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By : sris
  • From llyoung on July 16, 2007
    Poor Iruka. I wonder who else (and how many) Itachi has done this to.
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  • From ANON - Hello on July 16, 2007
    Poor Iruka, trying to find an excuse as to why Itachi behaves the way he does and he, himself, admits that deep down he knows that Kakashi is right about Itachi. Ah, what to do now...

    -Hello
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  • From ANON - Anise on July 15, 2007
    why must you torture Iruka so, it seems in a lot of the stories I've read recently have been rather harsh on him. although I'm glad you gave him a good friend like Kakashi but I can't help but wonder if having him around won't make Itachi angry and even more difficult to deal with. i like that you're showing Iruka having to deal with his feelings and emotions, too often in stories it seems authors have characters traumitized one minute and fine the next, I like how you're trying to have Iruka deal with everything that's happened to him.
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  • From BrucesGirl on July 15, 2007
    God, that was so good. I love how Kakashi stays with Iruka no matter what, never giving him his opinion or advice on how to handle the situation. I can tell that he really loves Iruka in a silent way, and that makes the fic just that much better. I almost wanted him to apply the medicines to Iruka myself, but I think you wrote it right. Kakashi won't take that chance with him right now after all he's been through.

    ^_^ I love that you're updating so regularly. Bravo on a great fic. -waits for more patiently-
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  • From BrucesGirl on July 15, 2007
    Gah! Poor Iruka wanting to be alone. Unfortunately, its' that way for a lot of rape victims. They isolate themselves away from everyone that cares about them. Great writing on your part to pick that up. Beautiful chapter. I love how Iruka just wants Kakashi to leave, and Kakashi is just watching him.
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  • From ALD on July 14, 2007
    Glad to see that Iruka has someone to rely on, even if he doesn't see Kakashi as someone he can confide in yet. Poor Iruka, I really hope Itachi gets his ass kicked for this. I like how you portrayed Kakashi in this chapter. Helpful and just being there for Iruka, not trying to pry into his business. Can't wait for the next chapter, I have to say that I was happy Iruka got some rest in this chapter.
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  • From llyoung on July 14, 2007
    So glad that Kakashi helped Iruka hopefully Kakashi (or someone) will continue to help him. Thanks for another chapter.
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  • From ANON - Hello on July 14, 2007
    About you expecting that no one wants to read angsty chapters (even stories in general)... well, I guiltily confess that I'm one of those people who enjoy reading these types of parts. I find that it's nice to find some other emotion than just happiness, life doesn't always have a bright side, eventually it'll get better. Agh, Iruka's sad...

    -Hello
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  • From BrucesGirl on July 14, 2007
    Damn, that was emotionally punishing. I love how you're giving Itachi the 'creepy factor' as it was one of the things that tipped off the Uchiha clan that he was going insane in the manga.

    Can't wait for the next update, babe! Great job! -gives five stars-
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  • From ANON - Jirian on July 14, 2007
    ahh poor iruka :'( good story so far i was hoping to see kakashi x iruka @_@ i guess not TT.TT then again its ur story :P
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  • From ANON - Hello on July 13, 2007
    Wow, part 6... very emotional. I hope Iruka finds something more effective in keeping Itachi away. I wonder what Itachi did... can`t help but have multiple thoughts on what he could`ve done with Sasuke.

    -Hello
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  • From ANON - Anise on July 13, 2007
    I wish Itachi would just murder his family and leave, seriously that was just too heartbreaking, although now i can't help but wonder what he's been doing to his brother. As much as I hate the Iruka abuse I just can't stop reading this, I'm always waiting for the next chapter :)
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  • From ALD on July 13, 2007
    A harsh, but good chapter. I actually don't know how this chapter made me feel. I don't really mind the rape scene, it's just that I feel bad for Iruka and I'm not sure where Itachi is coming from. I figured he really liked Iruka, but then turns around and does something like this. It almost seems that he's only doing stuff w/Iruka to make Sasuke jealous/obediant; sex w/the cute sensei is just an added bonus. Hope the upcoming chapters shed some light on what is going on. I could assume that Itachi is going through his psychosis that led up to the events in the anime/manga, but I don't want to assume that is what you had in mind plot wise. So update soon please. :)
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  • From llyoung on July 13, 2007
    Poor Iruka.

    Looking forward to the next chapter so I can see what happens next. Thanks
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  • From ALD on July 12, 2007
    I thought something was up, but I thought that Sasuke had a crush on Iruka? I also thought that maybe Itachi was taking advantage of his brother, but it seems that Sasuke has some issues. Of course I loved the little scene w/Kakashi. Can't wait for the next chapter.
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