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Reviews for Kyuubi the Bitch

By : Lechan
  • From ANON - terpichore on January 03, 2012
    Hi!
    I started reading this story yesterday and now I'm completely hooked!
    There's just one thing that's bothering me, I'm now at chapter 11 and it's getting difficult to read because of all the visible html commands. It really breaks the flow of the text and I'm about to get a headache from concentrating so hard to read the real words between to commands :P

    An example:


    "

    style='font-size:12.0pt;line-height:115%;font-family:"Times New Roman","serif"'>Why
    was he so…




    style='font-size:12.0pt;line-height:115%;font-family:"Times New Roman","serif"'>Far… style='mso-bidi-font-weight:normal'>




    style='font-size:12.0pt;line-height:115%;font-family:"Times New Roman","serif"'>Away?!

    "


    Maybe there's something you can do about it, like editing when you have time.
    But in the meantime, could you possibly send me the rest of the chapters on email, so I can read it without the interruptions? :)
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  • From Mija on January 03, 2012
    God I so love this story, it feels like Ive been reading it for ages yet still so fresh and new and cant wait for more and Naruto FINALLY said the words and Sasuke returned the feelings if not the words and omg I am all gushing with emotions lol, I cant wait to read more and I want to thank you for such a truly awesome read, lovely long chapters, wonderful plot, great humor, romance, sex but not smutty, its a great fic, thanks for sharing it with us, till next chapter huggles and smiles Mija..:-)
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  • From bloodshound on January 02, 2012
    All I have to say is... welcome back. I'm glad this is continuing and personally, i found the dream sequences interesting though I'm glad you explained them in more depth. As for our boys all I can say is HELL YES! AN ABOUT FREAKIN TIME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! A mate in truth as well as title now and the akatsuki had better just watch their arses. Once naru has the kid that is. >>
    I understand perfectly about real life. sometimes it just kicks your arse and leave no time for anything. ty for getting back to us and getting this out. ^^
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  • From Roanae on January 02, 2012
    Thank you for updating! I've missed this story so much and I'm glad it's back in business. This chapter was awesome and I can't wait for the next one. Keep up the awesome work!
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  • From ejpt9999 on July 26, 2011
    this is my absolute favorite fanfic ever seriously! :D it was so amazing i wish it was the actual naruto :) is there gonna be more chapters? i felt like there should be more chapters if you want it was so good it needs more!!!!! :D
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  • From ANON - Anna on June 23, 2011
    Please update sooon! It's really good :)
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  • From cheerbear03 on February 26, 2011
    i think you did a really good job and cant wait until the next ch
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  • From LilyEverlasting on February 13, 2011
    Oh. My. God.

    I will be waiting anxiously for an update! I'm going to have to re-read the last two chapters I think I sped through them so quickly. I was so afraid the baby was dead for a moment there. I love the way you've done this, I think it's pretty close to the characters, and Naruto reacted to his love for Sasuke in a way I found to be rather believable. To be completely honest with you, I was skeptical, because I'm finding good naruto mpregs hard to find, but I got sucked in and addicted rather quickly, and I love how you've dealt with the characters and the plot. It's taken me a couple days, but I've been reading this during most of my free time. I haven't been disappointed. Thank you for sharing your work, it's truly enjoyable.
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  • From ANON - Althydia on January 31, 2011
    Great story, I love it, and it's one of my favourite Naruto fics of all time. I'm so glad you continued and brought us a new chapter! Great chapter too! Ahou even guest-starred! I can't wait for the next one!
    Sasuke and Naruto still haven't admitted their feelings for each other after all, and Danzou might still cause some problems...
    By the way, was Itachi killed too, or did he escape? His character seems even more ambiguous in your story than in canon... And you managed to make even Karin likable, which is quite something, as I find her incredibly annoying otherwise. Well, as long as she realises that Sasuke belongs with Naruto...
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  • From ANON - cocopower1 on January 30, 2011
    I'm glad this story isn't finished. I'd like for this to story continue for many more chapters. Or at least, a few chapters and then a sequel. Defiantly asking for a lot. But this story is so good! I really do hope you get well and things start turning for the better.

    Finding Naruto in a cave with blood covered walls is by far dramatic. I wonder if Itachi is one of the many corpses lying in the cave...probably not. I guess I'll find out. :) For some reason I'm really looking forward to reading Naruto getting to know Sasuke's team better.

    Thank you for the great chapter!
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  • From ANON - ryotigergirl on January 30, 2011
    I love this fic please up date soon. This story ran very well I love all chappys.
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  • From ANON - Midnight Essence on January 28, 2011
    I'm too lazy to sign in so... Forgive me.
    Anywhooze! OMG I thought you had left us. I'm so glad you're back! This chapter was amazing! I'd been waiting for this for so long, its like wow. The story itself is so intricate and its like a puzzle. I love it!
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  • From Silkylove on January 27, 2011
    Love it! Can't wait for the next chapter as well as team hebi's reaction to Naruto, specially Karin *squeals* Update soon kay?
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  • From ANON - Alex on January 26, 2011
    Amen. I completely agree with Angelkitty... with everything she said :) even the checking for updates part. glad to know im not the only one lol
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  • From Angelkitty7888 on January 26, 2011
    Yay new chapter!!!! i check for updates almost every day! and you shouldnt feel ashamed of this chapter at all! i liked how it turned out :) Please please please keep it up? i don't think i could stand if this became another one of my favorites turned eternal work in progress.....
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