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By : sris
  • From ANON - Anise on July 20, 2007
    (ch12) Loved this chapter, it was just all cute and sweet with some really delicious smut thrown in for good measure. The way Kakashi was very understanding and let Iruka take the lead and do things at his pace showed just how much he cares about Iruka-another great chapter! :)
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  • From ANON - ren on July 20, 2007
    omfg. Itachi is going to be pissed. But too bad that he can't treat Iruka like he deserves!
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  • From MeishaTakahashi on July 19, 2007
    Great story. ^.^ Thanks to you I've gotten back into reading Naruto fanfictions. Loved the last chapter the best though. It was so cute and smexy!

    On a completely different note I hate you for updating so quickly. XD No I don't really hate you. I just wish I could update as quickly as you do. How do you do it?!
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  • From Zigana on July 19, 2007
    Iruka so deserves this man. Itachi is such scum.
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  • From sadisticsymphonies on July 19, 2007
    Awww... how cute. I liked this story. I've always enjoyed both angst and cuteness, especially when together, just because of how twisty it makes most things. This was really good. Also, about Kakashi not watching the movie: THANK YOU. It's always the person whose POV the story is currently from who doesn't watch the movie, but you switched things up. THANK YOU. Something different, yay!


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  • From sadisticsymphonies on July 19, 2007
    Well, we all knew Itachi was twisted. Or is, I suppose.
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  • From ALD on July 19, 2007
    You know I'm happy that the story has evolved to a Kakashi/Iruka pairing. I think you've portrayed Iruka really well in the last chapter. Very human, how he feels all giddy about Kakashi. I may be off the mark here, but when you mentioned the new couch, I thought Iruka had bought a new one b/c of what happened on the old one. I was just waiting for a little touching moment about the whole incident. Like Iruka needing some kind of emotional reassurance from Kakashi about what happened. But maybe them not even mentioning/dwelling on it is testament to how much they've, especially Iruka, have dealt w/what happened and moved on. Or maybe I'm just reading too much in to it. Anyway, the last couple of chapters have been good, as always can't wait for the next one.
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  • From ANON - Anise on July 18, 2007
    It's so nice to see Iruka happy again and those two are just so sweet and fluffy together-of course the smut is really hot too! ;)
    I know I haven't reviewed in a couple of chapters (sorry) but they all would have said the same thing, something along the lines of what a wonderful story this is and how much I'm enjoying reading it! I also thought you did a really great job of developing the relationship between Iruka and Kakashi :)
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  • From BrucesGirl on July 18, 2007
    God they're so awesome together. I'm jsut waiting for the letdown. Itachi has to show back up eventually. Wouldn't that be some shit if Iruka had known about Itachi's intentions to kill his clan before it happened? Yikes.

    Anyway, I can't wait for the next chapter. I'm preparing for angst!
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  • From llyoung on July 18, 2007
    That was very nice. Kakashi and Iruka are one of my favorite pairings (I think I've told you that already but oh well never hurts to repeat it).
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  • From BrucesGirl on July 18, 2007
    Wow. The smut? Jesus... Incredibly good. I really enjoyed seeing more of Kakashi in this chapter as he should be and as he seems to me in the manga. There isn't anything that divides him really from say Naruto or Sasuke, and that's becasue he chooses to be that open with them as a result of their relationships with each other. I see him keeping that same warmth and enthusiasm about him with Iruka, and you've done an excellent job with it.

    I can't wait for the next chapter!

    ^_^
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  • From llyoung on July 17, 2007
    I really like Iruka and Kakashi together (don't know if they will stay that way but I'll enjoy it while they are). Thanks.
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  • From ANON - Hello on July 17, 2007
    Although I'm not disappointed with this... it's just... that it seems to be a bit too good for Iruka right now. Itachi is probably going to show up soon and things will fall apart, right? Especially for Iruka... or is it just my way of thinking something bad is going to happen, soon.

    -Hello
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  • From BrucesGirl on July 17, 2007
    That was an awesome chapter. You are eerily good at writing rape victims. It's really heart wrenching to watch everything that's happening to Iruka, but I love the fact that Kakashi isn't afraid to make Iruka face his fears and move on from it. I think it makes for a potentially incredible relationship between the two of them, emotionally and physically.

    I'm still at a loss on how you write Kakashi. He seems so kind and compassionate, and yet, he's holding so much back from Iruka. He still hasn't given an explanation as to why he wants to help Iruka (even though we all KNOW why), and he hasn't shown any emotions to the Chuunin except his stoic kindness.

    I really can't wait for you to develop Kakashi more. There's a doushinji out called Water. Have you heard of it? It's a KakaIru yaoi, and it's really beautiful. I think you should read it if you haven't seen it. You can always email me for more details.

    Great chapter! ^^

    BG
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  • From ALD on July 16, 2007
    The last two chapters have been good. Poor Iruka though, I felt so bad for him when he approached Kakashi in the midddle of the night, you almost have to pity him and the state of mind he's in. The last part of chp.9 was so sad though. The whole point is that Iruka's been alone for so long, and now the only person that's been there for him has raped him, and then his only friend through this tells him he has to be alone again. I don't think Kakashi fully understands the effect those words could have on Iruka. If I were in this situation, I don't think I could help but think that my whole desire to not feel alone brought on all this drama. Hopefully things will look up after they hit rock bottom, which I know is gonna happen as soon as Itachi reappears. Good job!
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