idiot but he knows that with him, Sasuke's stupidity want get either of them killed.

Sorry, I went a little off topic there. But the point I was trying to make is that Naruto understands Sasuke and kills him that Sasuke is desperate and lost...In this chapter, you managed to do what has not been done in the manga, yet. You are healing Sasuke. The little boy screaming in the dark is finally waking up from the long nightmare that has plauged his life for the last five or so years. I can't wait for the latter chapters of this story, Sasuke is starting to grow up and wonder how will you handle the development of his and Naruto's relationship since you put out the spolier one shot. (That one shot explains Naruto's actions towards Sasuke, with his blushing and the belly molesting...well not the belly molesting, it explains the blushing. (Poor little Naruto meeting his future husband who ain't shy and is true student of Kakashi.)) I wonder how will you handle this turn of events in the manga regarding the true about the Uchiha Massacre. I am trying for patience but this that good.

Also when are you going to update Promise? The Naruto character in that story is somewhat frightening due his manipulations of Sasuke. And I love their desperation. But something is lacking between them and it more than the other believing that they love each other. It like Naruto is hurting Sasuke by giving him whatever he wants. I don't know, maybe I am missing something, but that the feeling I got while reading chapter two.

Sean

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From LadyWolf on October 08, 2008
Thanks for the update!!! I can't wait to read more!!!
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From MichiTheThird on October 03, 2008
*dies laughing* The fox! Oh, the fox...he makes me laugh so hard! And yet he keeps pushing those two together without meaning to! I love it!
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From maggiekebs on October 01, 2008
Using the fox to break the tension was a nice move. Hope there's more soon. Thanks for sharing.
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From Mija on September 29, 2008
lmaooo I think chapter 7 was priceless and soo funny, the end was the best, the cracking of knuckles together and the barbs and everything seeming to be OK now, I loved this and I think you potrayed them really well, they would sooo be in denial and refuse to talk about anything, funny how the fight at the Valley at the End was forgiven but the kiss?? that caused a bigger rift between them??? BOYS!...sheeesh, lol, but you soo gotta love em, and the line about Sasuke saying "Dont you mean your ass?" haha, so hes been thinking about it huh???? hehe I soo want to see it happen soon, thank you for updating this, its one of my favorite fics and I LOVE the fox, sort of see the fox still around when they have those damn uchiha babies, playing with the little baby, watching over it, or its kits playing with Naru and Sasu's kits hehe too cute...anyhow I soo cant wait for more, hope to read more soon, huggles and smiles Mija...:-)
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From ANON - ubikono on September 27, 2008
Reading this chapter asserts my support for SasuNaru and it strengthens it!

I love how Sasuke has finally let down his guard and the lonely child that he was in the past. To form a new Sasuke one that is more conscious of others as well as being aware of his own feelings for his dobe. I'm glad that Naruto subconsciously considers Sasuke to be his and Kyuubi plays mind tricks with him to get Naruto to realize those feelings. The hospital scene was utter love in Sasuke's part as for Naruto well he's getting there and he does see Sasuke as family... hopefully as something more after he stops being in denial and accepts it. Sasuke for his part has accepted it seems and like any boy who likes a girl( this case being Naruto)he starts to bother and hit to get Naruto's attention.I like how these two interact they don't need words to express their feelings their actions are enough and I think you did it brilliantly.

I do feel sorry for Naruto practically all the adults know how the two feel about each other. I did like how Naruto was angsty about his(Sasuke) walrus cap. At least that broke the ice and they were comfortable around each other. Guess Naruto likes the warm feeling of sleeping next to Sasuke. The whole pee scene was great Naruto wasn't bothered that he and Sasuke looked like lovers curled up. Well not in his mind but rather that he feared Orochimaru was there when it was just the small fox who I think is Sasuke's true enemy.

Overall, great chapter a few spelling errors but other than that think the not talking out between the two boys was in character for them.
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From hisoka on September 27, 2008
was wondering when hed show his fuzzy snout again,so does this mean sasuke will continue to chase the fox around in his underwear?did he even notice his state of undress.glad they actually got outta their funk before this chapter ended,i was hoping they would.they really are like a couple or a married couple,always one steps up to defend the other if theres danger,and thats just what sasuke die defend his mate.well no matter how long it takes hope you can update
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