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By : sris
  • From BrucesGirl on July 12, 2007
    Well, ok. I've been reading your story and I have yet to review. So far, I'm intensely enjoying it, not just because of the smut, but the character development is really excellent. I like how Itachi is gradually becoming more and more violent with Iruka, and I'm enjoying how Iruka compares his relationship with the bastard Uchiha to Kakashi's relationship with Yamato. (Which is a totally a hot, unusual pairing, btw.)

    So far, I'm really enjoying it. It's nice to read a well written simple story... one that doesn't make my head hurt to read it.

    Beautiful job so far, and I'll be sticking around. Drop me an email when you update! white_light_star@yahoo.com or brucesgirl@plansofexodus.com

    ^_^
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  • From llyoung on July 12, 2007
    Thanks for another chapter. Your story is getting more and more interesting and complicated. Thanks again.
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  • From ANON - Anise on July 11, 2007
    okay I've changed my mind, Itachi doesn't deserve Iruka any more. I think that Iruka should get rid of him and wait a couple of years for Sasuke to get older and then date him, he may be a brat but at least he isn't evil like Itachi. of course nobody knows that Itachi's evil yet do they, you've definitely set up an interesting story, I'm not even sure if Sasuke was jealous of his brother or of Iruka.
    so many things happening and so many questions, I'm so glad you're a fast updater! :)
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  • From ALD on July 11, 2007
    So happy this is going to be a multi-chapter fic. I really enjoyed 2-4. That shower scene was so hot, normally Iruka isn't portrayed as someone who would take self-gratification that far, and I loved how embarrased he got. I have to admit though, I growled when I read about Kakashi being w/someone else, force of habit I guess. I'm kinda weird in that I can see my fave uke in a series, i.e. Iruka, w/several people, but I can't stand if the seme is w/other people. Anyway, I'm kinda wondering about Itachi's reaction when Iruka was talking to him about Sasuke. Is there a little Uchihacest going on behind the scenes that we don't know about? It'll be interesting to see where that slant of the plot is going. Keep the chapters coming!
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  • From ANON - Baku on July 11, 2007
    I usually don't read un-KakaIru fics, but this got me intergiued with this ship.
    To be honest, I thought it would be really lame, 'cause this is a crackship, but you did this story so well I was SO surprised! Your writing is awesome, the sex scenes are great and the whole plot you made it so cool~!
    Although I'm not sure how old is Itachi in the story, maybe I missed it?

    I hope it won't turn too violent ; ; ~ or maybe that it will and Kakashi will save Iruka from Itachi XD;

    Also, I feel that Naruto himself is very missing in the fic. I see Iruka as Naruto's only father/mother-like parent figure and when he claimed to have nothing to do in the week off, I was like "...Go eat Ramen with Naruto and stuff."

    Other than that, I really enjoyed it~! ^___^ Hope you'll update soon~
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  • From ANON - Hello on July 11, 2007
    Wow, part 4. Nicely described. Itachi`s possessiveness has shown (stating the obvious). Ah, Iruka must feel bad since Sasuke`s already suspicious of him sleeping wiht his brother. So far, the story is great... and these are very quick updates. =)

    -Hello
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  • From llyoung on July 11, 2007
    I'm enjoying your story and looking forward to the next chapter (I'd forgotten how quickly you update when writing). Also anxious to see where the story is going. Thanks for writing.
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  • From OceanBlue on July 11, 2007
    Now here's a rare pairing! Woot! Kudos! Very unique, Itachi and Iruka. Makes me laugh how Sasuke stares at his teacher in class.
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  • From ANON - Hello on July 11, 2007
    Thanks for part 3. I don`t have much to say... I just can`t come up with things to say (if that makes sense). Overall, yet again, well written but with very minor errors. I was able to catch on one or two typos of little details with words that you may be able to find yourself. Typical reader question: What will happen if someone ever finds out and/or if Sasuke finds out about Iruka`s and Itachi`s relationship? Well, bye bye.

    -Hello
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  • From ANON - Tiffany on July 10, 2007
    Awesome story very interesting!
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  • From ANON - Hello on July 10, 2007
    The second chapter already out? Well, not that I`m complaining. Itachi and Iruka, wow... you make it sound very hot. Yet again, well written and this chapter had a humorous ending to it. I especially like the way at how horrified Iruka seemed when he felt Itachi harden and ready for a second go and that Itachi pleaded... nice. Just one thing I`d like to point out: ```See, you're already this hard.` Iruka murmured.`` I think you mean Itachi and not Iruka. =)

    -Hello

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  • From ANON - Anise on July 10, 2007
    I leave you a review for chapter 1 go away for awhile and when I come back there's already chapter 2, now I remember why I liked reading your stories! :)
    About the massacre I'm pretty sure that Itachi was 13 when he murdered his family and Sasuke was 8 at the time. At the beginning of the series Sasuke is 12/13, Itachi 18 and Iruka 23, if these are the ages you're imagining them to be we'll just pretend that the story is AU and the massacre never happened or that it just hasn't happened yet. I'm sorry for rambling on sometimes I tend to do that, I'm not trying to pick the story apart (please don't think that) I'm actually really looking forward to it!
    I loved ch. 2, the smut was very hot even if I pictured Iruka being a little more agressive but then who can blame him when he's got Itachi after him, maybe he should try pinning Itachi to the bed for a change ;) And Sasuke with a crush that's very cute, I look forward to seeing how this all plays out!
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  • From I4eather on July 10, 2007
    I'm so happy!! This is great so far! Not sure if you meant to do it, but I was picturing the wrong Uchiha from the beginning. In any case, it was a fun surprise for me. I can say I never thought about this pairing, but damn, that's hot. Love Iruka as uke, and you write him so well. I can't tell you how exciting it was to see 2 chapters already! Please continue, this is really hot (as usual). I wonder if the fact that Itachi shares everything with his brother will lead to any ... how do you say... ItaSasuIru??? XDDD But no matter what you write I will dance with joy!
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  • From ANON - Anise on July 10, 2007
    What a different pairing I actually had thought it was Sasuke (iru/sas is a fav pairing) at first, although now that I think about it, Sasuke wouldn't be that forward. I was wondering how old they were here and is it really possible for Iruka to have taught Itachi, there's only a five year age difference. I suppose it doesn't matter though since Itachi is also supposed to be a murderer and out of the village, so I guess will just pretend none of that happened and enjoy the smut!
    It was a fun story, I look forward to reading more of your stuff :)
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 09, 2007
    rare pairs are always enjoyable! =) will there be a part 2? thanks for sharing and hope to read more of your works soon!
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