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Reviews for The Id and the Super-ego

By : Adi
  • From marquesgue1 on August 10, 2007
    loooooooooooooooooool Naruto and the ramen monster was juust too funny looool XD trust Naruto to have those kinds of dreams loool. I loved hearing about Sasuke's 'soul seraching' lool, heh and the way naruto mistook him for a monster and seemed to be about to attack him with the ramen loooooool :D Naruto's too great - honestly, you just make me love him more and more. The smut though *smirks* heh GO NARUTO!!! He deserved to get some after Sasuke left him all high and dry the last time - I felt damn deprived when he did that you know so - good to read about Naruto getting a nice peace of ass ^_6 can't wait for the next one ^_^

    Hina xXxx
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  • From ANON - sharingan no miko on August 10, 2007
    oh yeah! i really, really liked sasuke as uke!! i'm surprised with myself :D
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  • From ANON - sharingan no miko on August 10, 2007
    you are amazing. full of smut and hilarity. thank you sooo much :D
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  • From ANON - MeLaiya on August 10, 2007
    LMAO. I absolutely love your style man. Loved this. Keep up the good and keep'em com'n eh
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  • From on August 10, 2007
    Oh wowwie!!! I reallly enjoyed this! Sasuke as uke and *this* appealing... that's my very first time and I must say I ADORED...

    I love your devious Naruto... I'd never imagined that he could make such a sexy seme...

    And I must say, I laughed like CRAZY in the beginning... especially with Orochimaru thinking he was a snake and swallowing a rodent whole... oh god.. *shudders*

    Wonderful!!!!
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  • From narutovixen383 on August 10, 2007
    Hahahaha, I must say I love this story so far!! I was wondering if anything would come up since Sasuke was on the photocopier and I'm glad that it did! The entire chapter definitely made my night!! Mad props to you and keep up the excellent work!
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  • From despairs on August 09, 2007
    “Is that a photocopy of my butt on the wall with a bulls eye painted on it?!”

    LMMFAO!! That was simply priceless...what a way to end the story lol i love it.
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  • From ANON - fangirl on August 09, 2007
    that was great...I was looking forward to your update. Surprisingly adorable in a fabulously smutty kind of way. Hope to see more from you!
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  • From ANON - Anaheyla on August 09, 2007
    Yay! Another chapter. Ssssssseeeeeeeexxx!!!

    Sex is fun, especially when it's between Naruto and SasUKE. ^_^
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  • From llyoung on August 09, 2007
    That was great and we found out what Naruto did with the photocopy.
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  • From Zrina on August 09, 2007
    hrmm public smoochies huh? WOOT!! And I would have to say that I think Sasuke has the happy crack this time!!! Loved it, but of course you know that already!! I like that Sasuke finally removed the rod out from his ass. And replaced it with Naruto's! I also like how Naruto approached the oral sex... Sasuke owed him big time for leaving him high and dry last time!!

    All in all Wonderful and Smutilicious!!!

    /hugs
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  • From Henki8 on August 05, 2007
    Of course there will be a third and a fourth and a fifth part!

    Anyhow, just wanted to point out a small but disturbing error in this chapter: 'Sasuke sighed dreamily, a hand automatically reaching up to wipe away any saliva.' I think you ment to say SASKURA
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  • From ANON - Makayla on July 15, 2007
    SQQQUUUUEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! This is so GOOD!!! I LOVE IT!!!! CAPS LOCK CAN'T FULLY SHOW MY FANGIRLY GLEE AT READING THIS!!!!!! I wait eagerly for the next part (please write more soon)
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  • From Zrina on July 14, 2007
    /takes photocopy of Sasu's but and makes bull's eye centered you-know-where.. hands it to Naruto and tells hiim it is for target practice!!

    Love it, sweety!! But you knew that already!! Sasuke is going to get a bad rep for being a tease. He always comes and goes!! Poor Naurto is going to have permanent blue balls!

    Can't wait for the cough climax cough!! :D
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  • From ANON - SpacePirateDoll on July 14, 2007
    Oh, man what a CLIFFHANGER! >_
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