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Reviews for Kyuubi the Bitch

By : Lechan
  • From ANON - a kitsunes light on February 29, 2008
    please please please update soon!!! I found this story in fanfiction quite sometime ago but lost it and couldn't find it again, and now that I found it here I REALLY want it to continue!!! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE write SOOON!!!!
    Im really curiusm, because with all the mpregs I read (wuite some because now Im kinda liking it a lot) I never read one were naruto also had PMS! And it's really funny how he has to pass for all those things, and how he seems to love sasuke but doesn't realize it!
    So... I 'll be waiting for the next chap, write soon please!!!
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  • From DuosAngel on November 14, 2007
    I really like this story. Other than the few mistake you made with the timeline (the one with the sound attacking) you're doing a great job. But chapter three's format is a bit messed up. Half of it is in italic font and most of the end is in bold font. I fixed it myself to make it easier to read. I could send it to you if you'd like so you can replace it. E-mail me at DuosAngel02@yahoo.com if you want it.

    Can't wait for the next chapter. Update soon!
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  • From ANON - littleolmee on November 14, 2007
    Great to see more from you on this story, just love it and all the Sasuke/Naruto moments; it's packed full of boy goodness. Wonderful plot and I really like how you've presented it. I hope you stick with this, I'd hate to see this good story not be finished. Take care and keep up the good work.

    littleolmee
    littleolmee2002@yahoo.com
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  • From nekochannya on November 14, 2007
    I adore this! Its so well thought... so beautifully crafted! I am so happy to have read it! Thank you very much! It was a real pleasure! ^.^
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 14, 2007
    Poor Naruto! Bad stuff always happens to him. He has to go through so many hardships because of Kyuubi. Continue please! I want to find out the pairings.
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  • From Dreamfool on October 10, 2007
    Hey, how was boot camp (laughs vindictively). Seriously though I want to thank you for risking your life (and going through bootcamp) to defend this country and what it stands for. (bows to you). To defend our rights, including the right to read and write whatever we want. Like yaoi hentai

    Anyway this is a great story. It has the right amount of humour, drama, and action. Well, it needs a little more action, but I'm sure there's more to come. I'm impressed by your talent to write and keep true to eveyone's character. It's nice to see Kyuubi be mean. There are too many stories where it is nice and sweet. I also love the stalker fox. Although, I've never heard that particular mating ritual. And I have to ask, how the hell did a little fox drag Naruto from his camp to a cave? Antway, good story and keep up the good work soldier.

    (PS I've thought about joining the service but I have way to many back problems. Been in to many bike and horseback riding accidents.
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  • From kagomegirl on September 21, 2007
    awwww i wanna see the relationship grow more!!! update again soon!!!!!
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  • From hisoka on September 14, 2007
    YOUD THINK HE JUST GO ON A KILLING SPREE AFTER ALL THIS CRAP HAPPENED TO HIM BUT HES LEARNING TO EXCEPT IT, CRAZY BEING PISSED ON BY A FOX AND CHASED BY ONE NOONE SHOULD EVER HALF TO GET USE TO.HOPE YOU UPDATE THIS SOON IM CURIOUS TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT AND LATER, GOOD LUCK AND PROPS TO YOU FOR A FANTASTIC STORY
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  • From ANON - Damp on September 13, 2007
    I LOOOOOOOOOOOVE the fact that this chapter are so freakin' LOOOONG!!!!

    I LOVE that!!! There are quite a few authors that also have VERY long chapter, but their so few. It's disappointing. . . .

    NEVER THE LESS!!!! I love this fic and I can't wait to see how Sasuke manages to get Naruto pregnant after Naruto specifically said he would never someone shove their dick's up his- - - (Tsunade screaming in the background, "THAT'S ENOUGH!!!")

    -Damp *UP HIS ASS!!((get's attacked by Tsunade))*

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  • From ANON - Kibou32 on September 11, 2007
    Hey!

    I love your story... but it's not finished!!! When are you going to continue it!!!!
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  • From ANON - Random person on August 08, 2007
    I like your story. A few spelling problems here and there but that' easily looked over. :)

    Can't wait for the next chappy.
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  • From hisoka on August 08, 2007
    cute f sakura or anyone saw that theyd ak questions,i like how sasuke goes against the red fox thats practically infatuated with naruto who wouldnt kick that stalking thing.kiba was beaten up wanna see his face when he sees naruto and sasuke being civil watch him pale when sasuke gives him that glare of his that will melt your brain into mush and explode your head.
    keep it up hope you can update soon first time reader but already lovin it
    luck 2 U
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 08, 2007
    I swear I just laughed my ass off when I read “you’re period started.”
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  • From blueh on August 08, 2007
    You're going off to boot camp? >.< means no update for a while. Anyway, I really love your story. Be sure to update once you're back!! Ja!
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  • From Zigana on August 07, 2007
    I really like the way this story is going. It's going to be hard to wait two months for the next chapter. Good luck!
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