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Reviews for Kyuubi the Bitch

By : Lechan
  • From Jan on May 09, 2008
    OMG! I can't believe Sasuke did that... oh wait, I can, but still it sucks that he did!!!

    Great writing skills, love the way the story is going!

    Can't wait for chapter 5, hope it's soon!

    Jan
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  • From minaaaaaaaa on May 09, 2008
    it came back :D yay! well i liked this chapter especially what i'm assuming was naruto getting territorial over sakura clinging to his MAN! whoo, then that look he gave her lol damn naruto show her who's the head bitch around here! rofl

    though i did love their close 'girl' bonding, it was fun

    i'm a bit peeved that stupid itachi showed up when he did with his big ol bucket o angst grrrr and we just had a naruto kissing sasuke's belly followed by them fighting, it could have all come out into the open and they could have begun their relationship but nooooo stupid itachi *pouts*

    until next time!
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  • From hisoka on May 08, 2008
    the bitch comment is always out of line expeciallly when your talking bout a guy with female hormones, none the less if fits.i was hoping to see the annoying fox but guess we wont be hearing from it in a while ne.well hope you can update soon
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  • From ladywolfTerri on May 08, 2008
    it was a really good chapter, I mean, you showed their initial attraction and how confusing and scared it made them.Sorry to see Sasuke turn to Orochimaru, but curious to see how you take this fic now... planning on time jumping it?
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  • From ANON - quirkothetrade on May 08, 2008
    Thank you for updating! It was... epic. I like the whole damn thing, even if Sasuke has flashbacks! Please consider yourself stalked now. ^_^
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  • From ANON - gryphonwills on May 08, 2008
    Frickin awesome!
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  • From ANON - a kitsunes light on May 08, 2008
    FINALLY!!! YAAAAAAY I'm sooo happy you finally updated thanks!!!!
    It wasn't what I was expecting but it was really good!!!
    I can't wait to see what comes next! And I hope sasuke doesn't get to sound this time or at least that he comes back and meets naru years later!
    And I'm really curius as to what was in naru's tsukuyomi!!!
    Well I will be waiting for the next chapter!

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  • From ANON - Anon on May 08, 2008
    Sasuke was beginning to think he needed some form of therapy.

    Now THAT! Is an understatement. And what do you mean your writing's not good enough? You're writing is plenty good, above and beyond the norm!

    -Damp *I'm glad you felt shamed enough to update though!! Please keep updating!!!*
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  • From Zrina on May 08, 2008
    GAHH!! Sasuke you DUMBASS!!! Although I have to admit his reasons for leaving here are much better than in the manga. XD The chapter was so long and had sooo damn many good parts in it that I can't begin to cover them all. It was a great read and I was so happy to see that you had updated again!

    I am really impressed that you are able to play the fem side of Naruto without him totally losing his masculinity. It's also very interesting how you are writing Sakura in this. She's in character as she was at that point in the anime/manga and yet she isn't being bashed! Very awesome XD

    Looking forward to reading more!!
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  • From ANON - fan on May 08, 2008
    “Are you talking to it?!” im not the only one hehehehhehhhhhhhwaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah
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  • From Rockyshores on May 08, 2008
    Wow, I really love this story. It is so facinating and your writing structure makes it all the more compelling. I can't wait to read more!
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  • From TheSoulmater on April 10, 2008
    OOOOh! This fic is awesome! It's hilarious, yet heart-wrenching at the same time! I love it! I especially love the way you've portrayed Naruto's and Sasuke's characters, it's all so cute!!! I hope you will update soon, as I'd really love to read more of this intriging fic!
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  • From Imagy on April 06, 2008
    wow
    just
    wow
    I seriously love this story, babe
    it's not your stereotypical MPreg
    and I'm enjoying it a lot
    I totally can't wait for the next chapter!
    the only thing I recomend is to be careful with your coding
    because almost the entire third chapter was italicized (sp?)
    and the last 1/4 of it was bolded as well
    truth be told, it kind of made the reading difficult
    read it anyways, though
    so
    'til next time
    ja~
    ^o^
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  • From ladywolfTerri on March 02, 2008
    Okay, I will admit it, I read this only after stumbling across your one shots. Normally I'm not for the mpreg fics.. but now I've read this twice and still love it!!! The one liners and situations in this are hilarious!!.. I also wonder if Sasuke will end up doing something about that fox before mating season ends or just wait it out with frustration.. XD

    Please update this soon, I'm really looking forward to finding out what happens next, especially after Naruto stayed the night!! Will he borrow clothes for their mission? Will that start any rumors about the two being together? Maybe Sakura will view Naruto as competition for Sasuke afterall? Sooooo many questions and I'm only left hanging until you update this!

    Looking forward to the next chapter!!
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  • From ANON - a kitsunes light on February 29, 2008
    next chap will be up soon? I sure hope it does! please update!!!!!!!!!
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