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Reviews for Kyuubi the Bitch

By : Lechan
  • From ANON - fireandicepixie on July 02, 2010
    please update this story soon. i cant wait for the rest of it.
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  • From osionide on June 24, 2010
    This is a superb first chapter! The charaters interaction and personalities are spot on, very well done! I cant wait to read the rest :)
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  • From ANON - Danielle on May 12, 2010
    I hope you update soon, I am thoroughly enjoying this. It has been a while for me to find a SasuNaru fanfiction that I actually enjoy. I'm not a fan of mpreg but I've read a few of them but this one just caught my eye. I look forward to reading more
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  • From UzumakiNaruto20 on May 06, 2010
    I am loving this sooo much! It's absolutely brilliant! Please allow me to shamelessly list what I like about it and pour praise down upon you lol.

    First, I like how you have included in your story what many other mpregs lack, the one thing that is a direct cause of a female reproductive system that others feel disinclined to add; periods. Now, I have read other stories that manage to explain in a very clever way as to why Naruto doesn't go through this, but I applaud you for adding it. It allows you to express more freely Naruto's obvious discomfort with the whole situation as he can not escape it; he's reminded every single month! (And we all know how annoying that is lol!)

    Second, I love how you've given Sasuke an inner world, as it were, where he is still that small child, terrified and in need of comfort. The fact that you have Naruto's laughter echoing through the house is a wonderful touch that makes me smile every time. It also shows us another side of Sasuke that we don't often see. We get the whole angsty, 'I'm-an-emo' Sasuke but you give far more depth and a way to understand him without huge, intimidating monologues. It's a glimpse of his hurt and the feelings he holds for the one he believes can save him; Naruto.

    While in some parts the characters are a little OOC for the most part you have kept them in character. I love how you have made Naruto cling to his masculinity because he IS a boy, regardless of whatever may be happening with his body. The fact that he can then look past that to help Sasuke made me squeal with unrestrained joy. (That may have also been because I was eagerly waiting for the smut; yes I'm a pervert lol, I couldn't help but sigh happily when Sasuke got his wish!)

    So I'm eagerly awaiting the next chapter! I can't wait to find out how you continue and so I add here, while I'm on my knees begging, please please PLEASE continue it! Please don't abandon it like so many other of my favourite stories have been!
    Until then, I remain your loyal servant....lol.
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  • From ANON - cocopower on May 01, 2010
    I'm so glad your back. I really enjoy this story.
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 30, 2010
    what does the dobe think he is doing? he better not lose that baby(ies)?? his uchiha is going to be one psd off mofo when he hears about this....oy!!
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  • From ANON - Orkira on April 30, 2010
    This story is really amazing can't wait to read more in the future. :D
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  • From hisoka on April 29, 2010
    O_O that was a really fast update you werent kidding when you said it would be up soon, for a it i thought something bad had happened and it was going to be an apology about how you werent going to be able to update for a while because of a tradgedy or masses of work, imagine my surprise. narutos anger seems to have calmed since hes figured out where to place it(or since hes not on his period and wont be for quite some time now because of the news). he really had faith in sakura and them to still go in this mission even though his chakuras all messed up but hes always a bit cocky about his abilitie even though hes usually right and something happens to save him though hes usually reprimended about it later for his absolute daftness on situations.sasukes gonna be happy when he finds out hes got a child(ren?) on the way talk about hipping in the air and clicking your heels together two times(so hard i cant manage to do that T_T) hed probably actually laugh with joy infront of suigetsu for that one. lol klepto, cant wait for updates
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  • From meowkuu2 on April 29, 2010
    yeahhhhh!! an update! first, it's really awesome how and where you've carried the story so far, great work! ^_^ please update again soon
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  • From hisoka on April 28, 2010
    hot...wow to think they did it so many times all night infact im surprised sasuke could even get up but i guess that also a bit more of his determination he just wants to breeze through his battle with itachi to get back to naruto and maybe his baby(if all that enjoyable work actually got him pregnant at all that is).well narutos gonna be pissed when he wakes up, maybe he did hear sasukes decloration of love at least one of those times...or not who knows.all i can say is im ready to hear the rantings of an angry and sore naruto. hope you can update soon cant wait to see what happens
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  • From loveusender on April 28, 2010
    I forgot about this and then i remembered after reading the summary. i loved the smut, it was sensual and slow and just right! I do feel that things are going to turn out for good.and that naruto is pregant :D
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  • From spooksies on April 28, 2010
    PLEASE!! finish!!!!!!

    i......oh.....my....GAWD!!!!! *melted puddle of goo*

    *hubby looks at what had been wifey* ok what happened? she's a puddle now. *looks down* ok time to close this out.

    bye
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  • From Calcifer on April 22, 2010
    Well. I haven't looked at this story in probably literally years, and I was quite pleased to find it is a lot longer than the last time I read. I'm particularly impressed with the 'first time' sex thus far. Sometimes it's written far too... coordinated. This has an extra element of 'real'.

    I'm enjoying the way you've written this fic such that it fits well with the canon whilst adding a vastly different twist. I look forward to the next chapter.

    Keep up the good work!

    ~Angel
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  • From spooksies on March 05, 2010
    dude!!!!

    seriously, need the sex fix badly!!!!!

    yummy boys! ~_^

    miko
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  • From CodyMThomas on February 11, 2010
    WOW! ^_^ great story! It took me a few days to get through this, what with still needing to maintain a life as well as that fact some of these chapters are almost obscenely (in a perfectly good, don't change them) way. But I enjoyed every moment, and trust me, I have laughed and 'squeed' several times over this so far, I can't wait to see how the rest turns out. If you do update notifications will you add me too the list? Emeraldfairy18@ hotmail.com
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