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Reviews for Kyuubi the Bitch

By : Lechan
  • From ANON - Mija on January 26, 2010
    hehe, wasnt that an ova or something?? a special little showing or something??? Poor thing all he wanted to do was go to the bathroom but they were all occupodo or out of his reach by nefarious ways I say lol, and then to have that lazy no good Sasu Chan shove the baton up his poor aching bum??? I felt for my poor Naru I really did....and omg why cant Sasu come out and say he loves Naru wouldnt that be easier for Naru to hold onto in case Sasu dont come back??? and whats gonna happen next?? if your vaguely following the timeline then when he does fight itachi and finds out it was the village elders but aand wasnt his revenge but what about his children??? because I am hoping they are twins, a boy and girl or two girls or two boys.....eithr way twins would be good me thinks lol, anyhow sooooooooooo loving this sstory cant wait for more and sorry for the sucky typing am sooooooooo tired, so late here and I need sleep, ty ty ty for the exceellent read, huuggles and smiles Mija..:-)
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  • From loveusender on January 21, 2010
    Wow @_@ not what i expected at all...first thing that comes to mind. Self lubricating? lol i never thought 'it' would act like a v-jay at all..
    second. u blushing sasuke is so irresistible, and thank god naruto is not such of a dobe to be immune to his feelings :D I was glad when i say this had an update *bounces happily* Now i don't want Sasuke to leave!He just came back.
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  • From Silkylove on January 21, 2010
    I love the fact that he showed up before leaving to go to kill Itachi. I hope that he slips out that he loves naruto, either as he comes or if he sticks around a little bit as naruto falls alseep and whispers it to him, but actually narutos not sleeping and hears it.*squeals* anywhoo can't wait for the next chapter, hope to read it soon!
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  • From Roanae on January 20, 2010
    I absolutely LOVE this story, you are an excellent writer! I think it's great that Naruto and Sasuke don't get all sappy and overly romantic during thier first time. It was very believable and very well-written. I can't wait to read the next chapter and the chapters after that!

    Keep up the AWESOME work!!! :)
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  • From mannahpierce on January 20, 2010
    Chapter 13 was great. Wonderful to see Naruto and Sasuke being intimate but staying in character.
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  • From serenagold on January 20, 2010
    Sasuke better not just be gone when Naruto wakes up in the morning. I'll kill him myself if he does. I will!!! O_O

    This was a good chapter. I know you don't like it, but you did a good job. I love Naruto's little panics at the thought and want of intimacy. Its something he's longed for and wanted for so long and now that Sasuke's offering it (for however briefly), Naruto is too afraid to accept it.

    Keep up the great work.
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  • From hisoka on January 16, 2010
    indeed that was the wrong thing to say.well this is...a pickle...only thing that came to mind sorry but really things are gonna be weird for the both of them.and sasuke still want to leave after his brother very soon too wonder if this problems gonna be solved with a fight too before sasuke leaves. eather way karins gonna either make things worse or better when she comes into the picture.cant wait for updates
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  • From spooksies on January 15, 2010
    i laughed my ass off at the ending!!!

    oh please keep going! i wanna see the ending! or rather the rest of this that is in that BEAUTIFUL head of yours!!!!

    miko ~_^
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  • From ANON - blasterblurby on January 15, 2010
    gosh you'reso hard on yourself, I thought the chapter was great. This is one of my favorite stories so I'm happy with any updates. I can't wait for sasuke and naruto's fuzzy suitor to collide yet again.
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  • From loveusender on January 15, 2010
    NEW READER HERE!! i couldn't tear myself away from this story. I have to do laundry and time is slipping by and i just HAD to finish these 12 chapters! lol...I can't believe naruto is still in denial, yet sasuke could have said it better, instead of making it sound like naruto was just his housewife or something. Plus he has to leave Again ?! how much is he going to put Naruto through? *is frustrated*

    This story is so great and im excited to see what comes next, so don't doubt yourself. I know it can be a bit tiring to write and wonder what comes next, but we the diligent readers are here to spur you on ! don't forget that we'll always keep coming back :D
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  • From serenagold on January 15, 2010
    "I need you to bear my children." Bwahahahahaha!!! Sasuke, you fool! You need to ease into a conversation like that. ROTFLMAO!!! =^^=


    Keep up the great work!
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  • From hisoka on January 09, 2010
    wow things get more intense as it goes on.sais too close to the truth hope he doesnt know, so sasukes finally coming back from his mission and narutos pissed somenes gonna be sleeping on the couch for a while. good thing sasuke has the other head band so he has proof that he didnt go back on his promise though i doubt thatll stem narutos anger at him. well the little kitsunes gonna get his rival back and sasukes gonna start his wooing of naruto soon too cant wait. hope you can update soon love the length
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  • From ANON - Sneakyfox on January 08, 2010
    Excellent chapter!!!1
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  • From Silkylove on January 07, 2010
    Yay!!!! Sasuke is returning *squeal* I can't wait to find out what will happen next. *looks at you with dreamy eyes waiting for the next chapter*
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  • From ANON - Briryan on January 07, 2010
    Great chapter! Looking forward to the next one.
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