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Reviews for Kyuubi the Bitch

By : Lechan
  • From DeviousLilDevil on August 07, 2007
    this story is brilliant. i look foward to reading more when you come back. have fun!
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  • From bluegenjutsu on August 07, 2007
    Loved the long chapter and glad you could get this out before you left! I love how you've wrote their friendship and I think you kept them in character very well. I'm glad this chapter was mostly focused on the two of them and in Sasuke's pov. :)
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  • From DevilnBlue on August 07, 2007
    It's so cute and so funny... the ending of the chapter had me grinning with Sasuke being so generous. And I nearly died laughing when that fox humped... then started stalking Naruto... I thought it was going to be fox vs. Sasuke at one point... so much so that I laughed when I heard about how Sasuke was thinking about punting the poor thing before deciding to run away with Naruto instead. Aww poor Naruto is PMSing... somehow I can see that easily happening with him. I love your story and I hope you get many reviews for your wonderful writing.
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  • From ANON - ri100014 on August 07, 2007
    One of the better stories I've read and undoubtably one of the most respectable yaois. You've not degraded Naruto and Sasuke into Fangirl fandom, they jab, curse, insult, jump, battle, and draw blood. They haven't lost their indentities just so you can play fangirl matchmaker and have Naruto go submissive and start popping out man-babies. You've kept their draw intact and so far their bonding hasn't gone beyond what one could see developing copasetically. Hope you get back on the keyboard and put out the next chapter soon.
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  • From ANON - lo on August 07, 2007
    I really like this story. I think that it is really going somewhere and I like how you are building up the relationship. nice work.
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  • From Kimra on August 07, 2007
    You've made me cry more times than I care to think about reading this story. I'm almost as emotionally unstable as Naruto in this fic. :D

    Can't wait ot see more.

    Kimra
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  • From Zrina on August 07, 2007
    Look forward to when you get your laptop back! Very good story! I liked seeing Sasuke's PoV this chapter. There were a few places where the words were either missing the first letter or it was an incorrect letter, so you might want to look over it one more time to try to find them. It is hard to reread your own work sometimes since you know what is there and your mind has a tendency to fill in the blanks, lol.

    Awesome job, can't wait to read more when you get back!
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  • From despairs on August 07, 2007
    Great new chapter! I really cant wait to see what happens next.
    I know whatever comes next will be even better and worth the wait.
    Good luck with boot camp...hope all goes well for you :D
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  • From minaaaaaaaa on August 06, 2007
    hey yo! i printed off this story and took it with me when i went to the country last week, it gave me good times to alleviate the boredom :D hella funny stuff man, poor poor naruto
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  • From ANON - Lanie on July 28, 2007
    Hey, just want to say that your story is one of the absolute best I've read. I couldn't stop laughing at the first chapter, and I love the cliffhanger for chapter 2. I can't wait for updates, looking extremely forward to the next chapter! Thanks!^_^
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  • From ANON - AngeloflightPd on July 25, 2007
    I already wrote to u and send it on your email I just adding to your reviews I hope that you up date soon read your story then
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  • From ANON - lo on July 24, 2007
    That was a very well written chapter. And I really like how you ended it. Great job!
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  • From anapana83 on July 24, 2007
    First time i'm reading this story and i am throughly impressed. You tell a great story and te wording as well as the interaction between Sasuke and Naruto is superb. I don't think they were too OOC. If you really think about it, if Sasuke does anything other than give blank stares, smirk, or be angry then it'll always be OOC. No need for worry. That little moment there where their foreheads almost touched was truly kawaii. I can't wait to see what happens next. Update soon. :)
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  • From ANON - Ashlee on July 24, 2007
    One thing to say about this story: W0W o.o

    I love it!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - saki on July 24, 2007
    Sasuke a sweetie. Lol. This story is the best! I seriously wait eagerly await each chapter and think this is one of the best stories out there. Very clever and humorous.
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